Pancakes_Poem

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By Writer Rider

Ok, I couldn't help myself- here's another poem. I never used to cook for myself, could only cook rice, then the economy hit and I asked my mother for recipes as a way to save money and cook my own food. Turns out I'm actually a good cook and her recipe was so delicious and light like crepe, I decided to write a poem about it. Relax, it's just an experiment which I often like to do with my writing.


Pancakes

As I pour one cup of flour in a glass bowl

it cakes and puffs like powder

then settles, until I break three eggs

and watch them fall, plump

and race gently along the sides

of the mountain, towering like mount Everest.

The yokes peaking through

slender, shiny, sheets of film.

Half a teaspoon of baking powder

falls like rain and pimples the egg and flour.

Two tablespoons of sugar, a pinch of salt

clash as they land on the mound

in a war over territory, blood being spilt

over truth...Is it sweet? Is it sour?

A dichotomy solved through blending

like a democrat and a republican, like love and greed,

they marry together, to craft an intimate world,

so tender, delicately glazing the palate,

not overpowering it with enmity.

They swim in peace and harmony, in one cup of milk...

a cleanser, cleansing the landscape of strewn ingredients-

of war, as eggs and flour, sugar and salt, and milk intercourse

as they're slowly churned by the whisk- folding and creating,

blending and breaking, giving birth.

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Jackwms profile image

Jackwms  says:
8 months ago

This is beautiful. I love it.

Writer Rider profile image

Writer Rider  says:
8 months ago

Thanks Jack! I love your comment.

goldentoad profile image

goldentoad  says:
8 months ago

I like the connection of it all

Writer Rider profile image

Writer Rider  says:
8 months ago

Thanks Goldentoad. I'm glad you appreciate the connection, I was wondering if anyone would get it. :)

MissJamieD profile image

MissJamieD  says:
8 months ago

Very cute:) I love the description!

Writer Rider profile image

Writer Rider  says:
8 months ago

Thanks Miss J.! I'm glad you liked it. I have a kill to birds with one stone mentality as you can tell (in regards to my work, nothing else for you those of you with a conspirator's brain).

Shalini Kagal profile image

Shalini Kagal  says:
8 months ago

Wow - you should do a series - maybe a cookbook or website? Poetic Recipes!

Writer Rider  says:
8 months ago

Thanks Shalini! Great idea, I think I'll do something spicy next.

anglnwu profile image

anglnwu  says:
8 months ago

Lovely poem--like food for thought. Simple yet profound!

Writer Rider profile image

Writer Rider  says:
8 months ago

Thanks angl! Love the compliment!

dianacharles profile image

dianacharles  says:
7 months ago

Wow loved this...and made me hungry...got to run for lunch. ;)

Writer Rider profile image

Writer Rider  says:
7 months ago

Thanks for commenting, Diana.Come back later, I'll cook up another recipe poem.

wordscribe41 profile image

wordscribe41  says:
7 months ago

I love this poem, Writer Rider. Very creative and filled with fabulous imagery. Thanks for sharing this.

Writer Rider profile image

Writer Rider  says:
7 months ago

Thanks Wordscribe and your welcome.

BetsyIckes profile image

BetsyIckes  says:
7 months ago

Great Poem!

travelerhubs profile image

travelerhubs  says:
7 months ago

I love pancakes....and you have a nice poem here... i want pancakes right now... :-)

Writer Rider profile image

Writer Rider  says:
7 months ago

Awww...thanks Betsy and traveler. People usually don't make pancakes with three eggs so I decided to share the recipe in the poetry format.

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