The Wave

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By MissJamieD



Standing still, I wait here

For a wave to wash over me

Expecting to be pulled under

And swept beneath the sea


From ashore I hear the seashells

Whispering my name

Hand on my brow to shade the sun

I seek clouds full of rain


Rays of warmth caress me

A slight breeze across my skin

I expect thunder and lightning to crash

When will the storm begin


No tears of God have fallen

No high tide, no wind, no rain

Although the sea is capable

I've been given sunlit days again


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Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
6 months ago

Beautiful.....restless and then soothing in the end. thank you! :)

Jodi Hoeksel profile image

Jodi Hoeksel  says:
6 months ago

This is truly lovely!! : )

Benjimester profile image

Benjimester  says:
6 months ago

I like it! The word picture "I seek clouds full of rain," is very cool. And a really awesome picture too. I love poems about anticipation. They're just fun to read. Thanks for sharing!

missjamied  says:
6 months ago

I always hope you have something good to say about my poems. I know I don't always write Poe quality, but I'm so happy that you liked it. Love ya. Hugs

jill of alltrades profile image

jill of alltrades  says:
5 months ago

This is beautiful, missjamied! I like it.

MissJamieD profile image

MissJamieD  says:
5 months ago

Jill--Thank you hon, so glad you liked it:) I love your username, that's cute. hugs

Charia Samher profile image

Charia Samher  says:
5 months ago

It seems like everything is going well with you, that's good. I can sense it in your poem. Very nice by the way, I like it! Very positive! =)

MissJamieD profile image

MissJamieD  says:
5 months ago

Charia--Thank you sweetie. You're right, things are going better for me, thank you so much. I wish you the best as well:) Hugs

wavegirl22 profile image

wavegirl22  says:
2 months ago

MissJamie- I came and read your Hubs on Narcissism .. though my situation is different as I am the daughter of one . . and I have a daughter that I may have passed some of it on to . . Yes, yes I have Hubs to come . .I am just trying to get the strength to hit "submit" . . and then I came upon "The Wave" and it is beautiful and inspiring and so many other things .. and may just be what I am needing today to do what I need to do . THANKYOU!

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MissJamieD  says:
6 weeks ago

wavegirl22-You're awesome sweetie, thank you so much! My life is fulfilled just knowing one person can put a smile on, when otherwise they may not have, if even only for a moment. I wish you the best and you can write me anytime if you need a shoulder:) Hugs

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