I am a spirit, can we talk?
67Perhaps you shoudn't read this?
Ah....there you are....my focus is a bit blurry...it comes with ancient eyes. Why did you come to this place? If you have a weak soul....you really shouldn't continue. Now...I see...I have captured your curiosity. I can read the wetness of your eyes...curiosity makes them sparkle. Licking your lips will help that uneasy feeling. A dry mouth is the first sign of fear...you know.
I have seen you a few times over the years. I always check in. Ah yes....the blood clot...you shouldn't really sit still that long. I like you....I rarely warn someone. I so love this new technology. I hated using parchment and newspapers....before that...I had to whisper. I love the expressions on faces that only have seconds to go. I gave a woman too much time once and she told her sister. I WAS PUNISHED SEVERELY!
I can cast my breath on your face.....you can feel it just before you fall to sleep...it feels electric doesn't it? How I love the cold clammy flesh just under the chin. I can't tell you how much I hate it when I have to reach in the mouth and force the sniveling beings out. Sometimes I pull them apart like a bird plucks a worm in half from the ground. I get blamed and frankly I loathe he that torments me!
I am sorry...back to you. Why the strange look? I won't bite. It doesn't work that way. I show the words and the reader makes the choice. Can you feel what I am saying...does your heart tremble just a little as I reach to touch it? It is your ON switch but it is my OFF switch. Now, now...not to worry....I have followed you many times...you still are so terrified of my kiss?
Maybe you shouldn't keep reading? I know what you are feeling....the grin of doubt seeps from the corners of your mouth. I shall not cast my veil until your time that only I and he knows. Did you know that when you breathe through your nostrils...I cannot enter...it is true...that is where he gave you life...it is a policy thing.
You should really blink your eyes more when looking into a light source...I so love eyes. Close them and you can see my world...go ahead...just for a second..I won't get you...I promise! Do you feel that? I touch your skin..don't lie to yourself....the hair tickles me so....oh yes....little angel in a box is telling you that it's just words....just words that somebody typed on the screen.
I love slapping those little bastards just before I finish my work! They squeak like little dirty mice running from a starving black cat. Such a look you give me...I see that look a lot. I know I ramble on and on but you, at least...have life. Shakespeare thought I was quite entertaining until he read much of what you are reading now. OH...dideth he tosseth quite a fit!
Do you always make those little tiny soul moans like that? I hear those sometimes when I get a bit too wordy. Did you know that the tongue is the first thing to react when I am called? Oh yes....it is restless...it wants to protect you...sometimes it even gets swallowed.
Well...I have to go now. I did enjoy our little conversation. You have nice body language! Remember what I said about the blood clot thing. Take care....I do mean that.
I will be seeing you.
Sincerely,
Death
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Sweetie--You're gonna have to quite writing these--they are CREEPING ME OUT!!! lol
Good one, though!!! :)
Jewels...thanks....oh yes it does. :)
Tammy....I creep me out too! Want to creep together? :)
Brilliant, absolutely as my son always says 'well impressed' I love that sort of thing lol Nell
Thanks much Nell....I imagined Death behind a computer screen....with a sense of humor of course. :)
Death be not proud you are only a mere transition into eternity and you are bound to the Earthly realm. I laugh in your face, bring it on.
Tom...thanks...LOL! Will leave Death a message...just went towards Walmart...sirens and cops headed there. Death sometimes even gets there before the lawyers. :)
wow what a hub, thanks for sharing it. Have a blessed dear Tom. creativeone59
Now that is creative imagination. Holloween must be your favorite time of the year.
Oh, wow I thought it was a vampire but the blot clot reference was a clue. Blood clots are very dangerous and painful. It was a fun and clever mystery.
Mr. Grims (grimreaper) is actually a shy spirit with a sense of humor. Who knew?
creativeone....thanks...you too! :)
Pete....thanks....I do like the scary stuff. :)
Raven.....thanks LOL...I just had a thought..Vampire choking on a blood clot....Death is a stand up comedian. :)
Get your fingers out of my mouth! I don't know where they've been, and besides, I'm still using it. Well done, Tom! Captivating and well-written. I'll be waiting to feel the hot breath on my face when I lay down to sleep. Maybe the big sleep.
