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By I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s


Having met you

 

       I feel anew

 

Having been guided by you

 

       Warmth in my soul grew

 

Having been hurt by you

 

       I knew my feelings were true

 

Having an apology from you

 

       My feelings grew

 

Having been caressed by you

 

       Blooming in bliss

 

Having a kiss from you

 

       My heart dances all day

 

Having a spoon with you

 

       A delightful cocoon

 

Having late night chats with you

 

       Colorful painted dreams

 

Having love from you

 

       My heart flows through the everglades

 

Having dreamt of you

 

       So blessed to find you

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IrishJig89 profile image

IrishJig89  says:
6 months ago

Not Bad. I like.

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 months ago

Thank you, IrishJig89!

Gypsy Willow profile image

Gypsy Willow  says:
6 months ago

Well done you have painted nice scenes here!

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 months ago

Thank you so much, Gypsy! :)

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

wonderful, I like the aspect of growth and maturing together.

jill of alltrades profile image

jill of alltrades  says:
6 months ago

Another beautiful poem! Are the photos yours? I love them!

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 months ago

Iounn- Thank you very much! :)

Jill of alltrades- Thank you for the lovely comment! The photo's are from google images! :)

\Brenda Scully  says:
6 months ago

What a wonderful journey you are having, who has dared to hurt you.......

brilliant expressions and imagery.....

I don't know how you find such beautiful songs, but I DO SO ENJOY LISTENING AND WATCHING THEM.....

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
6 months ago

Your poems just get better and better.

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 months ago

Thank you so very much, Brenda! It is a wondrous journey to be stirred in a way that reveals the hidden treasures of our souls! :)

Thank you, Not Telling! Always grateful to receive a compliment from one such as you! :)

ameliehub profile image

ameliehub  says:
6 months ago

Nice words and expressed more beautifully. video is more touching.

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
6 months ago

You're growing well, in many ways

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 months ago

Thank you very much, ameliehub, for the lovely comment ans coming by! :)

Ohhhh.....ralwus...now, something would have to be very wrong if I was not affected by the inspiring effects of hubpages, eh? lol :) - Your so sweet, I love you! ;)

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
6 months ago

Well now, I really am sincere. But you must not love me, only mebbe admire my work is all and visit now and again. i leave ya a tickle kiss is all

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 months ago

Oh, thanks so very much, ralwus! I am very grateful for your sincerity.You ar ver inspiring. I feel your heart is true and sincere always, even when you're joking, you're heart shows and glows. Thanks for the tickle kiss. lol - back at ya! ;)

bingskee profile image

bingskee  says:
6 months ago

oh, love, love, love and the many things it can do!

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 months ago

Thank you for coming by, bingskee! I greatly appreciate your lovely words! :)

SEM Pro profile image

SEM Pro  says:
5 months ago

Ahhh I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s, I needed a dose of delightful pillow talk so I meandered to find the one who includes all the emotions that can be stirred, with trust from the depth of the soul. Once again, you did not disappoint my dear :) Thank you! I am fulfilled...

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
5 months ago

Ahhh...SEMPro, you are too lovely! I feel like I am dreaming, even when I am awake! **sigh** =) ~ Thank you for stopping by.

G-Ma Johnson profile image

G-Ma Johnson  says:
5 months ago

Loved it...I was too close to home for me...and the song OMG...:O) Hugs

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
5 months ago

G-ma, you are sooo lovely! Thank you! =) {{Hugs}}

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oscillationatend  says:
5 months ago

My heart sings.. =)

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
5 months ago

I am very happy to hear that, oscillationated! ;)

loua profile image

loua  says:
5 months ago

I'm a fan...

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
5 months ago

Ioua~ Great! Thank you.

XTASIS profile image

XTASIS  says:
5 months ago

Loved this poem. Such feelings ! thank you!

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
5 months ago

XTASIS ~ I am very happy you loved this! I thank you!!

\Brenda Scully  says:
5 months ago

retiring for the evening... just re reading this i like it

Earthscribe profile image

Earthscribe  says:
5 months ago

Moving, slender light from

a glass unbroken.

Crystal thoughts unfettered

by a life of loving.

Beautiful.

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
5 months ago

Brenda ~ Thanks! :) ~ great to have you back...you've been missed!

Earthscribe ~ :) Thanks for the lovely comment!

\Brenda Scully  says:
4 months ago

and agin....

Denizee profile image

Denizee  says:
4 months ago

Excellent emotion filled write - with exotic tones and shared happiness love can bring.

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

Denizee ~ thanks a lot for the lovely comment! :)

gwennies pen profile image

gwennies pen  says:
4 months ago

Thanks for sharing the sweet poem and the video. I loved them both!! : ) I'm a sucker for great romance and all that goes along with it.

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

gwennies pen ~ Thanks for the lovely comment! yeah, I'm a sucker for all the romance stuff, too..keeps the love alive! :)

DREAM ON profile image

DREAM ON  says:
4 months ago

it has been raining all day.Then i read your poem and the sun came out.

