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It's Later Than You Think, Part One

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By Teresa McGurk


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Early evening is beautiful here, though; the skin becomes infused with the sunset and looks opaque at the periphery of your vision, but looking straight up or across the city it's still completely transparent, and you can imagine that there is only the air above and around you. But the best bit is the quiet.

It isn't a muffled quiet, either, which is what I would have expected from an enclosed space no matter how big. I like to look across the hydropon-gardens on the rooftops, and watch the birds fly and imagine they are free.

The last uplog of the day happens at 5:00pm for children seven to twelve years old (the under-sevens get a minimum dose once or twice a day; I haven't figured that one out yet). It's later for everyone else; however, as I'm still regarded as being in kiddy daycare here, I get to shut out the noise with the youngsters. I'm coping much better with the aud-logs, can even hold conversations now while they're streaming, but still can't manage the vids unless I'm sitting still somewhere with a blank wall in front of me.

I can't help thinking that they would have planned this better if they were going to pull someone through. They say they had to get me through in a hurry; but I've pretty much decided it wasn't them at all. It had to be the Farmers. I think my being on the train was a complete accident; a miscalculation, whatever: something got messed up and I was pulled through onto the train instead of outside or wherever they were doing it, and when the Pons unloaded at the depot they didn't even know I was on board.

I saw the medic's face when he realized I'd been in there during wash-down. "You don't subject people to that strength wash, even if they are Farmers," he'd said, although I had no idea what he meant at the time.

Oh, and they've changed their tactics. The question sessions only last three hours each, now. I guess they finally believe me when I say I can't cope with the constant barrage from the auds and vids.

No One Expects The Spanish Inquisition

They don't get any of my jokes. When they ask me to explain, I tell them to Google it. Then there's a pause, followed by a confab among them, as they access data on Google -- the "search engines" as we called them are all integrated and intuitive now.

See, this is the part I don't understand. Why would they keep grilling me if they have access to all the information they need, already? Unless they are simply trying to find out how I was pulled through, who did it, and why.

I have no idea. We start again.

"What information do you carry that we can best use?"

"Well, I dunno. What is it you need?"

"How best can you inform us?"

"How best? I could try singing, if you like."

"Tell us about where you're from."

"It's a fucked-up situation. You know more about it than I do. Access it on the logs."

"Tell us, anyway. There must be a lot of information that isn't available to us."

"OK: once upon a time, long ago but not very far away, there --"

"This expression, 'once upon a time,' is common parlance?"

"Do you want me to tell you this or not?"

"Continue."

"The American economy has finally crashed, which affected the world economy. China is poised to inherit the earth -- they just didn't know it, or what to do with it. We are on the edge of anarchy in the US. It looks bad -- homesteaders trying to live off the land, cattle rustlers back in operation, brink of disaster stuff: we don't know what's coming next. Mayhem. Civil unrest. Cats and dogs living together."

We all take a moment, while they try to figure out why my vid show is showing them an image of Bill Murray. I offer no explanation. Like I can control this stuff? It just reads my mind.

"Continue."

"I don't know what you want to hear! Why did you bring me through?"

"We need to know some of the circumstances that led up to the Incursions."

"What are the Incursions? When do they happen?"

"Please, we've told you already: we'll have to confer on the matter of what to reveal to you. We'll tell you as much as we can, as soon as we can."

"You keep saying that. Can I speak to the boss?"

Pause,

"Do you mean the Emperatrix?"

"I guess -- is she the boss?"

"We cannot allow that at the moment. Please continue. Tell us about life before the Incursions -- life as you knew it in the early 2000's."

"God, I don't know what you want to hear! Gasoline prices are a big issue -- there is a lot of hassle with different countries trying to control the world market, control the supply of gasoline. I mean, we know we need to stop using it, but the whole infrastructure of all First World and even many Third World countries is built on the existence of the road grids, the automobiles, everyone's right to burn un-renewable fuels. Sure, there is a movement to turn to greener power sources, but --"

"-- Greener? What is green about them?"

"Not literally green. I mean environmentally non-toxic and non-threatening forms of power production -- wind power, solar power, that kind of thing. We call it green."

"Could you phrase your explanations without using such terminology?"

"Could you bite me?"

Pause.

"Please continue. Why was there such a delay in switching from fossil fuels to these. . . green sources of power?"

