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By trooper22


I love you Mom

 

The hours of pain un-ending,

A young mother’s first.

The doctor shouts encouragement

Red stains on his shirt.

A shriek and a push,

A child has been given birth.

I have no memory of the moment,

It was too long ago.

A November morn’

A son is born.

Thank you for this life,

I love you Mom.

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MissJamieD profile image

MissJamieD  says:
8 months ago

AAWW, you're mom is lucky to have you for a son. Not too many men can write about childbirth and make it "feel" real and sweet. You did that, great job!

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trooper22  says:
8 months ago

Thank you MissJamieD. :)

Eaglekiwi profile image

Eaglekiwi  says:
8 months ago

Great hub expressive and sincere ,thank-you for sharing.

BirteEdwards profile image

BirteEdwards  says:
8 months ago

In just a few words you said so much. Excellent. Little can be a lot.

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trooper22  says:
8 months ago

Thank you Birte, and Eagle, and thanks for stopping by :)

Cris A profile image

Cris A  says:
8 months ago

Suweet! have you shown this to your mom? She would be proud :D

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trooper22  says:
8 months ago

I posted it to her facebook, I have no idea if she's read it or not.

Candie V profile image

Candie V  says:
8 months ago

I'm a new fan! This was good.

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trooper22  says:
8 months ago

Welcome and thanks Candie V :)

ma  says:
8 months ago

bob

Thank you so much I loved your poem I wish I was as good with words as you .

Wish Lvu Happy Mothers day.

Love

Always

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trooper22  says:
8 months ago

You are, you just proved it ma :) Liubov says Happy Mother's day as well.

Eaglekiwi profile image

Eaglekiwi  says:
8 months ago

Squeals (well its a loud sigh) with joy!!!...you have such a generous spirit to share your joy around. Thankyou.

lyla profile image

lyla  says:
8 months ago

That is so sweet..trooper22..great hub to tell the world how much you love your mom!:)Glad your mom love it too:)

trooper22 profile image

trooper22  says:
8 months ago

Thanks to everyone for their kind words.

Candie V profile image

Candie V  says:
8 months ago

I love the way babies smell right behind their ears and on their necks, that picture made me want to dig out my son's baby pics but they're in storage.. :(

Raven King profile image

Raven King  says:
8 months ago

Beautiful poem. :)

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santoion  says:
8 months ago

Beautiful ! Thank You !

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trooper22  says:
8 months ago

Thanks for visting RK, Santonion, and Candie V, and thank you for the comments.

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blondepoet  says:
8 months ago

Oh Trooper you have such a heart.xox

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trooper22  says:
8 months ago

Flattery will get you everywhere )

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chicago girl  says:
8 months ago

Very sweet!!! your mother raised a good, loving man trooper

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trooper22  says:
8 months ago

Thanks CC :)

alekhouse profile image

alekhouse  says:
7 months ago

Enjoyed the poem, especially being a mother. Very nice

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