Now We're Cookin'

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By Poetic Muse


Read it outloud

The rhythm of Drax' latest poem about apples triggered this poem in my feeble brain. http://hubpages.com/_2kb9q9yfbkxev/hub/poem52

I think I may put it in my kid's poetry book. What do you think?

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Now We're Cookin'

Boil it Boil it

Put it in a pot

Stir it Stir it

Till its nice and hot

Mash it mash it

But first cut out its eyes

Tonight dab with butter

But tomorrow it's French fries.

A double yolked egg.


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NightFlower  says:
2 years ago

It's adorable and kids would loved this to death.

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Drax  says:
2 years ago

This is great Poetic Muse - I love the ..cut out its eyes.. as if there is a hint or flavour of cruelty...

Sophie   says:
13 months ago

I FINK ITS GREAT

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