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By Tom Cornett


Perhaps you shoudn't read this?

Ah....there you are....my focus is a bit blurry...it comes with ancient eyes. Why did you come to this place? If you have a weak soul....you really shouldn't continue. Now...I see...I have captured your curiosity. I can read the wetness of your eyes...curiosity makes them sparkle. Licking your lips will help that uneasy feeling. A dry mouth is the first sign of fear...you know.

I have seen you a few times over the years. I always check in. Ah yes....the blood clot...you shouldn't really sit still that long. I like you....I rarely warn someone. I so love this new technology. I hated using parchment and newspapers....before that...I had to whisper. I love the expressions on faces that only have seconds to go. I gave a woman too much time once and she told her sister. I WAS PUNISHED SEVERELY!

I can cast my breath on your face.....you can feel it just before you fall to sleep...it feels electric doesn't it? How I love the cold clammy flesh just under the chin. I can't tell you how much I hate it when I have to reach in the mouth and force the sniveling beings out. Sometimes I pull them apart like a bird plucks a worm in half from the ground. I get blamed and frankly I loathe he that torments me!

I am sorry...back to you. Why the strange look? I won't bite. It doesn't work that way. I show the words and the reader makes the choice. Can you feel what I am saying...does your heart tremble just a little as I reach to touch it? It is your ON switch but it is my OFF switch. Now, now...not to worry....I have followed you many times...you still are so terrified of my kiss?

Maybe you shouldn't keep reading? I know what you are feeling....the grin of doubt seeps from the corners of your mouth. I shall not cast my veil until your time that only I and he knows. Did you know that when you breathe through your nostrils...I cannot enter...it is true...that is where he gave you life...it is a policy thing.

You should really blink your eyes more when looking into a light source...I so love eyes. Close them and you can see my world...go ahead...just for a second..I won't get you...I promise! Do you feel that? I touch your skin..don't lie to yourself....the hair tickles me so....oh yes....little angel in a box is telling you that it's just words....just words that somebody typed on the screen.

I love slapping those little bastards just before I finish my work! They squeak like little dirty mice running from a starving black cat. Such a look you give me...I see that look a lot. I know I ramble on and on but you, at least...have life. Shakespeare thought I was quite entertaining until he read much of what you are reading now. OH...dideth he tosseth quite a fit!

Do you always make those little tiny soul moans like that? I hear those sometimes when I get a bit too wordy. Did you know that the tongue is the first thing to react when I am called? Oh yes....it is restless...it wants to protect you...sometimes it even gets swallowed.

Well...I have to go now. I did enjoy our little conversation. You have nice body language! Remember what I said about the blood clot thing. Take care....I do mean that.

I will be seeing you.

Sincerely,

Death


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Jewels profile image

Jewels  says:
2 months ago

Ahhhh death. That which comes to us all. Nice one Tom.

TamCor profile image

TamCor  says:
2 months ago

Sweetie--You're gonna have to quite writing these--they are CREEPING ME OUT!!! lol

Good one, though!!! :)

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Jewels...thanks....oh yes it does. :)

Tammy....I creep me out too! Want to creep together? :)

Nell Rose profile image

Nell Rose  says:
2 months ago

Brilliant, absolutely as my son always says 'well impressed' I love that sort of thing lol Nell

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Thanks much Nell....I imagined Death behind a computer screen....with a sense of humor of course. :)

Tom Whitworth profile image

Tom Whitworth  says:
2 months ago

Death be not proud you are only a mere transition into eternity and you are bound to the Earthly realm. I laugh in your face, bring it on.

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Tom...thanks...LOL! Will leave Death a message...just went towards Walmart...sirens and cops headed there. Death sometimes even gets there before the lawyers. :)

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creativeone59  says:
2 months ago

wow what a hub, thanks for sharing it. Have a blessed dear Tom. creativeone59

Pete Maida profile image

Pete Maida  says:
2 months ago

Now that is creative imagination. Holloween must be your favorite time of the year.

Raven King profile image

Raven King  says:
2 months ago

Oh, wow I thought it was a vampire but the blot clot reference was a clue. Blood clots are very dangerous and painful. It was a fun and clever mystery.

Mr. Grims (grimreaper) is actually a shy spirit with a sense of humor. Who knew?

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

creativeone....thanks...you too! :)

Pete....thanks....I do like the scary stuff. :)

Raven.....thanks LOL...I just had a thought..Vampire choking on a blood clot....Death is a stand up comedian. :)

Christoph Reilly profile image

Christoph Reilly  says:
2 months ago

Get your fingers out of my mouth! I don't know where they've been, and besides, I'm still using it. Well done, Tom! Captivating and well-written. I'll be waiting to feel the hot breath on my face when I lay down to sleep. Maybe the big sleep.

