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How to Write an Effective Press Release

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By Lita Sorensen


Get the word out about that event!
Get the word out about that event!

Get the word out. That's step one of being noticed, or having your event noticed, or--even your book sold.

Press releases, or prepared statements written in a professional way that communicate newsworthy information to publishers, are often better received as messages to the public than any kind of advertising--print, television, or internet--ever is. This is because news stories picked up by quality publications are considered more legitimate...and sometimes, rightly so.

The good news is that press releases, with just a little audience savvy, are easy to write and distribute. Just follow the recipe herein, and your words (and event, announcement or promotion) will be in print in no time!

Basic Tips

It's still about the  4 W's and H--what every beginning journalism student is taught--to include the Who, What, When, Where and How of a story. And you've always got to think of your information in the form of a story, too. What will interest readers about your particular event? How can you communicate that in a way to get you noticed by both the editor and those reading any publication your material may appear in?

There is a general formula in writing a press release, and one which the editors of publications expect to see. This form goes as follows:

Logo or letterhead info block

Contact Information: Name, address, phone, and e-mail

The statement, usually in all caps: FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE, plus the date

Headline of the story, usually in all caps, with an area prefix, like this:
Sedona, AZ--CLASSICAL CONCERT AMID THE REDROCKS TO BENEFIT CHARITY

Body of the story

The use of -MORE- if the text continues on a second page, and the use of #### to signify the end of the press release text.

Besides having something newsworthy to say, professionalism and professional presentation also goes a long way. Part of this is just following the formula and meeting with expectations. Editors are busy people, and the easier you make things on them, the more they appreciate it.

Now, its still being passed on as general advice that you may snail mail, fax or e-mail your press release. However, that advice is nuts. Everything in the periodical world (for the most part--I'm talking about newspapers and magazines, not esoteric literary journals) runs on e-mail. Forget hard copies that will induce some clerk to have to type them up (if such people still have jobs...often unlikely in today's newspaper and magazine world).


Photos and Attachments

Another good practice is to include a few photographs with your text. Don't go overboard. Too many photos fills up people's e-mail box allotments and become an annoyance. Including 2-3 photos so that the editor has a choice of images is ideal. Write a descriptive cut line or caption identifying the people in the photo, or describing the situation, too.

Which brings us to another point. Some professionals, citing convenience for editors, such as I have hinted at above, believe it is wise to include the press release text within the body of your e-mail communication to the editor. I personally don't agree with this. Why? One reason is that it is too easy for your message to be distorted. You don't know what kind of tech situation the editor deals with (could be all e-mails are converted to plain text, in example). So, attach your press release as a word document, along with the photos.

Do write a personable note in your e-mail, even if you are targeting a big list of editors. Friendliness always seems to pay off, even in written communication. Explain in your note what you are presenting (it needn't be in detail), and identify your photos. Here, include your cut lines or captions, like so:

IMG08-A: Sedona Symphony cellist Sandy Hills has performed in desert communities throughout Arizona and California. (haha...bad joke.)

This seems to work well. The editor can then choose to use your blurb, or write one of their own, depending on what they want to do.

Always end your e-mail solicitation by telling the person addressed that you may be reached if they have any additional information or questions. Often, press releases are published as is, or edited a bit to match the publications style, or to change the information if the editor is aware that this will be appearing elsewhere. There is always the chance, however, that a magazine or newspaper--or even a website publication--will want to send a writer or photographer of their own to cover the event...or talk up your book, what have you. This is where contact information is crucial.

And that, in a nutshell, is all there is to it.

Traditional publications with names, of course, carry more clout than many web entities, although this is changing fast (and especially as more 'mainstream' publications also take their business to the net). Although you should compile a list of publications with the e-mail addresses of editors or reporters you want to target directly, an internet PR distribution service can also enhance your visibility. These can be purchased services, or there are sites that will help you launch your press release for free. The following is a great article to help with that...and contains a compilation of valuable links to free services:

http://mashable.com/2007/10/20/press-releases/

Good luck with your gig!


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nutuba profile image

nutuba  says:
5 weeks ago

Lita,

This is a wonderful hub! Your writing is succinct, clear, and to the point. It's perfect timing too -- I was planning on writing a press release today, and this hub will help. Thanks for sharing your insight with all of us!

Regards,

Joel Schnoor (nutuba)

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Ralph Deeds  says:
5 weeks ago

Well done!

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Lita Sorensen  says:
5 weeks ago

Hi, Joel/nutuba-- That's good--I'm glad I can help. I write these every week, so it is easy to express. Thank you, :)

Hi, Ralph-- Thank you for coming by. :)

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kartika damon  says:
5 weeks ago

Very solid and helpful info. - I bookmarked it! Kartika

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Lita Sorensen  says:
5 weeks ago

Hi, Kartika. Thanks! Once you know the formula, it's rather easy.

Christoph Reilly profile image

Christoph Reilly  says:
5 weeks ago

Cuts through all the rigmarole into a simple to understand guide. Well done!

Lita Sorensen profile image

Lita Sorensen  says:
5 weeks ago

Thanks, Chris. Yeah, cutting through the crap is the best way to do it. lol :) Thanks.

Mike Lickteig profile image

Mike Lickteig  says:
5 weeks ago

Was working on a press release after struggling to help a friend with one and found your post. Thanks for sharing, your informatin is very helpful.

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Lita Sorensen  says:
5 weeks ago

Thanks, Mike! Yeah, it really is just a format. Of course you have to know how to write them to peak interest, too. :) Appreciate the comment.

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Neil Sperling  says:
5 weeks ago

Well Done and much appreciated! Thanks

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Rebecca E.  says:
5 weeks ago

Very informative and solid hub, thanks for all teh tips, anyone can use them!

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Lita Sorensen  says:
5 weeks ago

Hi, Neal & Rebecca-- Appreciate you both coming by. I hope the info. was helpful.

Dutch Hermit profile image

Dutch Hermit  says:
7 days ago

Just a view additions:

One W is very important for journalists and for you, as someone who wants it published: When.

Secondly I want to ad this. I am a journalist student during the times I worked for practice on newspapers I found out one thing. Journalists are way to busy. They do not have time to control everything very well. If someone wrights a press-release as if it is an article, with a interesting title, a intro with the four W's and H and a journalistic way of writing they will often just make little changes. That is what you want too. I do not agree with this practice, but for everyone who wants his information to be spread, use this for your own convenience.

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Lita Sorensen  says:
7 days ago

Dutch...haha, I did leave out the When! How bad of me! (Well, the excuse is as a staff writer, I am very, very busy...lol.) I will fix it.

And what you relate is very, very true. Working on student publications, I never saw that, nor at large papers (the releases that were printed were often place in the back pages). Smaller publications...and in this age, definitely, absolutely you are right. There is often also a relationship with large advertisers that really isn't journalistically unethical...but one of utility, surely.

And you are right. My releases have appeared as stories in large regional mags. :) Thanks for the comment.

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