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Crashing Into You

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By my-success-guru



When your eyes capture mine you freeze the hands of time...

two stars collide It's been a magic carpet ride...

I come crashing into you...

I become so lost in you I don't know what to do

You've been a dream come true...

It's more than I can do to hold myself back from you...

I love every breath you take...

my heart will never forsake

I never felt so free

I feel you melting into me...

you make my body ache for you

I don't know what to do...

Somehow I'm under your spell and I can't even tell what has happened to me... Somehow it feels like I'm stuck in a dream like nothing I've seen with this crazy romance with each waking glance but I must take a chance with you... there's nothing I can do... I've fallen so hard for you...I'm crashing into you...

When I kiss your lips they are so soft and pure it's like your lips were made for mine

long before the hands of time...

I feel your sweet spirit shining through Everything feels so new...

Every time I see your cute adorable face

you make me want to hold you close to me on your pillow case...

the way you touch my fingertips you make my hands want to run down your hips...

when I feel the beat of your heart I never want to be apart...

it's more than I can do to tear myself away from you...

Tell me is this a dream... sometimes I feel I don't want know

so you will never let me go...

Somehow I'm under your spell and I can't even tell what has happened to me... Somehow it feels like I'm stuck in dream like nothing I've seen with this crazy romance with each waking glance but I must take a chance with you... there's nothing I can do... I've fallen so hard for you...I'm crashing into you...

It's like I fell out of bed... stumbled and bumped my head and left this life that I dread now I'm crashing into you... now I'm crashing into you... I'm crashing into you... and It's all because of you...

I just want to Ly hear next to you...

When you touch me I tremble I can't even assemble what has happened to me...

It's like an old fashioned passion full of compassion and I don't even know what you've done to me... Like we're back in days of old fashioned castles without all the modern day hassles and you lassoed me into you...You lassoed me in to you...

It"s like I was swept off my feet now my life is complete with you... my life is complete with you...It's all because of you...

It's like I'm caught in a dream and don't want to escape unless it's with you...

It's like Bonny and Clyde escaping on a high speed ride...

Somehow I'm under your spell and I can't even tell what has happened to me... Somehow it feels like I'm stuck in a trance with this crazy romance with each waking glance but I must take a chance with you... there's nothing I can do... I've fallen so hard for you...I'm crashing into you...

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Whikat profile image

Whikat  says:
7 months ago

Ahh, So this is what love is like? very nice poem as always. :-)

my-success-guru profile image

my-success-guru  says:
7 months ago

Thanks again for your generous comments Whikat! Thanks for stopping by!

AEvans profile image

AEvans  says:
7 months ago

Well that is pretty and quite poetic , who's spell are you under? Beautiful poem. :)

my-success-guru profile image

my-success-guru  says:
7 months ago

Hi AE,

Thanks again for your wonderful comments. I can't really say who this mystery woman is right now. Maybe some day I can reveal this to you.

my-success-guru profile image

my-success-guru  says:
7 months ago

By the way AE although this might sound poetic it's actually a song I wrote for a very special woman.

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anjalichugh  says:
7 months ago

OMG! Where do you get this from? This woman (if any) must be very special indeed. She swept a superman off his feet (ur earlier hub)? Lol. Hmm.... This definitely seems like crashing in love. I hope she knows about your intense feelings for her. You must take your chances, though. Lol.

"Like we're back in days of old fashioned castles.." That is so romantic. I'm suddenly reminded of 'Rapunzel' here (don't know why). Your woman looks quite like her. :))

Azur Moon Wolf profile image

Azur Moon Wolf  says:
7 months ago

It read like a song to me - I could even hear an acoustic guitar and a soft raspy voice. Very musical - beautiful!

Azur Moon Wolf profile image

Azur Moon Wolf  says:
7 months ago

I guess I should have read the comments first, then i would have seen this IS a song. Anyway - I love it!

ajay kumar  says:
7 months ago

i guess ,,, this is a real feelings of someone .

it just like a song to me

my-success-guru profile image

my-success-guru  says:
7 months ago

Hi Azur Moon Wolf and ajay Kumar,

Yes Azur I heard this in my head too. You must have a real talent for music to hear the song in your head. The song wrote itself. Yes Kumar this is real feelings for someone. Thanks for stopping by.

Army Infantry Mom profile image

Army Infantry Mom  says:
6 months ago

I wish someone would write and sing a song for me,....You just made my man look bad,..LOL.

my-success-guru profile image

my-success-guru  says:
6 months ago

Hey Army Infantry Mom,

Wow that sounds even more ambious than super mom! LOL Hey even better why don't you write and sing a song for him then maybe you'll get that pizza we were talking about! LOL LOL Man this is making me hungry again. Just save a slice for me!

Now go... success is waiting but stop back!

Jodi Hoeksel profile image

Jodi Hoeksel  says:
5 months ago

These are some magical words, for sure! They truly dance a vibrant song! Very nice, guru. :)

\Brenda Scully  says:
5 months ago

hey that was really good, you can tell it was heart felt also,,,,,, some men are just so romantic

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swathin2  says:
5 months ago

hi nice way of expressing their love to their loved ones. when any person makes use of these sentences or feelings in this hub and express their love towards the other person then it will definitely make them think twice before they say anything...

nice one in all

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