Ha,ha! I just read your comment above. "Vampire choking on a blood clot!" That's priceless. Our maybe he spits it out because he's trying to lower his cholesterol!

shamelabboush profile image

shamelabboush  says:
2 months ago

Oh, this is shocking!!!!!!!!! never knew you're talking about death till I finished..... What a nice and creepy story Tom :)

maggs224 profile image

maggs224  says:
2 months ago

Nice and creepy and very imaginative you had me guessing right up to the reveal at the end

Keira7  says:
2 months ago

Just beautifull, thanks Tom.

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Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Christoph....thanks...I just had to give Death a dry sense of humor....LOL..Vampires worried about their cholesterol...blahh...I adm tdryin to cut dowwwwn! :)

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Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

shamelabboush....thanks....I was trying to not give it away. :)

maggs....thanks......BOO....just kidding! :)

Keira...thank you! :)

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
2 months ago

Yer creeping me out to sweetie and don't kiss me it's all headed for the brambles in barefeet as death comes in the winder.

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Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Charlie....brambles...bare feet....ouch! :)

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G-Ma Johnson  says:
2 months ago

"Did you know that when you breathe through your nostrils...I cannot enter...it is true...that is where he gave you life...it is a policy thing".

That was a great phrase...and I too had no idea it was gonna be Death..Nice job...very hollow weenie...LOL :O) Hugs G-Ma

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
2 months ago

I think you are implying we hubbers sit too much in front of our computers huh? I have thought about that, good possibility of a clot in the old leg. Thankfully I am on a blood thinner. I do get up every four hours and pee. More often in the am for coffee. :D

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Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

G-ma...thanks...got ya huh? I'm a halloweenie guy. Hugs! :)

Charlie...LOL....got to move around....you too...the 4 hour pee routine...Tammy won't let me use a milk jug...I was gonna duct tape it to my chair. :)

Randy Behavior profile image

Randy Behavior  says:
2 months ago

You have a sick mind Tom, and I do enjoy it so.

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Randy...thanks...It does take a sick mind to appreciate another...grins! :)

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
2 months ago

Tom...quit creeping out your wife. Well done, though! The writing I mean, not the creeping out Tammy part. :D

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Janetta...thanks...LOL...I do it all the time. :)

Ismira profile image

Ismira  says:
2 months ago

Wow, that was kinda awesome... I'm lovin' the whole fact that the reader is fighting whether or not to believe in the writing, the veracity of it.

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
2 months ago

Duck tape haha like toad. LOL funny

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Ismira...thanks...just a conversation. :)

Charlie....yip...we have a lot in common. :)

Arthur Gulumian profile image

Arthur Gulumian  says:
2 months ago

LOL that was a bit unexpected, but surprisingly entertaining. I admire your enthusiasm and your tone, it's quite unique and gets you every bit of emotion to get that extra chuckle off the end of the sentence.

Enelle Lamb profile image

Enelle Lamb  says:
2 months ago

Very well written - light and chilling at the same time - great combination! Most enjoyable reading Tom - thank you!

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Arthur...thanks...I was wondering if Death had a sense of humor? :)

Enelle....thanks....you're most welcome. :)

Mindfulness profile image

Mindfulness  says:
2 months ago

This story is so mesmerizing. I felt a little like I was in a trance of some sort until I read the last word, then...I woke up.

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Mindfulness...thanks...I felt a little that way as I wrote it...it was kind of creepy. :)

GoldiString profile image

GoldiString  says:
2 months ago

Towards the end of the story, i had to lick my lips. SO dry mouth is a sign of fear? - i thought i was just dehydrated! Nice hub, it's scary. And that pic looked like an aerial view of a toilet sink! geez. :) Happy spooky Halloween Tom.

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

GoldString...thanks...LOL..death in the potty! Happy Halloween to you too! :)

Am I dead, yet? profile image

Am I dead, yet?  says:
2 months ago

Tom, you are definitely in the spirit of Halloween! This was a terrifying eerily pleasing read--I do know why, I enjoyed this story immensely!

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

AIDY...thanks..I smiled all the while writing this...death with a sense of humor just cracks me up for some reason? Happy Halloween! :)

Margaret Morris profile image

Margaret Morris  says:
2 months ago

BOOOOOOOOOOWHAAAAAAAHHAAAAAAA!!!! Good one. Although I, perspicacious being that I am, knew who the Visitor was.

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
2 months ago

Thanks Margaret...some it sneaks up on...some ..not...BOO! :)

Pollyannalana profile image

Pollyannalana  says:
5 weeks ago

Death of a certain someone, I once gave that warning, but death won that one too.

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
5 weeks ago

Polly....thanks...yes...death wins.

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