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

I am very happy to here that, :) It has been raining here as well. Oh the sun!

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crayonbrains  says:
4 months ago

''Having been hurt by you..i knew my feeling were true'' i love that line !Thanks for sharing!

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

crayonbrains~ Thanks so much! I love your name! :)

\Brenda Scully  says:
4 months ago

you have not wrote any like this for a while, just listening to this song again, trying to steal it to see if i can put it on one of my hubs..... you might get mad at me , but you will forgive me

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EQLK5a5-rQA

I know :) sorry...use the song all you like, it is beautiful! Here's the link...

\Brenda Scully  says:
4 months ago

oh thanks a lot..... i will write a hub around it, can't wait to do that

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

Your quite welcome! :) can't wait to see it!

\Brenda Scully  says:
4 months ago

have you seen what they have done to our steak seasoning thread,,,,,,,,,, shall we make another one

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
4 months ago

hey, I did check it out earlier today..I;m not worried. :) This seems to be your poem,eh? :) See you soon.

\Brenda Scully  says:
3 months ago

yep it is mine, just listening to the song now

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

nice..yeah this cd of Colbie Callait is Awesome...These song are very special to me.. :)

\Brenda Scully  says:
3 months ago

do they have good memories then....... i have not heard the whole c.d. maybe i should listen to the whole thing at some stage.....

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

yes..particually this one and "oxygen". They are from the "Coco" cd. There are others that I like too. May do poems with them.

\Brenda Scully  says:
3 months ago

oh yeah do some poems just so i can read and enjoy the music..... good morning how are you today....

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

sounds good. I am great this morning. Motivating myself to start writing more, ha ha ... and you?

\Brenda Scully  says:
3 months ago

yep me toooooo.... still in the dog house, but we are both of work so we will see how the day goes, i will use my charm. want to stop wasting time in forums, and write something really good.... shall we both go for it..... forums are a bit addictive but stop serious writing....... ah well write about where you live with photos, maybe i will do the same..... let's get brilliant at this writing thing........ well improve a bit, we are already brilliant of course we are xxxxxxx

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

sweet...yeah, I'm sure you have all the measures to get out of the dog house..he he ... I here you with the writing bit and yes, the forums can rope you in.. :)

chrissie123 profile image

chrissie123  says:
3 months ago

Wow.....this one left me speechless just wow....

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

chrissie123~ I greatly appreciate your comment. Thanks for reading.. :)

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
3 months ago

I just had to come back and read your magic.

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

Awww, so sweet! :D anytime dear! lol

DREAM ON profile image

DREAM ON  says:
3 months ago

On the hub pages do people constantly come and go?I noticed Brenda Scully has left. She wrote some nice poems just like yourself.Do you know why she could of left?

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

DREAM ON ~ ya know, I have seen some great people disappear from HP. I am not sure the reasons, maybe burnout, boredom, who knows...

I heard from Brenda and she is fine and taking a break... She sends all warm wishes.. :)

"She WILL be back"

DREAM ON profile image

DREAM ON  says:
3 months ago

Thanks again for checking on Brenda.She helped me along and it amazing how some people have a way of influencing your writings.I realize there are so many writers and so little time.I know how long it takes me to write.I like to see the appreciation people have for others.Some how in real life it's the doggy doggy world.The hub pages seem different.

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

You're right, Dream ON! People here are very influential and very inspiring to writing when you connect...I have had a wonderful time here...Sure you will here from B when she returns... :)

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poetlorraine  says:
3 months ago

B returns, drinking martini and wine at the same time and listening to this song, hi dream on invictus, whoever else you are,,,, pearl diver etcc

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

Lol ~ Oh, give me a moment to travel up to start the song...k...

Ohhhh, I soooooooooooo feel a poem coming on! LOL

BTW~ what's with the question about why I write poerty, eh???

can i answer in a poem?? :D

poetlorraine profile image

poetlorraine  says:
3 months ago

answer any way you like, crazed writer might help you do it, she seems a great girl ha ah

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

Ha ha ... thanks, for that! I need more music in my life! :) It is here really, just need to turn it on! :D

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
3 months ago

Kiss away dear and spoon to the Moon.

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

Ah, CC...I have a lovely spin here....and it is so

lovely! ;)

Miss Take profile image

Miss Take  says:
2 weeks ago

just wanted to read again and listen to the music

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
2 weeks ago

thanks, Miss! funny Cris has not realised you, yet! =) we were all on fire at this time, eh? kinda like now but different.

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Miss Take  says:
2 weeks ago

isn't it strange that out of all the names on here, he has this one first on list of unusual names.... i think you are in cahoots with him and he knows everything, just forget sometimes that i am too niave for this place

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
2 weeks ago

cahoots?? :D no...don't worry. hey why not email him and tell him who you are?? I don't think he has it yet..... ( btw i'm all the dots) Hahahahaha

you cannot have them back ! LOL

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Miss Take  says:
2 weeks ago

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
2 weeks ago

I'm fine... yet, do not want to talk about it!

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