Keep Frozen
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'someone loved me once'
he thinks to himself
with that odd half smile
the half that loved her back
once
history repeated only in memory
better blurry, hauntingly hazy
'someone loved me once'
he thinks. and for him, that is
enough
25May09
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thank you. I missed you a great deal. I would love to see your latest art. :)
me too missed you a lot...I will be in around...of-course with my art...
You're back! Oh, I'm so happy to see you, my dear. We've all missed you a great deal.
I missed you as well.
flapping off the powdery coat of fame
tiny wings wave
over the uninitiated
longing for a little
frost of their own...
lol, you just delight me... how very frozen sparrow of you. oh my goodness, let me try to return something.
upon a great stone wall
shivering in the startling blue
tiny sparrow feet firmly planted
solitary and tiny along the stones
frozen sparrow trusts another
blizzard survivor will soon appear.
one by one
the flock forms
alighting upon
the rocky wall
beak to beak
nourishment flows
a relative army gathers
strong like stones
loving like sisters
fighting like life
which always finds
a means of survival
up the revolution
frozen sparrows unite
And this one? It really stings a lot.
quiet, I don't mind the occasional link, but I would appreciate it if you let me explore your hubs at the best times for me. I would prefer if you didn't drop links in every comment. I realize you can't know unless I tell ya, so now you know.
I do like your writing; I am impressed, and I don't doubt I will be reading many of your Hubs.
Sets a garland of baby roses upon your brow
For the Queen returneth
All bow
aw, the return of the UNpoet, but perhaps queen of that, eh?
and I'd put rose petals in your path as a response, from my own garden, if you lived close enough to float through them, oh poem fairy of my heart. :)
thank you for the welcome back.
GuruC, I put our exchange in here, where it belongs. :)
So happy to be part of the FSR!
Failte, comradai! (welcome, comrade!)
You remind me again why I'm one of your fans Iounn...I'm gone have to come back if just to continue reading your words, definitely worth my time-smile.
Thank you for that
this one is such a mix, perhaps I should have gone one way or another, it's a tweener. and it's him of course, meandhim, himandme, meandhim. I'm trying to work out of it.
Thank you my lovely flower, for taking time to comment.
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rabi Khan says:
7 months ago
lovely...
Very glad you come back...so am I..