You Got Chose

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By Iðunn

Waiting - Rabi Khan
Waiting - Rabi Khan

 

I won't choose you

because I'm lonely

I won't choose you

because I'm cold

I won't choose you

for the money

I won't choose you

because I'm old

 

I can stand alone

 

however

 

I might choose you

because you're funny

I might choose you

because you're kind

I might choose you

because you're honest

I might try to

make you mine

 

I'm not afraid to be alone

I don't mind spending time at home

but if I choose to give you time

because you often make me rhyme

I will not settle

for just one of those

so if I choose you

you got chose

 

 

10Jun09

Artist Credit

This art piece is by my friend Rabi Khan, please look for more of his artistry here on Hubpages: Rabi Khan

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STR8 KRAZIE  says:
6 months ago

Good work real good work and props to mr rabi kahn for his painting as well

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

thx C, yes rabi is marvelous. I love pairing my work with his.

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Watch Tower  says:
6 months ago

I loved this poem !!

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

thank you for taking time to comment, watch tower and I notice you are new... welcome to Hubs!

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Gypsy Willow  says:
6 months ago

Another nice poem and stunning art

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

thank you, gypsy. I'm actually hoping for a new first time out rabi khan piece to pair with it, when he finishes it. :)

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Froggy213  says:
6 months ago

Have you spoke with Rabi?

I have missed him too.

You 2 work very well together.

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

Yes, we are in correspondence.  Rabi has a great new piece he was making me for this, but I got impatient. :p  I can't wait to use the new one though, it's going to be exquisite.  I was delighted he came back when I asked him;  I always loved pairing my work with his genius art.  It doesn't hurt at all that he is kind and warm and a thoroughly wonderful human being.  I missed him, too.

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

in fact, froggy, I wanted to tell you, I finally purchased that beautiful "safe in her arms" for my home, that we used for the poem I made for you on behalf of your grandson.  I have always loved that particular one so much. I think of you and your grandson every day now when I look at it, and my prayers remain with you and your family.

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Froggy213  says:
6 months ago

Thank you--I have accepted Jonathan is in heaven. This county still has done nothing. I am about to write a 2 year piece on it. 2 years on June 23rd.

May God bless you and Rabi Khan too. Please wish him my best.

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

I will, froggy.

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ethel smith  says:
6 months ago

Great painting and words thanks

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

thank you so much for stopping in

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James A Watkins  says:
6 months ago

Exquisite artwork!

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

I love it, too. :)

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suziecat7  says:
5 months ago

Wonderful poem and great artwork. Thanks.

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Iðunn  says:
5 months ago

hey, glad you stopped in to read. thanks and I hope you are having a lovely evening.

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