Love Bath

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By Not Telling


Let me draw you

A bath

Of pure

Love

Make sure

Love

The temperature

Is warm

Enough

And that

The tub is full

Enough

To completely

Immerse you

In pure

Warm

Love

When the bath

Is ready

Steaming

I will not be there

Only my

Love

Step in

Lie down

Feel it surround you

Warm and good

As your body relaxes

And

All hurt dissolves

You sigh

Exhaling all your cares

Far, far away

I dance

Overjoyed

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

wow...lovely coziness and warmth...

just noticed I missed one, ooops! on my way.

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
3 months ago

Thank you, Invictus :)

\Brenda Scully  says:
3 months ago

and it works i know it does,,,,,,, nice as always

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
3 months ago

Thank you, Brenda :)

DREAM ON profile image

DREAM ON  says:
2 months ago

What a way to end every day.

poetlorraine profile image

poetlorraine  says:
2 months ago

or to begin it Dream On

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
2 months ago

...or to spend it..Dream On... :)

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
2 months ago

Thank you, Dream On, Poetlorraine and Invictus

Am I dead, yet? profile image

Am I dead, yet?  says:
2 months ago

You know, in reading this poem, I think many of us do not have the time to draw a bath and being able to find the relief and comfort you describe here in your work. Sounds so redeeming! Well done NT!

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
2 months ago

A hot bath, maybe throw in some ginger and scallions, can do wonders. Thank you, Am I Dead, Yet. :)

cindyleedavis profile image

cindyleedavis  says:
2 months ago

Hi, Not Telling, your poem is very peaceful.

Baths are nice. Baths of love from our Father in Heaven are wonderful. Thank you.

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
2 months ago

All love comes from the same Source, Cindy Lee :)

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poetlorraine  says:
34 hours ago

a nice warm soak, and time to meditate is a wonderful thing, one of the best things in life

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