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Form and Poetry

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By Tom Rubenoff



Poetry is a form of verbal and written expression that strains against the confines of its cage. The cage is the container from which poetry takes its shape. The cage is form. Without form, there can be no poetry. The cage liberates the captive; form gives poetry the liberation of existence.

Form, as supple as skin, swells and shrinks, twists and bends in response to urgency and passivity, urge and passion. Poetry and its lover, form, writhe in warm rhythm in the bloodstream and seek to awaken in the mind the delight of the lover revealed to the loved, the delight of the loved in the lover revealed, and the mysterious delight of lovers together in these revelations. The moment of revelation is the moment we, within the cages of our bodies, each connect with the other. Lovers reveal and conceal, illuminate and mystify. Form and poetry come to an understanding that can be adequately felt but only inadequately expressed by words, unless those words can inspire the listener to mirror the feeling in their own mysterious emotions.

Poetry can break out of its cage, and so become other than poetry. The cage is not strong. Seeking to transcend form, poets lose their identity. Poetry is a visceral thing. Poetry needs the moist earth, the dust, a big smile, hatred, passion, fear, all of the emotions, and a desire to touch the audience with more than words. Severed from its organic roots to drift formless among the myriad human concepts and syntactic constructs, poetry can no longer be. Rearrange it into a paragraph and it will be a paragraph. A poem exists because of the way form lays the words upon the page or hangs them in the air. Form juxtaposes thoughts to make new concepts. If a poet is an artist, the palette is comprised of words, but form is the hand that places words like flecks of color upon the canvas of the audience's emotions.

Form can destroy a poem. The poet lunges for the needed rhyme, inserts an unfortunately awkward word, and poem and poet are dead. The poem is repugnant verse, the poet a greeting card writer. Bury the poem in a greeting card; bury the poet in the Hallmark aisle. Or, struggling within the confines of form's cage, the poet counts syllables like molecules, as if one missing molecule would destabilize the poetic compound. The would-be poet is almost correct: a missing syllable can destroy a poem, but only if the synergy of the lovers - form and poetry - depends upon the absolute fidelity of rhythm and meter. Poetry is: form and the thoughts behind words caught in the act of lovemaking. If the poet uses too little care to synchronize, both poetry and form will be left unsatisfied.

The relationship of poetry and form is as passionate and dangerous as that of all lovers. Form can focus poetic energy and facilitate connection between audience and poem. The flexibility of form allows a powerful synergy to develop, as the force of the poet's passion molds the form, and passion is molded by the limits of the form. However, form must be prevented from strangling poetry in the passion of its embrace. The poet must discern the difference between synergy and premature climax, embrace and strangulation. Form must be controlled so that poetry can exist.

As in love and life, experience tempered with consideration is the best teacher. When the synergy of poem and form works, the poem is magic and alive. When it is forced, a feeling of disappointment compromises the pleasure of the poem. When synergy is absent, the poem lays flat and lifeless, a needy vacuum that leaves us wanting. Poem and form must be sensitive to each other. That is the magic that poets create.


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Cris A profile image

Cris A  says:
10 months ago

wiow this is a nice read tom. I couldn't have described the relationship between form and poetry any better. Thanks for sharing :D

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Tom Rubenoff  says:
10 months ago

Thanks, Chris! I got all poetical all of a sudden.

G-Ma Johnson profile image

G-Ma Johnson  says:
10 months ago

Boy I guess you did Tom...what's going on over there? The whole writing was very passionate and loving... such a writer you are...Thanks I enjoyed it very much...breathing hard...sigh sigh...G-Ma :O) Hugs & Peace LOL

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Tom Rubenoff  says:
10 months ago

When I was 43 I went back to school, and eventually I had an essay writing glass. Everyone else was in their 20's and 30's and they all said that they did not like poetry. I couldn't understand it. So I wrote this essay. I'm glad it got you going, though! LOL

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goldentoad  says:
10 months ago

You controlled that form like a true master. just call me grasshopper.

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Tom Rubenoff  says:
10 months ago

Take the pebble from my hand...

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blondepoet  says:
10 months ago

Tom Rubenoff Tom Rubenoff Tom Rubenoff you have hyponitized me with the magic and evervescent beauty of your words I am in a spell I am in a spell I am in a spell....................................(thud oh no walked into a wall....where am I ....what am I doing here)

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Tom Rubenoff  says:
10 months ago

On the count of three I will snap my fingers and you will awake. One, two... oh excuse me. I have to go take care of something. Be right back.

blondepoet profile image

blondepoet  says:
7 months ago

Glistening bodies entwined

In an ageless erotic dance,

Seeking pleasures from each other,

Seeking wonder and romance.

She touches his face with tenderness

He draws her body near

Aching, needing hunger

will make their destiny clear.

Their lips meet in soft kisses,

Their tongues begin passion's war

Forgotten now, the outside world

All is here, behind this door.

He strokes her body tenderly,

She arches up for his caress

He finds her silken portal

And her womanly wetness.

She moans in fiery desire

And pulls his hand away

Wishing to end this exquisite torture

And get on with passion's play.

She straddles his waiting body,

Eases him into her feminine hollow

She leads him on a rhythmic dance

His thrusting hips must follow.

She rides him faster, even then,

To hear his wondrous sighs

She shows him all the delights

She has between her womanly thighs.

They stare into each other's eyes

And gasp as ecstasy unreels

And tangles them in a lover's knot

That every answer reveals.

Sated, they lie side by side,

Spent but hungering still

She touches him where their passion came

And tastes their lovers spill.

Their mouths meet in passionate need,

Hungry animals once more

This time he rises above her,

Her body to explore.

Their ballet begins again,

As he thrusts his manhood in,

Vowing not to end the dance

Unless her cries he'll win.

Like beasts of old they become,

Riding with desire,

Only resting their throbbing bodies

When sated by their fire.

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Tom Rubenoff  says:
7 months ago

Thanks, Blondepoet. I'm glad it was good for you, too.

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