Fall To Grace ~ CrisA Inspiration
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Fall to Grace
Where we are headed
God only knows
Yet
It feels like magic
Between my toes
Just like heaven and the sky's above
I have completely
Fallen in love
The walls that surround
No longer bound
The structure in sight
My souls quantum plight
Brought me here today
To feel your grace
Passion a blazing
All over space
Surrounded by fire
Of our desire
My heart skips a beat
All worries erased
I have no doubt
By you is my place
Life is about the beauty of love
Not the crazy race
Your love has given me new meaning
To fall in the name of grace.
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"I have no doubt
By you is my place"
Very nice and well applied to the picture...:O) Hugs
now off to read tom's
Beautiful as always dear Lady! CrisA must be VERY inspiring :)
Tom, nice to meet you...thank you! I just read your poem and it is dead-on! =)
G-ma...Thank you! :)
SEMPro~ Thanks! I have my own inspiration for my poems, yet ChrisA places a bomb up your bum..for happy faces!! :D
This is fantastic! I will have to link this one as well. The photo, the words are perfect!
'To fall in the name of grace.' Great ending.
Beautiful!
"My souls quantum plight
Brought me here today"
That sums it up for everyone, eh? ;)
AIDY ~ wow...I am speechless, Cannot thank you enough! ;)
you are smitten. Falling in the name of grace, not heard that expression before maybe you invented it... enjoyed the whole ambiounce though I cant spell it of this... both picture and poem together shine xxxxxxx
oscillationatend ~ Did I spell that right? lol ~ Maybe I can call you "o", eh? lol ~ Thank you..geez I hope that sums it up. Amazing how so much time can be wasted trying to figure it out...myself included! =)
we fall in love just the same the world be damned. a steep price we have to pay and still we make the leap. thanks for a very instrospective read, I enjoyed it! :D
Thanks. Brenda! This poems words had to make a stretch to meet the image! I do like that line "To fall in the name of grace". Glad you liked it! :)
Thanks Cris! What can I say, your image's bear a challenge for me to meet with words! :D ~ I may try another,this poem was more work for me than usual. Normally they flow rather easily! I think this one crossed a bit fanciful over introspection! I greatly appreciate your inspiring images and reading! :)
i*N*V*I*C*T*U*S are you a lady???? Sem.Pro thinks you are
I have my ying/yang in good balance! lol ;)
Hi there well I so liked that poem three cheers.... wow and some picture too what....
Thanks, Miss Take! Great to see you! :)
Cris A's pictures are very inspiring and so is your poem, Invictus. Maybe I will make a poem about a Cris A picture...
My favorite part... It feels like magic
Between my toes
.... thanks for this one :)
Thank you so much, feeweewv! I appreciate your reading! :)
Triangles.
eh? Bermuda?? lol ;) ~I've missed you Ixxy!
Holy smokes, what a powerful poem! Great lines in here, invictus. I enjoyed every word. I too have "fallen."
dohn 121~ I so appreciate your comment! It has taken me some time to express in such a vulnerable way. Great to hear you can relate!
I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s this is amazing....very sensual and amazing..Loved the title and how the verses related to it :D:D
Thumbz up!
Uriel ~ Thanks soo much!! You brought a smile to my face! :D
It must have been the dress in the image that made it flow! llol ~ I feel like I have fallen into a mud puddle and it mostly feels good! Thinking most definitely have transcended to a new dimension of reality for sure. Maybe one of your vamps bit me! lol :D @S Thanks for being a continued support!
well no need to tell you invictus you do an amazing job here ! And when you write you seem to nail thing to the wall! but falling into a mud puddle isn't that bad LOL> you can remember making mud pies as a kid ..at least i can.... but the key is to enjoy every moment and if you get to be with the people you love/care about nothing matters more :D if you are interested you can watch Vampire Knight on www.Online-Television.TV subtitled :d
Wonderful. Reminds me a little of my poem, "jump", so enjoyed it very much. Thank you for posting this poem. (:
Uriel ~ You are so sweet, thank you! Mud puddles are quite nice, in fact I believe it is "unconditional happiness"! I think I have been blessed with a secret feeling I have been looking for for a long time...unconditional-selfless love... and it is amazing. It is always grand to be with those you love/care about for sure, yet maybe it is not always the way things are meant to be, does not change feelings when they are on a unconditional basis. Strong bonds with others is truly a gift! Thanks for the vamp link! ciao! :D
EYES CHAMbERS ~ I just love your name! Thank you for the lovely comment! :) Nice to see you around again!
