Love On Rise

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By I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s


 

Sleepless torment, crowded whispers

 

Entangled passions, painted unrest

 

Ache in mind, bleeding embers

 

Days of furry built a nest

 

Road-less wonders ever increasing

 

Devouring questions of the rest

 

Striding through all consumed

 

Glorious contentment feels the best

 

Seconds away, nothing less

 

Commitment through pain and sorrows

 

Every moment til' you see

 

Ravens fly through all weathered

 

Phoenix rises continuous ends

 

Love not what shall hinder

 

Always strive to the best

 

My love is here forever

 

Never shallow like the rest.

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Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
4 months ago

Fiery images, Invictus, makes a fiery poem!

Gypsy Willow profile image

Gypsy Willow  says:
4 months ago

Passionful and eloquent!

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

Not Telling- Thank you very much! :)

Gypsy- Much appreciated! :)

jill of alltrades profile image

jill of alltrades  says:
4 months ago

Wow, this is beautiful! Thank you very much for sharing!

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

jill of alltrades- Thank you for the lovely comment!

\Brenda Scully  says:
4 months ago

This sounds vaguely familiar ...... x

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

Hi Brenda, long time no see! :) Thank you for the lovely comment! x

\Brenda Scully  says:
4 months ago

I have been to sleepy Gallway for the weekend, where it seems computers have not been invented...

manlypoetryman profile image

manlypoetryman  says:
4 months ago

Like the various imagery you present...both in contrast and agreement to what you portray in "Love on Rise"...Well done!

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

Thanks Brenda, I worry when you are not heating up the screen ! :D

Thank you for such a lovely reflection. I appreciate hearing all reflections because they broaden the life of the poem, manlypoetryman! :)

The Manmoth profile image

The Manmoth  says:
4 months ago

Imaginative and strikingly familiar...Thanks.

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

The Mammoth ~ Yeeks... Can;t believe I haven't seen this comment! Thank you VERY much! :)

Crazdwriter profile image

Crazdwriter  says:
2 months ago

Two thumbs WAY up! I love it!

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 weeks ago

Crazd ~ Thank you very much. I ao appreciate you taking the time to read.. So happpy you love it!! :)

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