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Writing Your Novel - Writing Short or Writing Long

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By Marisa Wright


A novel can be a slim volume or an impressive tome, but it must be at least 70,000 words long(unless it's a Mills & Boon style romance, or erotica, when you can get away with 50,000).

If your novel is shorter than that, don't cudgel your brain to create more plot. You may just be one of those writers who writes "short". If that's the case, you may be able to solve the problem - and improve your novel immeasurably - by amplifying what you've already got

It's more likely, though, that your novel is longer, because most writers write "long". If you feel the words flow easily on to the page, you probably write long.

Both tendencies have their pro's and con's, so let's look at them in more detail.   -


Writing Long

I've encountered writers who write long, who think they're good writers because words come easily to them.   Bear in mind, though - that's only a good thing if they're the right words!

In reality, long writers often include unnecessary detail (or even unnecessary whole scenes), use over-complicated sentence constructions, go off on tangents, and over-develop minor characters - whatever, the result can be saggy or boring sections which will lose a reader's interest.

A long writer's first draft will need stringent editing before it's ready for publication. It's a good problem to have (though I know it's painful to do the slashing!), because it's easier to remove words than to add them.

Writing Short

If your background is in journalism or business writing, chances are you write "short". After all, you've spent years learning how to write "just the facts, ma'am"! The thing is, a novel isn't just about facts - it's about atmosphere, description and feelings, too.

I write short, but I didn't know it until I read a book set on the same Greek island as my own novel.

The author took a page and a half to describe the harbour. To describe the same harbour, I'd written three lines! Personally, I thought a page and a half was too much. But I had to admit, it was a heck of a lot better than my three lines...

If you write short, you need to work on each scene to add in what you're unconsciously editing out.

  • Scene setting. The reader needs to know where your characters are, even if it's a fairly nondescript room. A good exercise is to try to use each of the five senses to describe the setting. I've never managed more than four, but doing the exercise does make me think!
  • Character description. The first time a character is introduced, you must describe them, including the colour of their hair and eyes and what they're wearing. It takes skill to work this in without it looking too clunky, but it can be done and it's absolutely critical.
  • Show not tell. Unless you're inside a character's head (which is a legitimate place to be sometimes), don't mind-read. Put yourself in the reader's shoes and describe what they see, not what you know about the characters. For instance, never say, "Christine felt a pain in her chest". Instead, say, "Christine's face spasmed in pain and she clutched her chest". The main benefit of this approach is that it makes the scene more alive, but a by-product is that it also uses more words!

Happy writing!

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Paraglider profile image

Paraglider  says:
16 months ago

Hi Marisa - lots of good ideas here. I write short, which is fine for blogs, hubs & poetry, but if I ever have the time to tackle a novel, I'll need to give it some serious thought.

I do regret the unfashionability of the novella form though, the long short story. Most novels are unnecessarily long, in my view.

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Marisa Wright  says:
16 months ago

Paraglider, I used to read a lot of science fiction, where novellas were common. I agree - a novella is a nice length, long enough to be engaging but not long enough to get tedious. Unfortunately anthologies are no longer fashionable so they seem to have fallen out of favour.

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selvirajan  says:
15 months ago

Hi Marisa, Thanks for the article. This is what i am exactly searching for a while and i came to read this today. I have written a short story, that was my first ever story, so being a novice i would greatly appreciate your comments.

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J.T.  says:
15 months ago

Brilliant hub, marisa.

Yours

J.T.

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Zsuzsy Bee  says:
15 months ago

I've been so busy over the past couple of weeks I just now had a mo' to take a look. I must say it is possibly one of your best hubs Marissa. Thanks for sharing all that great info. I've just sent off a kids book, two weeks ago to an editor... so now I'm sitting around with my fingers, eyes and toes crossed. It is really very uncomfortable...

As I said great hub regards Zsuzsy

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Benson Yeung  says:
15 months ago

thanks for sharing these ideas. looking forward to reading more of these.

cheers,

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Marisa Wright  says:
15 months ago

Thank you so much, Zsuzsy! I wrote quite a number of articles on novel writing, arising from some serious research I did a few years ago. Unfortunately most of them are on Helium, and I can't delete them - so I've hesitated to put them on HP because of the duplicate content penalty. I must find time to rewrite some of them!

sam  says:
6 months ago

great advice thanks. I'm 11 years old and ever since I was around four years old I have had a great interest in writing... I went online for some advice as I am currently stuck on the 25th page of my "novel" This advice has really helped me and I am sure I can finish my novel now... cheers sam atherton

sentosasam@gmail.com

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Marisa Wright  says:
6 months ago

Thanks Sam, glad I could help. I wrote a novel at about your age - I don't think I actually finished it until I was about sixteen though!

cindyvine profile image

cindyvine  says:
6 months ago

Great advice, Marisa!

Sidney Rayne  says:
4 months ago

Very informative and you covered a lot of key elements...the five senses comment was dead on the money....by the way I have only gotten to four as well!

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