My Choosing - Free Form Poetry about difficult choice

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By Bobbie Sandlin

Flickr: Broken heart © TimOve
Flickr: Broken heart © TimOve

Surely as the fireflies dance amongst moonbeams
on a sultry summer evening, I am captured in your
emerald eyes.  Paradox windows beckon me, as
your pain hints and sparkles.  Your voice...
a swords' edge, so sharp.  You test me with riddles
and innuendo, cutting me in discipline...

I tip-toe in sweet nothing's verses, shallow...
so meaningless, and you smile.  I dare not jinx
this moment by speaking my love.  My heart
inside out I as ache to admit my truth to you,
offer you the infinity within.  Our dance, your
verbal leprosy.  I give you what you demand, 
I break.  You toy at my heart, discounting
it's worth.  You pluck my soul's strings
vibrating in twisted, agonizing melodies
until snapped.  Curly debris, tangled lesson...

Surely as a sparrow sings amongst the morning
rays of the sun at dawn, I choose...
walking away from you.

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\Brenda Scully  says:
5 months ago

i don't think that was supposed to be funny ..... for some reason it made me laugh

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Marisa Wright  says:
5 months ago

What an intriguing poem (I know you're calling it prose but I'd call it a free form poem, I think. It makes me wonder what was so wrong about the object of your affection, that you had to walk away. It's a sign of a good piece of writing that it makes you think!

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Bobbie Sandlin  says:
5 months ago

Thank you Marisa. FREE FORM!! lol I knew it was something but it stuck my more as prose than traditional. That was the phrase I was looking for!

Thank you. It felt like it had many dimensions to it after I wrote it, being that people take something out of it.

\Brenda Scully  says:
5 months ago

back to read it again different day different mood.... it is very good brilliant in fact... why do i have to go to work when my taste buds have been awakened have to come back another time

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Bobbie Sandlin  says:
5 months ago

Oh, Brenda, THANK YOU!!! I was literally questioning myself after..granted, that is the beauty of poetry. It hits people differently depending on mood. I appreciate you coming back and rereading, and commenting. You made my night. :)

\Brenda Scully  says:
4 months ago

i am back again,after reading your fan mail,love your avatar also

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