How's Barrack Doing So Far?
41Is Barrack Superman to the U.S.A?
Barrack President?
Mr. Barrack Sir? Written By: Espian
I woke up,
on a january day,
with a question to follow up,
where's your sun's ray?
I'm a young man,
almost able to vote,
yet my age has ran,
taken it's own boat,
to an island of hope,
for future dreams,
to come true by your election?
it is as it seems,
I only see a reflection,
Please Mr. Barrack,
Show me your vision,
to change this economy,
my mom's struggling,
to stay on the rock,
in this country's misery,
bring her back into the ring.
How has barrack obama been able to change the economy so far. I want to know. I beleive he can do it. I just want to see some examples of how he has done or plans to do it. Please let me know through some comments. I'd greatly appreciate it.
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Thanks.
Only one R in Barack :)
I feel totally unqualified to be here. a) I'm not a poetry expert or lover b) I'm not an American. Still gonna say something, though.
Your poem, in my humble opinion, states very clearly your hope for change, your opinion of the current economy, your mom's plight. In other words, you portrayed a lot through your poetic expression. I'm no poet, but I think you did a good job.
Re Mr. Obama, hasn't he only been in office like a week or two? It may be a little early for results. Besides, he has a big mess to clean up first, as I understand it. That being said, I (like much of the world) was very excited to see him win. He 'feels' like hope for the future and I hope he can make the changes that you and your mother are looking for.
Great job!
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goldentoad says:
11 months ago
I can save you the time. He's done zero. But it doesn't mean he won't. Keep on hoping, and good poem.