"Money. While there is still gasoline to be pumped out of the ground, people want to pump it and sell it. And we're dependent on it to get to work, to get to the store, to heat and cool our homes -- we don't live in giant transparent domes where 'all power needs are integrated into a flexible distribution pattern and no waste is produced'" -- this last bit was the audio-feed I was simultaneously getting, so I just repeated it, and there was a picture of a Pons home with the power supply highlighted in pink, against a backdrop of the skin rendered slightly opaque by a beautiful sunset.

"Why did you let this situation occur? The climate changes were already raising ocean levels."

"How the hell can we stop it?"

Pause.

"Continue."

I thought for a moment. "That's what the Incursions are? Enough pissed-off people trying to overthrow big oil?"

"We cannot discuss past events in your future."

"Say what?"

"You understand us perfectly. Please continue."

"Scientists are predicting a rise in the sea level of 20 feet in the next one hundred years, although. . . that may be partly offset -- by the vast regions of peat bogs, in the northern hemisphere; they can literally soak up the water like a sponge. I dunno. I guess we do something right, though -- or you guys wouldn't be here, would you?"

Pause.

we will build Jerusalem, in England's green and pleasant land

From the rooftops, in the hydro-pons (the gardens with no dirt in them, 'cause we wouldn't want dirt upsetting the eco-system, now would we?), I like to look out through the skin, at the other towns that don't have domes, tensile skins keeping them free from contaminants. The Farmers must be tough enough, that's for sure, to have survived whatever it was that took place (they won't even tell me what year it is, for crying out loud -- but I think we must be at least several hundred years into the future. I mean, I don't recognize any landmarks).

They still farm soil. Keep animals, too, although I've never seen any.

I wonder if they still brew beer out there. Distill liquor. I could sure use a drink. Here, they have "O-J," "T-J," and "C-J" to drink, but none of them taste like anything I'm remotely familiar with (well, the O-J has a kind of peachy aftertaste, but it isn't exactly pleasant). They are colorless and odorless, and I can't help thinking it's just recycled piss, but the Pons assure me it's gray water, not black.

These clothes are very comfortable, though. It's a soft fiber -- maybe bamboo? They grow a lot of bamboo in here. A lot of the furniture must be bamboo, although it looks like wood. Not much metal anywhere. No foundries? No factories? The auds won't let me access that kind of information, and the vids just show images of verdant bamboo groves waving in an imaginary breeze.


Don't look back

"Tell us about North Korea."

"I don't really know anything. If you look at the country on a satellite image at night -- the whole place is dark. They're in the dark ages. But they just tested a nuclear device of some sort."

"Continue."

"Are the Incursions related to North Korea? China? Is there a nuclear war?"

"That was your main worry -- a nuclear attack?"

"I guess. I mean, with countries like Pakistan and North Korea having nuclear capabilities -- who knows what the fuck could happen. Did it?"

Pause.

"You really know very little about the situation that was developing? -- Or are you still reluctant to talk to us?"

"I wouldn't mind some answers. But what can an ordinary person like me tell you? I just read the news online. All I know comes from what the news sources release. But it's not like the news media are withholding information -- they just tell us the news that sells."

Pause. "Sells?"

"Yeah -- sells papers, sells magazines, makes us watch their TV channels. Information is a commodity, a product, like anything else. It's market-driven."

"And what do you want to know?"

That was a good question. Now I know how Lemuel Gulliver felt when he was being grilled about England by his Houyhnhnm master. "Apparently, if you survey the news feeds, we want to know about reality shows and celebrities who adopt children from other countries. I guess we are in denial."

Pause, while we all contemplate an image of Madonna with big breasts.

"Tell us about food production."

"Do I have to? Can't we all go watch a movie or something? Chill a while?"

"We brought you through so you could tell us about the early 2000's."

"You didn't bring me through at all! Admit it! It was the Farmers, wasn't it? And I don't think you have the first clue how I got here or how I'm ever going to get home!"

"You still want to go home?"

"Hell yes, I do! Ya think I want to live here in a plastic bag?"

Pause. Images of plastic, then latex, then condoms, for some reason. Who is thinking that?

I'm riled, now. "Why can't you talk to me face-to-face? Why do we have to talk through the logs? Scared you'll catch cooties?"

What do I know?

These questions they ask.  What DO I know?  We could be on the brink -- must be on the brink -- of something global, otherwise they wouldn't be asking me about the 2000's.  Jeez.  I need to get out of this dome; I need to get to the Farmers and find out why -- and how -- they brought me here.

And if I can ever go home.

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raiderfan profile image

raiderfan  says:
5 months ago

awesome. I was glued to the screen the whole time.

