Feeling Nolstalgic
60In Training (Miami Bound)
Well, I'm taking classes in expanding my poetic vocabulary and tightening up my prose. My first assignment was to use a block of words small and deceptive. Here is the product. I'm waiting for my grade *biting my fingernails*. I wrote about my memories of flying to Miami. Here goes.
Miami Bound
Agog about flying
mix of fear and happiness
wondering how things are
in Orange county
as smoke from the engine
advances from the dismal
city I was raised
in the genesis of flight
pondered ethereal adventures
trickling from the city fraught
of moving scenic postcards
out there in the nexus of
the universe
should depression rapine
sired plans
shaking hands with vapid
and dismal reality
taking deep breaths to allay
myself remembering
accountable virtu
looking out over the clouds
i chuckle like a wag tickled me
wax and adjust my character
tossing thoughts askew
from the plane window
deflecting a crimp in my pleasure
My direction Miami bound
Beautiful Miami
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Jimmy you're so sweet (blushing). Thank you.
well done
Oooo somebody new (smile). Thank you
I love this NightFlower, these small words really resonate... agree with Jimmy :-) A+
Thanks Drax. If nothing else I enjoyed the trip down memory lane (smile).
Adore the tensions in this one - a bit of fear + a bit of excitement! Wonderful combo!
Smiles and Light
P.S. I have linked this poem with my poem "Remembering to see with wings". I think they complement each other! Ihope you don't mind!













jimmythejock says:
3 years ago
A+ I am in awe of your poetic genius.....JIMMY