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How To Give Writing Feedback

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By BradyBones


Giving Writing Feedback

As an apriring writer there is nothing more helpful, nor scary, as feedback on your writing. In fact, practice and effective feedback are invaluable tools at any level of the writing process, regardless of your current skill. How is it then that many would-be authors shrivel at the thought of having their writing critically reviewed by others?

The primary answer to this question is a simple one. There are not many authors around who love to hear criticism of their own work. It's hard. You put a great deal of effort into writing something enjoyable and it may prove difficult to place yourself into the readers shoes when you're so invested. Some authors make the mistake of assuming their readers know as much of the backstory as they do. Some have problems sticking to one style and bounce around willy-nilly through their writing, leaving the reader entirely confused.

Probably one of the worst things to do as a writer receiving feedback is to argue. Simply take note of what the reviewer has to say, store it away for a few days until the emotion subsides, and take an honest look. But this article isn't so much about receiving feedback as it is giving it, so let's cut to the chase.

Giving effective feedback can be much more difficult than you would assume. It isn't merely showing up and giving your first impression and brutally honest opinion. If you love to read and truly wish to help an aspiring, or established, writer improve - you must provide what is often called "constructive criticism". During my Creative Writing, Advanced Creative Writing, and Journalism classes we were taught the principle of the "critique sandwich".

In essence, a critique sandwich is a method of providing a going point, a critical observation, and following up with another positive reinforcement. This critique style can be somewhat limiting, though, depending largely on the perceived quality of the writing. Honestly, providing feedback to an aspiring or established author shouldn't have to be quite so formatted. A simple rule of thumb is to treat your feedback with the care and sincerety that you would like to receive when you put your work out for the world to review. There is a difference between putting something bluntly and delivering feedback with sincerety and tact. Remember, you are providing feedback because the author trusts you to provide feedback that is honest and caring. That doesn't mean that you have to lie to them and never offer any sort of suggestions or criticisms.

For a related post on my blog, www.huntingthemuse.com, check out Gaining Perspective.

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REritr  says:
16 months ago

I can agree that feedback for writers is a valuable tool. In my eleven years as a professional writer for the real estate industry, getting feedback was proof that someone -- anyone -- actually READ what I took the time to write! That alone was gratifying!

If there is any one thing I can advise new writers about, however, it's the practice of keeping things concise. If an account I write for says it wants no more than 500 words, I know that doesn't mean 550.

Another would be to make your titles (headers) eye-catching and to start your piece off with a punchy introductory sentence or paragraph. Conclusions are not nearly as important. Your first sentence will either make them want to read further or force their eyes to gloss over, with very little happening in between.

When I receive interesting feedback here on hubpages, it makes me want to look at more of that contrbutor's writing -- just to see who they are and what else they care to write about.

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BradyBones  says:
16 months ago

Thanks for adding your valuable insight, REritr! Whether you are writing for a professional venue or for recreational reading, feedback is a valuable tool to improve the quality of your writing.

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