BECOMING A LIVING METAPHOR
59its okay to be a rebel even when you're mature and settled
Im tired
of worn out metaphors
the road so long
like rows of corn
BORING
I want new
hell id like to be used
in a metaphor or two
even if that means
next time
my mom asked
if everyone was jumping off a bridge
well ma i hate to break it to you
but id start the revolution
and be the first in the river
and id read the next poem
from a friend
saying my stomach dropped
like J. Stump from a bridge
I might have
attempted suicide
stamped big on my hospital file
and yeah life insurance would go up
but what price can be put
on being a living metaphor
the trees in the forrest
like J.Stump motionless
when he hit the water
after leaping from that bridge
what an animal
id be pumped
finding other metaphors to become
running from cops
in a beat up chevy nova
my heart raced
ill read in bold letters
like J.Stump on a highway chase
now thats what im about
so i challenge everyone
no more metaphors comparing the sun
to yellow crayons in a box
instead compare the sun
to that time you got lit on fire
whatever the case
don't be afraid
scars heal to some extent
and a good lawyer
well i guess that could be expensive
but there is no price tag
on good old life experience
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Big J
We all swim in metaphors and we can't help it. They make explaining things easier, don't you think? Specially when we become metaphors.
I adore metaphors, although mine are often twisted. Next time I create one, I'll wonder, "would J approve?"
metaphors are great
they're a living thing
and yes i think a lot of them are recycled and reused
thats why its refreshing to me to see new ones or odd ones
this was just me being tired of reading the same old idea's recycled
So J. check out my lollipop poem and tell me if its recycled.












Jewels says:
7 months ago
If I stepped out of the box, would I just be stepping into another box? Has every experience been given a metaphor? Is what we create really our own creation or a recycled thought with new paint?