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Character or plot? That is the question.

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By ajbarnett


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CONTRARY TO POPULAR BELIEF

The principal ingredient, the one component that is absolutely critical in mainstream novels is the central character(s).

Plot is important of course, but unless you can create a rapport between your readers and characters, the plot means nothing.

So what about fantasy, what about sci-fi and thrillers do they place more emphasis on plot? Not so. Characters matter most. Think JK Rowling's Harry Potter, think Stephenie Meyer's Twilight. Would the stories be so popular if there were no Harry Potter to care about? Would Twilight matter without Bella?


The headless chicken complex

Searching for a unique storyline is a waste of time. You might find one, you might just be the one this decade to come up with something entirely new, but chances are you won't.

New writers run around like headless chickens thinking they have to uncover an original plot. Believe me, after all this time, after all the books that have been published, it's almost impossible to find something that hasn't been done before.

Forget unique, instead, think fresh approach. Tell the same old storyline in a different way, make your VOICE unique, rather than the plot, and you'll stand a far better chance of succeeding.

Was Twilight unique, was Harry Potter original? - Nah! Not one bit, been there done that, read it all before. Their creators just found a fresh and intriguing way of telling an old tale.

A good central character is what keeps readers turning pages. If characters are well sketched, if a reader ‘connects' to them, they'll want to know how the protagonists get over difficulties. They'll become anxious, as they would for a friend, and want the whole thing to turn out right.

If your characters are cardboard cutouts, if they don't come to life, readers won't be caught up. If they don't get caught up, they'll become bored; they'll toss the book to one side and it will die. Readers MUST believe in the characters.


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About the author

  • Anthony's short stories have been published since 1994 in magazines, summer specials and international competitions. His work has been broadcast on radio and recorded for audio books.
  • Anthony's latest novel can be ordered online from Amazon, WHSmith and all good bookshops.
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Characters should behave like real people

Characters should resonate. They should be like real people. They should have passions, opinions, loves, and disappointments - just like real people. Not ‘run of the mill' people of course, successful novels aren't concerned with ‘run of the mill'.

Average people lead average lives not interesting lives. Your characters must be larger than life, be interesting people, yet still be ‘real'.

Characters are most successful when you, as author, equate with them. You should identify with them and take pleasure in their company. As the author you HAVE to be absorbed with the story, if you aren't, forget it.

Psychologists allege that all characters are a representation of some component of a writer's persona. Maybe it's true, maybe not, but it matters nothing, as long as you as writer, fully empathize with them. If you don't your story will never get off the ground.

You should be the first person to believe in your characters or what chance do they have?

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Bob Ewing profile image

Bob Ewing  says:
15 months ago

sound advice, if I can't connect with the charcter(s) in the story little else matters.

ajbarnett profile image

ajbarnett  says:
15 months ago

Thanks for the comment, Bob. It's amazing how many people don't realize. Plots are very important of course, and I'll be hubbing on that soon - but first prioity should be characters.

dafla  says:
15 months ago

True, but I don't believe that all characters have to be larger than life. Many successful characters are ordinary people, who get caught up in extraordinary circumstances, such as Agatha Christie's Miss Marple. She has a very ordinary life, but has a very extraordinary talent. The same with Laura Ingalls Wilder. Surely the "Little House" books were not about larger than life people, but they endure and will always endure, as some of the best literary works in the world.

I personally like novels about ordinary people caught up in something that takes them out of their life, and makes them find strengths and talents they never had. Characters with a past that colors their present, such as Lillian Jackson Braun's Qwilleran in "The Cat Who..." novels draw me in and keep me there.

Men tend to love the larger than life characters, but women tend to like reading about ordinary people who have wonderful and extraordinary things touch their lives. I guess it depends on who you are writing for.

ajbarnett profile image

ajbarnett  says:
15 months ago

But doesn't the fact that Miss Marple was able to solve crimes make her larger than life - extraordinary.

When ordinary people are caught up in something that helps them find strengths and talents they never thought they had, it makes them larger than life. They rise to the occassion - become extraordinary. They aren't living 'ordinary' lives, the character is moved beyond the sphere of ordinary, into another realm.

By larger than life, I'm not suggesting the character is superhuman, I'm suggesting they aren't humdrum.

Denny Lyon profile image

Denny Lyon  says:
7 months ago

Hi, Anthony, (am now recovered from pollen season and human again) -

I'm with you on the character is most important.  Characters can differ thousands of ways with all kinds of quirks that make them endearing or irritating.  (Loved Miss Marple and especially Poirot)

Besides, aren't there only like 5 basic plots in the world anyway?  The Greeks cornered the market on those thousands of years ago...  Make an old story sing with interesting characters and a new time and place! 

Steven King certainly specialized in that and it brought him commercial success (and pandering to easiest human emotion to evoke:  fear).  My older brother went to college with him in Maine and even then folks thought he was weird - but he was stellar to his single mother who scrubbed floors to put him through college.  There are no one-dimensional characters - not even as authors! :)

Blogging this on over to The Social Poets blog for this week so aspiring writers can benefit from your advice, thanks!

ajbarnett profile image

ajbarnett  says:
7 months ago

Thanks for your comments, Denny. You're very kind. Sorry to hear you've been ill. Hope it didn't take you down too low.

liminal profile image

liminal  says:
5 months ago

Do you think that the short story format rather than the novel is better suited to characters who are average people?

ajbarnett profile image

ajbarnett  says:
5 months ago

I understand what you're saying, Liminal. However, there must always be an element of 'something different' about the character, or the way they handle a situation, otherwise why bother writing about them....

The person can always be an 'Average Joe', in fact they should rarely be 'superheroes', but they should have something about them, or some reaction from them, that makes them interesting.

Let's face it, most of us lead pretty boring lives, if we wrote about that, we'd bore our readers.

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