Broken heart poem

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By bigerdan


A Broken Heart.

It Happens

I've never felt so numb before

I guess I've had enough

It could be a shock as well to realize how shallow our love is..

My love is fading,

I can't feel anything anymore

No, I don't hate him

Deep inside i know i still care..

The special feeling fades

As he revealed his true colors to me

I didn't know how unimportant I am to him,

until that day

I've never felt so embarrassed and little in my whole life

I don't know if there's still a chance for us,

only time will tell

And you know to my surprise, in just one day,

it happens...

just like that...

My love just fades away...

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Mr Nice  says:
2 years ago

Really nice poem i like it very much. Keep up the good work.

Cincinnati  says:
2 years ago

A poem that I will never forget.

melissa  says:
2 years ago

I've been thourgh hell the boy that i loved with all my heart doesnt want me around anymore he is only my my best friend but i have a lot of feeling for him he broke my heart into a 1000 parts

fishnets  says:
2 years ago

i know how unrequieted love feels. "we are the walking wounded. the disabled without parking space." (quoted from the holiday). I've been in love with the same girl for 3 years now. after the first year of our friendship, i told her. but she got angry with me. we didnt talk for another year. then we started being civil and tried talking to each other. we're friends again now. but i still feel the same for her. as time passed i only loved her more. every part of me surrenders at the mention of her name. and she doesnt know that i still feel this way for her. and it breaks my heart to the size of dust particles.

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commentonthis7  says:
2 years ago

nice poem

miss broken heart  says:
2 years ago

i loved the poem soo much nd i loved my bf even more but he left me alone he hurted me he broke my heart i feel lost nd dead

alyssa  says:
2 years ago

i had a boyfriend named kyle but he dumped me for this girl i mean monkey named page so that will be great if you read that poem to him

chloe  says:
17 months ago

it sounds like mum and dad

Neelum  says:
14 months ago

I read ur poem n its a hrtfelt 1. I undrstnd evry single wrds n ur feelings while u wrote it. Its so paiful wn it hpns. Wt u thought,wt u dream n evntualy wt hpnd. Ur world shaterd b4 u n u could nt do anythn. U r left wiz cries n memories zt smtims mkes u smile n smtims cry. Wts lef in lyf?? I hd lve a boy n we wre vry cloz 2 each ozr. We wre z mst closest frns n i felt in lve wd hm. He also lvd me bt he nvr told hs feelings. 1 d he fel in lve wiz my cousin zt cousin wiz whom i shard al my feelings. I told hr evrythng abt hm bt yet sh betrayd me. Zer is so mch pain in my hrt bt am livin. Sick of cryin,tired of tryin,yet am smilin bt insid am dyin.

jemel  says:
13 months ago

patayin nyona ako plz

Dipin Dhingra  says:
12 months ago

Hi, even i had a seious love relationshi for 3 years with a girl, and now i am no one for her. she ditched me for some one.but my heart still wants her... i am in india. i need a friend with whom i can share. m broken dead. i had dreamz of getting married to her. we were called Adam n Eve. my number is 9815169681

dead  says:
11 months ago

me boyfirend of 15 months dumped me our of a sudden for no reason all he said was: I WANT TO LIVE MY LIFE

i'm dead and my heart is broken

crushed  says:
10 months ago

I broke up with my girlfriend of 3 years between school, work, family illiness and her constant fighting ... I broke in my weakness, but I never thought it would be forever and now she's in love with another man... All I ever wanted was some time to think... and maybe for her to fight for me ... but she started seeing another guy just 2 months after we broke up... and now my world is collapsing all around me ... and school, life and friends all seem so pointless.....

this sucks  says:
10 months ago

i hade a boy his name was ALEX i love him so mush but i broke up with him 2 days ago because people wher saying that he cheated on me but i regret avrymoment that i hade and that i didnt talk to him bout it i feel so vad and my heart is hurting me so mush knoewing im not his no more hopefully well i hope things work outt:(

Anissa  says:
9 months ago

It reminds me of a guy named colt he knew i liked him but went for my friend

amber jones   says:
6 months ago

this poem made me cry bcause my heart is in so much pain bcause of my ex boy freind i sill love him but he does konw that .

amber jones   says:
6 months ago

this poem made me cry bcause my heart is in so much pain bcause of my ex boy freind i sill love him but he does konw that .

amber jones   says:
6 months ago

this poem made me cry bcause my heart is in so much pain bcause of my ex boy freind i sill love him but he does konw that .

reem  says:
4 months ago

i loved this pome so much... i just want a help i got a friend and she got a boyfirend one time she came to me crying i was like whats rong she said my boyfirend dumped me i told her can i have his number so i can talk to him to see whats going on she was like yh ok but she wasnt to sure.. i took the number and i called him but he nows me coz my firend told bout me i told him my name and how old am i and i asked him how old is he and than i asked him i was like why did u dumpd taif he was like shes really enoughing every thing happens btween me and her she goes and tell ppl and she starded smoking and all that shit she even has been drink befor i told dont do this its not good for u but she never lisen to me and now am tnking she hates me and shes only using me to get to her x coz i steel talk to him and he talks to me but they stell firnds but he dont even likes her as firends last time me and her had i fight coz i was joking wid her and she thought it was true but i told her i was joking she told me she will never 4give me and than i had no one to talk to i went and called her x he was talking to me and than i told him what happens i told him i want u to tlk to her so we could be back he wennt and told her if u didnt talk to shjoon and be good wid her i will never talk to u and he said to her am going to block u and if u stop acting like a child i will talk to u and yestyrady she starded smoking agin i was talkinf to her on the msn i told her to stop it and than she stared shit she was like i cant hep it and all that she i new there was something rong with her i was like tell me whats rong she was like no i was like why am u best firend she was like no i no u well go and tell abdul thats hes name i was like what the fuck whos abdul so i go and tell him wtf and than nxt day i called him i asked him do u think taif likes me he was like n o i think she using u and she evn told me am, a bitch and a lozzer and yesturday i told her we over and now i dont no what do to.. i want some one to lisen to me i want a good firned who cares... and i live in (aus)

jhan-di  says:
4 months ago

i like it!

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