Laughing Mom profile image

Laughing Mom  says:
5 months ago

Wow. This kind of stuff kind of freaks me out. It's a great piece, Teresa.

And thanks again for your help.

Teresa McGurk profile image

Teresa McGurk  says:
5 months ago

Thank you, Raider -- you sound almost human (and used punctuation!) What gives? Glad, very glad, you liked it.

Laughing Mom -- you have no idea what a pleasure it is for me to assist in any little way I can. Hugs.

lxxy profile image

lxxy  says:
5 months ago

Nice thought bubbles. =)

And you're right--no one expects the spanish inquisition!

Tom Cornett profile image

Tom Cornett  says:
5 months ago

This is great.....awesome writing.....thanks! :)

Rochelle Frank profile image

Rochelle Frank  says:
5 months ago

Wow-- I agree with raiderfan (who would ever think I'd say that). Absolutely fascinating stuff. I hope you are writing this book and keeping the rest of it to yourself until you get the contract.

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Teresa McGurk  says:
5 months ago

Thank you, lxxy -- yeah, I had fun with those thought-images.

Tom -- why, thank you: that's real praise, coming from you!

Rochelle: yeah, there's tons more of this, but it's in my head and not on file. It's been bubbling and brewing. Who knows if I'll ever write it down, though. My problem is that once I find out what the whole story-arc is, I get bored, and go on to something else.

Trivia247  says:
5 months ago

heh I love it.

Rochelle Frank profile image

Rochelle Frank  says:
5 months ago

OK-- so you need to get it all down before you find out what's happening.

Pete Maida profile image

Pete Maida  says:
5 months ago

Excellent! I always knew you were a talent but I didn't think your interest went t science fiction. This is good environment smack down stuff.

Lady Rogue profile image

Lady Rogue  says:
5 months ago

I love it! When can I have more?

Frieda Babbley profile image

Frieda Babbley  says:
5 months ago

I need the next installment.  I'm jonesing already.  Where is it? Focus, woman... focus!

Teresa McGurk profile image

Teresa McGurk  says:
5 months ago

Hey Trivia, hey Pete: glad you both like it!

Rochelle: yep -- that's the only way it ever seems possible -- but how in the heck am I gonna manage it?

Lady Rogue -- great; you are giving me an incentive to write some more. We should venture out into the farmlands, maybe. . .

Frieda -- thank you for coming by -- your comments always mean a lot to me.

trooper22 profile image

trooper22  says:
5 months ago

I am with Rochelle Frank...Awesome. PRINT IT and make money. I'll buy it!

Teresa McGurk profile image

Teresa McGurk  says:
5 months ago

Oh trooper, thank you so much -- I'm really glad folks like it; it's fun to write.

Elena. profile image

Elena.  says:
5 months ago

Shesh, I guess I don't need to go catch the latest Terminator flick.  You don't really tell how it ends but you certainly tell how we got damn there!

Kudos, you science fiction goddess you!

Iphigenia profile image

Iphigenia  says:
5 months ago

What writing - you should definitely publish this - if you can't write it quickly enough - talk it out into a machine or something.

It's a fascinating and disturbing story - and scarily possible - the bamboo clothing ? i've got some of that - and bamboo knitting fibre ....

The Sanish Inquisition - they exist by a number of names

And the reference to Gulliver's Travels - just served to weave in more magic and layers of meaning.

I knew you could write - but this is truly gobsmacking.

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pgrundy  says:
5 months ago

Wow, this is great stuff. Is it part of a longer piece? (Or the beginning of one?) Seriously, I see a book here. You already have the makings of a world, and of course it all has to end badly somehow, which shouldn't be hard! lol!

You know, on a serious note I always thought that the alien abduction stuff, if real, is more likely some kind of time travel loop like in your story here--the 'aliens' look too much like people with no physical demands on them to be truly alien. They are so obviously the not-us part of 'us'.

You're so talented Teresa. I hope you publish this. Thanks for sharing it.

Hawkesdream profile image

Hawkesdream  says:
5 months ago

Had to read this twice, just couldn't take it all in the first time, Is this the future as you see it? Scarey stuff!

2patricias profile image

2patricias  says:
5 months ago

I really enjoyed reading this, and I am not into Sci Fi. This has some rather scary, believable parts to it! And your references to things like hydroponics and bamboo as fibre kept it in touch with the world we know. Really, you should try to expand this into at least a short story.

A few random thoughts I had while I was reading this - hopeful random thoughts:

bamboo takes MUCH less water than cotton to grow.

