P.S. I still love you - Part 1
68It was the same usual day for Natasha. She had just returned home from work. The time on the clock showed 7pm. It was 3 years since Natasha and Arvind were married to each other. It was an arranged marriage something Natasha was not keen on.
The phone rang and it beeped on the display “Arvind Calling”. Natasha picked up the phone. “Hey Natasha, I will be late for home tonight. Please have your dinner and go to sleep. I have the house keys, so don’t worry”. Is that OK? Arvind inquired. “Yes” Natasha replied and the line went dead.
3 years into the marriage and Natasha hardly felt any happiness. Arvind was married to his work and by the time he used to come home, he was half dead and there was hardly any communication between the two. Natasha was hoping things would improve with time, but instead it got worse. The only outing they had was their honeymoon and that was 3 years back.
Natasha tried to organise small parties where all the relatives and close friends were invited. Arvind used to give a miss to most of them. Arvind’s lack of interest in marriage was something which irked Natasha. It was not that Arvind was a bad husband or that he was cheating on her, but his indifference and lack of proper communication was something that Natasha could not bear. If Natasha was extrovert, Arvind was a plain introvert. His friends circle was small. He was not a party animal by any stretch of imagination and spoke also little. He was a complete workaholic and romance was something that did not appeal to him.
Natasha had become very impatient these days and Arvind’s behaviour was irking her all the more. She had also spoken about this to her and Arvind’s parents but to no avail.
Natasha decided that she cannot take this anymore and thought of giving a divorce to her husband. It was 9pm and Arvind wont be reaching home before 1am and Natasha had no energy to wait for him. So she took her pen and a paper and started to write a letter
“Dear Arvind,
It has been 3 years since we got married. But since past 2 years I feel a stranger in my own home. You are so involved in your work, that you have forgotten that you have a wife.
Whenever I have tried to arrange parties or small get together, you never show any interest in them. You come home late and leave for office early and I don’t get any time to talk to you.
Every woman has a dream of a man that she will eventually marry. She dreams of a man who will care for her, make her feel special and love her for the rest of her life. She dreams of a husband with whom she can be friends with. I also have such a dream Arvind. It has been 6 months since you made love to me and whenever you make love to me it is so very mechanical. You do it for the heck of it with no emotions involved.
I married you because I felt you would make an excellent husband. I don’t mind you being an introvert, but I don’t even remember when you last time told me that you love me. You have not taken any interest in my life. Marriage is just not sleeping together on the same bed, it is about sharing each other's happiness and sorrows. You don’t share anything with me Arvind.
Iam disappointed, and I cannot live such a bland life. I need a divorce from you. It is better if we stay away from each other. I cannot see myself suffering like this anymore. Tomorrow afternoon, I will be going back to my Mother’s place and by next week you will get the divorce papers. I have paid the electricity and telephone bill for this month. Also on the table I have kept numbers of Cable guy and the milk man. Contact them if you have any problem. As you will be coming late tonight and I will be fast asleep by then, hence I decided to write this letter”.
Your Lawfully wedded wife
Natasha.
Arvind reached home by 2am and saw a letter on his pillow. He saw his wife was fast asleep. He took the letter, went to the drawing room and opened it. He could not believe what he was reading. He closed his eyes as tears started to roll over his cheeks. He tore a paper from a notebook that was kept on the table. He closed his eyes for 1 moment and then began to write
Dear Natasha
To be Contd...
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A good story. I am interested to read on!
Thanks Naz for stopping by and commenting and wow you have started your own "sayings"...I must admit it is so very true. Part 2 is more or less done. Will be publishing ot soon.
Thanks Tom for your kind words
omg jay, r u serious?? u wrote this??!!!
i just hope he doesn't have this terminal illness which made him distance his closest relations!!!!!! that will be sooo cliched....
how do you get this wonderful ideas,
To Jyoti : Why you sound so surprised??? I do understand women alot better nowadays :-)
To Nimisha: No terminal illness. Watch out for part 2, Iam sure you will like it.
To Neha: Thanks, I take that as a compliment :-)
Jayb..I cant stand the suspense..pl do give us the continuation immediately.:).the story sounds so real!I voted as well.Why do men have to wait till a woman reaches a breaking point?:)
Jayb..dont want to sound nosey..but..but..*stammer*are you married? lol!