Ha,ha! I just read your comment above. "Vampire choking on a blood clot!" That's priceless. Our maybe he spits it out because he's trying to lower his cholesterol!
Oh, this is shocking!!!!!!!!! never knew you're talking about death till I finished..... What a nice and creepy story Tom :)
Nice and creepy and very imaginative you had me guessing right up to the reveal at the end
Just beautifull, thanks Tom.
Christoph....thanks...I just had to give Death a dry sense of humor....LOL..Vampires worried about their cholesterol...blahh...I adm tdryin to cut dowwwwn! :)
shamelabboush....thanks....I was trying to not give it away. :)
maggs....thanks......BOO....just kidding! :)
Keira...thank you! :)
Yer creeping me out to sweetie and don't kiss me it's all headed for the brambles in barefeet as death comes in the winder.
Charlie....brambles...bare feet....ouch! :)
"Did you know that when you breathe through your nostrils...I cannot enter...it is true...that is where he gave you life...it is a policy thing".
That was a great phrase...and I too had no idea it was gonna be Death..Nice job...very hollow weenie...LOL :O) Hugs G-Ma
I think you are implying we hubbers sit too much in front of our computers huh? I have thought about that, good possibility of a clot in the old leg. Thankfully I am on a blood thinner. I do get up every four hours and pee. More often in the am for coffee. :D
G-ma...thanks...got ya huh? I'm a halloweenie guy. Hugs! :)
Charlie...LOL....got to move around....you too...the 4 hour pee routine...Tammy won't let me use a milk jug...I was gonna duct tape it to my chair. :)
You have a sick mind Tom, and I do enjoy it so.
Randy...thanks...It does take a sick mind to appreciate another...grins! :)
Tom...quit creeping out your wife. Well done, though! The writing I mean, not the creeping out Tammy part. :D
Janetta...thanks...LOL...I do it all the time. :)
Wow, that was kinda awesome... I'm lovin' the whole fact that the reader is fighting whether or not to believe in the writing, the veracity of it.
Duck tape haha like toad. LOL funny
Ismira...thanks...just a conversation. :)
Charlie....yip...we have a lot in common. :)
LOL that was a bit unexpected, but surprisingly entertaining. I admire your enthusiasm and your tone, it's quite unique and gets you every bit of emotion to get that extra chuckle off the end of the sentence.
Very well written - light and chilling at the same time - great combination! Most enjoyable reading Tom - thank you!
Arthur...thanks...I was wondering if Death had a sense of humor? :)
Enelle....thanks....you're most welcome. :)
This story is so mesmerizing. I felt a little like I was in a trance of some sort until I read the last word, then...I woke up.
Mindfulness...thanks...I felt a little that way as I wrote it...it was kind of creepy. :)
Towards the end of the story, i had to lick my lips. SO dry mouth is a sign of fear? - i thought i was just dehydrated! Nice hub, it's scary. And that pic looked like an aerial view of a toilet sink! geez. :) Happy spooky Halloween Tom.
GoldString...thanks...LOL..death in the potty! Happy Halloween to you too! :)
Tom, you are definitely in the spirit of Halloween! This was a terrifying eerily pleasing read--I do know why, I enjoyed this story immensely!
AIDY...thanks..I smiled all the while writing this...death with a sense of humor just cracks me up for some reason? Happy Halloween! :)
BOOOOOOOOOOWHAAAAAAAHHAAAAAAA!!!! Good one. Although I, perspicacious being that I am, knew who the Visitor was.
Thanks Margaret...some it sneaks up on...some ..not...BOO! :)
Death of a certain someone, I once gave that warning, but death won that one too.
Polly....thanks...yes...death wins.
































Jewels says:
2 months ago
Ahhhh death. That which comes to us all. Nice one Tom.