Keep Frozen

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By Iðunn

flickr - mike tn
flickr - mike tn
 
'someone loved me once'
he thinks to himself
with that odd half smile
the half that loved her back
once
 
history repeated only in memory
better blurry, hauntingly hazy
'someone loved me once'
he thinks.  and for him, that is 
enough
 
25May09

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rabi Khan profile image

rabi Khan  says:
7 months ago

lovely...

Very glad you come back...so am I..

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
7 months ago

thank you. I missed you a great deal. I would love to see your latest art. :)

rabi Khan profile image

rabi Khan  says:
7 months ago

me too missed you a lot...I will be in around...of-course with my art...

Guru-C profile image

Guru-C  says:
7 months ago

You're back! Oh, I'm so happy to see you, my dear. We've all missed you a great deal.

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
7 months ago

I missed you as well.

Guru-C profile image

Guru-C  says:
7 months ago

flapping off the powdery coat of fame

tiny wings wave

over the uninitiated

longing for a little

frost of their own...

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
7 months ago

lol, you just delight me... how very frozen sparrow of you. oh my goodness, let me try to return something.

upon a great stone wall

shivering in the startling blue

tiny sparrow feet firmly planted

solitary and tiny along the stones

frozen sparrow trusts another

blizzard survivor will soon appear.

Guru-C profile image

Guru-C  says:
7 months ago

one by one

the flock forms

alighting upon

the rocky wall

beak to beak

nourishment flows

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
7 months ago

a relative army gathers

strong like stones

loving like sisters

fighting like life

which always finds

a means of survival

up the revolution

frozen sparrows unite

quietnessandtrust profile image

quietnessandtrust  says:
7 months ago

And this one? It really stings a lot.

http://hubpages.com/hub/Public-Confession

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
7 months ago

quiet, I don't mind the occasional link, but I would appreciate it if you let me explore your hubs at the best times for me.  I would prefer if you didn't drop links in every comment.  I realize you can't know unless I tell ya, so now you know.

I do like your writing; I am impressed, and I don't doubt I will be reading many of your Hubs. 

Poetic Muse profile image

Poetic Muse  says:
7 months ago

Sets a garland of baby roses upon your brow

For the Queen returneth

All bow

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
7 months ago

aw, the return of the UNpoet, but perhaps queen of that, eh?

and I'd put rose petals in your path as a response, from my own garden, if you lived close enough to float through them, oh poem fairy of my heart. :)

thank you for the welcome back.

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
7 months ago

GuruC, I put our exchange in here, where it belongs. :)

http://hubpages.com/hub/Frozen_Sparrow_Revolutiona

Guru-C profile image

Guru-C  says:
7 months ago

So happy to be part of the FSR!

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
7 months ago

Failte, comradai! (welcome, comrade!)

NightFlower profile image

NightFlower  says:
7 months ago

You remind me again why I'm one of your fans Iounn...I'm gone have to come back if just to continue reading your words, definitely worth my time-smile.

Thank you for that

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
7 months ago

this one is such a mix, perhaps I should have gone one way or another, it's a tweener. and it's him of course, meandhim, himandme, meandhim. I'm trying to work out of it.

Thank you my lovely flower, for taking time to comment.

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