Autumn Love
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Love is ALWAYS in the AIR! :)
Autumn Love
Unravelling pleasures seekers of kind
Bring live pleasures vivid time
Whom is my measure, are you of one mind?
Smiles placed retribution such grace
Crisp breeze, gale speed
Soft, smooth enticement of two
Sweeps of angelic whispers
Yearning warmth of you
Vivid colours abound, depth your gracious sound
Mind explosion, when woven
Thundersome bound
Hot embers flare leaves wander burning
Set Grace solitude
Of
You
Heat bursts through my eyes
As you capitalize
You place in my core
Helpless sleepless eyes
Days not speaking
Only unrest
Years of knowing
Our hearts have been sewn in as a crest
So divine our journey goes
Though apart forever we grow
Grateful sage of timeless age
So be you
So be me
Ageless serenity
Our blazing saddles never cease
Autumn art, us painted in place.
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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s, people starting fires and playing with explozives like that in the forest buttt naked is a crime I think..LOL LOL
I sense deep passion there though!:D
Great poetry there,all stimulating like, thanks for sharing!:3
Nice poetry there. Also, I love that picture of the kiss with the light shining through it. How romantic!
Ah, I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s, you did it again!!! Another great, great poem! Beautiful pictures, too, and the Billy Holiday, haven't heard that one...
Lovely! Thank you.
Robert ~ Thank you...greatly appreciated! :)
Warren ~ Ahhh, can't get anything passed you, eh? Great insight! :D
advisor4qb ~ Thank you so much... That photo, hmmmmm....pure radiant bliss, I say. :D
Paradise7~ Thank you for such a kind comment :) Yeah, the Billie Holiday tune I have not heard in a long while, yet the Autumn Breeze seems appropriate, I think. Ahhh. ;)
This poem was excellently woven together and it flowed with a rythmn of thought. I like it a lot.
Lovely and complex. Adventurously written! Thank you, Invictus
wesleycox ~ Thanks so much. I appreciate your feedback! :)
Jess~ Thank you, your views on my work really mean a lot! :)
A refreshing poem Invictus and cuddly cuddly :)
When one has tasted honey he knows what the angels eat. This is a whole hive dear. Love it.
ralwus ~ Thank you... so nice to here that...hmmm...maybe I shall listen for the buzzz! :D *sigh*
It is definitely that time of year! I have been reading such marvelous written work of the coming Autumn. Adding your work to the fantastic mix of words and I have mentally feasted as if it were Thanksgiving already!
AIDY ~ Thanks so much for the lovely thoughts... Yes, I agree there is some marvelous work out. This is my favorite time of year! :)
Oh, this is new for me really??? Thanks a lot, love you so much too :) My crafty poet........
Beautiful poem and great pictures anxious for more. lol's
Poetwopoem ~ Thank you very much =) Thanks for coming by...
O.k. I like your poem, but the video got me as a fan. Those oldie but goodie slow songs always woo me, although I was not born in that era...Keep up the great work!
Thanks, Money Glitch! :) Yeah, sometimes the songs are better are grasping the feeling.
hey get writing this place needs your input....
Thanks dear... =)
Robert Ballard says:
3 months ago
A great poem, I enjoyed it tremendously.
Robert Ballard