Absolutely gorgeous piece of poetry... thank you!
Thank you! :) I enjoy bein' back..forgot how addicting this site is.
EYES ~ lol ~ I understand the addiction. I could not find your poem "jump" on your site! Though I will be back to enjoy more of yours! (:
chickmelion ~wow, thanks much for the lovely compliment! :)
it's a tie.i couldn't decide if i liked the poem or the picture better.i decided they are both wonderful.
DREAM ON ~I greatly appreciate your comment!! Cris A whom is a very talented hubber created the image...you should check him out! :)
How did I miss this art/poetry combo? Love it! Haven't seen dear Cris A around recently. But his beautiful artwork lives on through your beautiful words. MM
"To fall in the name of grace."
The best way for any of us to fall, that's for sure!
Well done I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s,I feel compelled to check out Cris A's hubs now, concerning the image!:D
Thanks MM! I'm so happy you loved it! Cris A is amazing and gifted! Placing words to this was breathtaking to say the least, yet a place I'd love to go! :D
Warren E ~ Thanks for the lovely comment! Yes, please do check Chris A's creations out he is brilliant and very inspiring! :D
Beautiful is the only word that crosses my mind. I love it I rated it up!
chrissie123 ~ :) Thank you very much!
Your poem is a beautiful heart felt read, thank you.
Power, beautiful, full of love!
Psychic Gwen ~ So sorry I missed your comment! Thank you so much! :)
Jane@CM ~ Thank you...yeah, I nearly fell of my chair writing this one...I fill with emotion when I write and *woah* this one was a topper! :)
Thanks for realing!
one talented dude.....
Hey, Miss Take! Thanks for your high praise. :) Long time no see... Where have ya been??
How did I miss this? This is awesome!!!! :)
Very Nice! hearts!!
Hi, Sandra!! :) Thanks so much... I am very happy you came by!
there are surely some extremely talented people on here, and i am delighted to be associated with them...... Cris sent me a message on face book he is o.k. what a talent. i have lost all my work, silly me. but never mind i think it was meant to be........
Hey, so sorry I have been absent!! :) So happy to hear Cris contacted you! Great news... you are full of beautiful work!! It will add up again in no time . We are blessed with many talented people!
This vid is beautiful
Thanks, Poet! :) I do love this song... *sigh*.
I may add it to another poem. This one speaks for itself with the image and words.
It is a great dream to fall, to be met by that special someone...
absolutely.......
Indeed. :)
'Brought me here today
To feel your grace'
I am blown away . .that is all I can say. You are AMAZING GRACE!
Wow, wavegirl! I am nearly speachless to respond! :) Thank you! I have to say, I have amazing inspiration that brought me to write this and many other poems! :)
I appreciate that you are sharing such a reaction... this poem nearly compusted me with the feelings involved! So, I can relate! I am very grateful to hear from you...
ooooooooooooooooooooooooh wow....... i will leave you with all these lovely girls........
If you only knew...ha ha ha ! :)
Awesome picture, beautiful poem, perfect song! I'm bumping this one back up for you! It's a shame that more people cannot appreciate the art of poetry...
Money Glitch ~ And I so appreciate your apreciation! :D I can still remember how I felt writing this...I thought I was going to self combust completely!! lol I get on such a high, like soaring through the clouds in a passion filled love bubble, have to wait til my body is ready to come down.. I have the most amazing inspirations that fuel all of this work and the still the biggest challenge to feel that my words bring compatibility to Cris's Artwork. Thank you! :D
bump all his work up he is the best
Wooo Hooo! :D Thanks
really going now honest
Ciao! :) you crack me up.. catch ya tomorrow.
Tom Rubenoff says:
5 months ago
Very nice! I also did one on this picture.