My Choosing - Free Form Poetry about difficult choice
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Surely as the fireflies dance amongst moonbeams
on a sultry summer evening, I am captured in your
emerald eyes. Paradox windows beckon me, as
your pain hints and sparkles. Your voice...
a swords' edge, so sharp. You test me with riddles
and innuendo, cutting me in discipline...
I tip-toe in sweet nothing's verses, shallow...
so meaningless, and you smile. I dare not jinx
this moment by speaking my love. My heart
inside out I as ache to admit my truth to you,
offer you the infinity within. Our dance, your
verbal leprosy. I give you what you demand,
I break. You toy at my heart, discounting
it's worth. You pluck my soul's strings
vibrating in twisted, agonizing melodies
until snapped. Curly debris, tangled lesson...
Surely as a sparrow sings amongst the morning
rays of the sun at dawn, I choose...
walking away from you.
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What an intriguing poem (I know you're calling it prose but I'd call it a free form poem, I think. It makes me wonder what was so wrong about the object of your affection, that you had to walk away. It's a sign of a good piece of writing that it makes you think!
Thank you Marisa. FREE FORM!! lol I knew it was something but it stuck my more as prose than traditional. That was the phrase I was looking for!
Thank you. It felt like it had many dimensions to it after I wrote it, being that people take something out of it.
back to read it again different day different mood.... it is very good brilliant in fact... why do i have to go to work when my taste buds have been awakened have to come back another time
Oh, Brenda, THANK YOU!!! I was literally questioning myself after..granted, that is the beauty of poetry. It hits people differently depending on mood. I appreciate you coming back and rereading, and commenting. You made my night. :)
i am back again,after reading your fan mail,love your avatar also











\Brenda Scully says:
5 months ago
i don't think that was supposed to be funny ..... for some reason it made me laugh