My daughter has just spent a week on a tiny island off Scotland that produces all its electricity from wind and solar power. Some people on the island own electric cars that they just plug into the system. She was there with a group from the school where she teaches - it was a school trip to see how things work there. It is a tiny place - but in a way we all live in tiny places that are joined together.

Teresa McGurk profile image

Teresa McGurk  says:
5 months ago

Hey Elena -- this is part of a larger idea, that I'm quickly thinking of expanding -- so look out for part two!

Iphi --thanks; I loved the bamboo groves in Japan so much, and the fibre is great. The wood makes flooring and furniture, and is lovely.

Pgrundy -- time, as a dimension, is surely as "bendable" as a piece of paper. . . .

Hawkes -- scary? Hmmm; we'll see! I need to flesh out description of the city.

2pats -- thanks for the read; I like what you say about us all living in tiny places that are joined together.

Peggy W profile image

Peggy W  says:
5 months ago

I loved this! Have always thought that science fiction was simply in some people's heads far ahead of it becoming reality. Can't wait for your next installment.

Cris A profile image

Cris A  says:
5 months ago

Wow this is truly an amazing read - the interrogation made me feel like listening to an oracle. This could be adapted into a movie! I'll have my shades ready for the next installment! :D

\Brenda Scully  says:
5 months ago

Really like Neil Young...

Teresa McGurk profile image

Teresa McGurk  says:
5 months ago

Peggy, Cris, Brenda -- thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read. I really appreciate it!

alekhouse profile image

alekhouse  says:
5 months ago

Teresa, First time I've been by to read your stuff. Sci Fi is not my favorite genre, but this was, although somewhat disturbing, truly facinating. It really kept my attention.

Jerilee Wei profile image

Jerilee Wei  says:
5 months ago

Like some others, this isn't what I normally would choose to read. However, just the title alone kept my curiosity. I consider you to be one of the top 3 most talented writers on hubpages and I can't wait to see (as my grandmother would say) "how you turn out as an author."

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Teresa McGurk  says:
5 months ago

alekhouse: thank you for coming by -- this is the first sci fi piece I've written, so I'm very glad you stayed to read.

Jerilee -- what a lovely compliment! I wish I deserved it! But now you have me intrigued to know (as your grandmother would say) "how I turn out"! Thank you!

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tonymac04  says:
5 months ago

Great and sobering story, Teresa. Not really my "cup of tea", sc-fi, as they say, but it was interesting.

I must admit that I think it is great as a short story.

Love and peace

Tony

john guilfoyle  says:
5 months ago

i discovered part 1...and realize I began it 4 days ago but was interrupted...

how wonderful, i'm digging it...this is the cat's meow..

write on....is the first person theresa? I can sense some character development here...keep this going woe man...this serial would go well with cereal and coffee and toast and such...ya know...as an eye opener..

sci-fi and fantasy surely seem to afford the greatest accessibility for an emerging writer...

but I hesitate and am reluctant to categorize your writing theresa...it is quite simply good.

peace and love..write on.

blondepoet profile image

blondepoet  says:
5 months ago

Teresa heck you write with a punch that was amazing x0x

Denny Lyon profile image

Denny Lyon  says:
5 months ago

Hi, Teresa, I had no idea what I started when I made the request of "being thrown 300 years into the future and what would you tell them about your time"! You were the only soul brave enough to take on the challenge.  Girl, you sure know about torture and de-briefing! :) 

Sorry I took so long to catch up to you to read your 1st piece - and now 6 more to go as you are on a roll!  Will have to blog this over to my poetry blog for others to enjoy when you are finished with the installments.  Thanks for writing it, great read!

Teresa McGurk profile image

Teresa McGurk  says:
5 months ago

Hey Denny -- I've really been enjoying your request -- got me thinking, that's for sure! Thanks for stopping by.

Blonde, Tony, John -- thanks for reading, and for commenting.

Bryan Robertson profile image

Bryan Robertson  says:
4 months ago

Hi, Teresa - Great story so far - I am looking forward to part 2!

Teresa McGurk profile image

Teresa McGurk  says:
4 months ago

Thanks, Bryan -- 'preciate it!

Enelle Lamb profile image

Enelle Lamb  says:
4 months ago

Wow Teresa - that was awesome! I'm off to read #2 and so on and so on lol :D this was great!

Christoph Reilly profile image

Christoph Reilly  says:
2 months ago

Compelling! I continue...

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