Opening
55a magic smile
a moment of claritya stirringan openingand when it comes will you goties to childrenties to husbandties to worktethered by responsibilitybut the intrigue pullsthe zombie presses on with that old lifebut this child nymph spirit is awakenedit darts about investigatinglife is thrilling for itso much here the zombie can not seelearningthe opening tears widethe nymph pears throughdare it enterso beautifully scaryit looks about for a smile to guide itthere is nonePrintShare it! — Rate it: up down flag this hub
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Susie, You're less tied than me. Go! If you follow your passions and fill your soul you may find that your health issues dissapear once and for all! Have you read the Biology of Belief? You should. And you should go, really. A little "Eat, Pray Love" type therapy. I love you. And love the idea of you sitting in a little village painting. I Just got back from a girl trip to Costa Rica. That would be good for you too. Love and Light, p
i also love openings and the myriad of possibilities they present. i say go for it and don't restrain yourself. you'll never find out what's on the other side if you won't dare. and i hate what if's :D
Patricia, your poem speaks to me in ways I can't even talk about. So I'll just say great job, and happy (almost) birthday! :)
Now who's birthday is almost here? and when exactly? :D
Its so easy for me to encourage others. Hard for me to do myself. What if's are almost as bad as regrets. But you must be a daring soul, quitting your 9-5 job and all.
Thank you Pam!
And Cris its my sons and mine. He'll be 3 and I'll be 43 tomorrow.
WELL HAPPY ALMOST bIRTHDAY OR HAPPY bIRTHDAY, YEA...THOSE ARE ALWAYS FUN...HAVE A DRINK...DO SOMETHING DARING AND FUN. bE SPONTANEOUS! ITS SOMETIMES THE ONLY WAY IN LIFE TO LIFT ALL OF THE IF'S AND NEVER HAVE TO GO ANYWHERE.
Thanks Eyes. Spontaneous huh? I'll have to think about it ;)
This was cool to read! Thanks!
Glad you liked it Tom. Thanks for commenting.
"Dare to Enter." That's a cool challenge. You have a lot of intriguing, mystic imagery.
Thanks Benji, I'm afraid I haven't jump through completely... my ties are too tight I guess.
nice poem
Im smiling!!
Then it is you I will follow Danielle!
You know how I feel! I love you:) You are my inspiration...
Amy, inspiration is a two way street here I assure you! As is the love.
Always fun to dream... The mind does not have to always be tethered to the body. So if in fact you cannot escape due to obligations.......take a journey away in spirit. Your poem invites that and more.
If only I could astral travel! My tethers have loosened as of late. Perhaps I'll be able to peek through that veil after all.
Here's a smile.
Then I will follow you NT.
There is so much here to enjoy. Thank you for sharing your poetry.
Tom thank you for coming by and reading. :)
Susie McBride says:
10 months ago
I feel the same way. I have been restless lately. I am going through more health problems, possibly a tumor in the pelvic area or scar tissue but pushing on the sciatic nerve......Horrendous pain and I am ready to fly. So much I want to see. Travel endlessly in Europe. Stay in small villages and do art. I have always done what I was "EXPECTED" to do. Never found my personal path, taking care of everyone , and still today with family and work. I am tired and need a change. Happy 43rd tomorrow. I love you. xs