I Will Never Let Go!
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Fear today snuckup behind
serenade me, with his wine
touching my lips, mmmm'
you'll be just fine
YOU know you want it
ya baby, just one more time
then I'll let you go, baby you know me
back to your peace of mind
It took all I had to turn him away
so easy, mmmm' so easy
tantalizing taste on the tip of my tongue
He would be mine, mmmmmm'
"SNAP!"
remembering the days of old
she stares him down
you were never mine, you were, of the lying kind
but I, was most defiantly yours, lock, stock and barrel
The poison laced red wine
divine, yes you sold me on
leaving out, divine of the KILLING kind
I turn to him and gently said, I won't go back!
I can't go back! For now I know, I don't ever, have to look back!
For if I do, even for just a moment
I shall surely die a death of,
"choked up with tears"
a death of pride......................................................
DR
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Thank you arun, that means a lot. I am falling off my chair as I write this,...lol it is 1:15am. Dee
Wowww you deff write with a passion Dee, just don't fall off that chair. Deff loved this poem, a lot !!
"For if I do, even for just a moment
"I shall surely die a death of,
"choked up with tears"
a death of pride."
Just beautiful, the Cabin Girl salutes you !
@BC ya fear is not a friend, and I will not let it get to me, to many years wasted to go back down, the path of pity. Thanks BC, I have had a lot of help from my friends. Dee
@CG Thank you kind lady, from one brave soul to another.
HA! I love it! very nice rythem! love the use of itallics to accentuate the pronunceation. the mmmmm tho...hummmm ummmm ohhhh ahhhh ha! well its interesting, i just try not to praise things too much :P great art. and i'd suggest continuing to move forward and leave the past to the wine its drunk in. and seek to rekindle pride for it isn't always as "static" if its dead for now its back again. time is relative.
You're full of passion, woman. I like you.
@ Stolas LOL thanks, It's funny you should point that out to me. Because my mind just drew a blank on how to word the mmmmm, so I just left it at that....lol. Thank you for your encouragement, It sure came at the right time. Dee
@fierycj thank you, for you would know. Dee
arunjain1989 says:
4 months ago
Really good!!!