Thanks Laila for you kind comments. Im glad that the story is sounding real. Well as Im single, Im not in a postion to answer your question about the breaking point :-). part 2 will be coming soon
Nice Jay..I wish the letter written by wife to husband was little more expressive .specially the line "
am disappointed, and I cannot live such a bland life.
you could have ellaborated more then jst using the word bland....But overall well written..how do u get these ideas...
I am waiting for part 2 :-)..Publish it soon
Hey Jay..
A real nice story with all the pieces perceptually falling in place... Bravo my friend!!... Keep writing.. :)
Awating for part II
I'm surprised 'coz it sounds like i was reading something off a magazine.. and what is it that's made u understand women so well.. anyways good going dear :)
Jay, finally I got to read something that I hv always loved reading...a nice relationship masala which is a fact too.U just got me hooked to ur blog ..wanting to read more & know more but alas it ended with "To be contd" :-(
I even forwarded ur blog to my frens & narrated the story & they have demanded to send d 2nd part as soon as u publish...so don't delay else Part 1 will get wiped away frm ppl's mind :-)
Overall, Part 1 was a HIT..lets c wat u hv in store for us in Part 2
To nadia: Thanks for your comments. I reall appreciate it. Bland means a boring life, something Natasha expresses it when she speaks about her dissatisfaction. part 2 is coming soon.
To Rahul: Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
To jyoti: I take that as a compliment :-) and sometimes it helps being a woman's man. That was your comment if you remember.
To aarti: Thanks so much for being my unofficial PR. im glad that you liked it and part 2 is on its way soon.
Jay good work as always :)
jayb...a very versatile writer indeed !!
hey JB... now I know why you shifted to hubpages from blogspot... beautiful girls asking you openly whether you are married or not... you must be loving it! lolz... :D
btw... it really looks like typical relationship masala... i hv a hitch that u r coming up with a big twist in the tale... i would like to guess its something to do with Arvind/Natasha's past relationship... lets see whether its true or not...
good going... keep it up!
Tell Natasha....m there for her, always!!
Well, I should say that you are good at telling stories.
To sonal: Thanks for stopping by
To swati: Thanks for your kind words
To Meghana: Iam glad that you hav liked it. Watch out for part 2
To Nimai: Ill pass on the message
To anamika: Thanks for stopping by and commenting
There seems a movie called this~
waiting for the coming-up story:)
great work
still waiting for the next part
am dying to read it
Thanks MissMystery and Yogesh for commenting. PArt 2 is on its way soon. Im sure you guys will like it.
Heyy Jay...
I agree with all the wonderful comments here. Its really incredible how articulately and aptly you narrated a very sensitive storyline. Infact you have indeed captured the emotions in your narrative.
I seriously cannot wait to read the next part...
You are awesome!
Thanks Sam for showering all those praises on me. Iam so happy that u liked it. Thanks for commenting
Are arranged marriages still popular in India? Believable scenario--now, will Part 2 have an unexpected twist?
arranged marriages are v much a norm in India. Part 2 has been published. Do have a look. BTW, thanks for stopping by and commenting.
Ok seriously This ROCKs!!! Man i really loved reading through this. It is very expressive and it is a universal theme for all those who are married out there in the world. You totally rocked it and i am so proud of being a fan as well. THe style is very unique and easy on the mind and this also adds up to its awesomeness :D...is there a part 2? I can't wait :D
Thanks Uriel for that sweet comment. I really appreciate it. Yeah the part 2 is already published. You can got to my profile and check it out. Its there. I hope you enjoy that too. Cheers
Umm... wow.. Nice read :) Keep writing.
Have you thought about publishing your stories ?
Thanks jo for stopping by and commenting. No, I havent thought of publishing my stories yet, although Im thinking on those lines. Cheers
Just read your first part, sounds good. I like suspense, so going to read the second part to see what happens next. Good one.
Thanks...all the parts have been finished...u can read them all
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nazishnasim says:
7 months ago
"Sometimes tragedies are inevitible, since they later become foundations for a greater, and more patient love"- Ofcourse ME :D.
The plot seems to be subtle, but I am sure that it would become more powerful eventually, despite its subtlities. I read from begining to end. I shall eagerly look forward to the parts that'd follow. Love the story, can't wait for later parts :D.