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By Shalini Kagal

 

Only when there’s calm and quiet within

Can the harmony of perfect peace ring in

Only when the storms inside are spent

Can the message of universal peace be sent

When the heart has billows tossing high

Of hate and anger, pride and Mammon’s cry

Can the voice of peace e’er dwell therein

When the raucous clamour drowns its soft refrain?


 

We look for peace to enter from without

With clarion call and with a victory shout

We quite forget that peace is like a spring

From out of each heart just a trickle bring

And join it all till with a common song

Peace like a river will surely flow along

Gathering strength from what each heart pours out

More mighty than any army the world rolls out

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Pete Maida profile image

Pete Maida  says:
7 months ago

Quite true; it starts with us.

Shalini Kagal profile image

Shalini Kagal  says:
7 months ago

Wow Pete, that was lightning fast - thanks for reading. I couldn't agree more!

Laila Rajaratnam profile image

Laila Rajaratnam  says:
7 months ago

WOW!Shalini..you are a poet too!:) so,you are a multifaceted person!:)Awesome!

Candie V profile image

Candie V  says:
7 months ago

"Only when there's calm and quiet within.." Boy that's a tough one to arrive at, yet that's where the healing is. This is beautiful! Thank you!

Teresa McGurk profile image

Teresa McGurk  says:
7 months ago

Thoughtful poem -- great sentiment.

G-Ma Johnson profile image

G-Ma Johnson  says:
7 months ago

"Only when there’s calm and quiet within Can the harmony of perfect peace ring in"...

To me this is so true and I love this writing...Thanks sweetie >:O) G-Ma Hugs

Paper Moon profile image

Paper Moon  says:
7 months ago

This is a beautiful poem. It rings true in the heart. Thank you for being the first to encourage me with this peace project. You were an integral part in getting this going. And this is a wonderful hub to help us link peace around the world. Thank you. Peace.

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sabu singh  says:
7 months ago

Shalini, awesome is the word

Cris A profile image

Cris A  says:
7 months ago

So true Shalini, it shuld come from within. All this talk and hubs about peace is making me more aware of my place on earth. Thanks for sharing your light :D

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Shalini Kagal  says:
7 months ago

Laila - thanks - I try :D

Candie - I agree - aren't the simplest solutions sometimes the toughest to follow? Thanks for stopping by.

Teresa - I'm honoured!

G-Ma - hugs to you too and thanks so much for reading!

Paper Moon - thank you for getting this going - may the ripples spread far and wide :)

Sabu - thanks a lot!

Cris - may I return the compliment? Yes, you're right - one is getting a lot more self aware and seeking here in HubSpace!

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Benjimester  says:
7 months ago

I love it! I love the image of collective peace -- how out of each individual trickles the peace that will eventually form the whole river. Very cool idea. Also... the word mammon is awesome :) Didn't think anyone else knew what that meant.

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ColdWarBaby  says:
7 months ago

"From out of each heart just a trickle bring And join it all till with a common song"

That is simply beautiful.

I long so desperately to hear that song.

I've been searching for my voice and listening for all the others all my life. I know we all have it in our hearts. I know we will find it one day. I only hope I live long enough to hear it. I want, more than anything, to sing it with everyone.

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Shalini Kagal  says:
7 months ago

Hi Benji - praise from wonderful poetic soul like you is praise indeed - so thank you!

Ah - Mammon - all those years of Sunday School, y'know? :D

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Shalini Kagal  says:
7 months ago

Yes CWB - you will :) There seem to be more and more common, invisible people who are standing up and singing - so here's hoping that it swells to a song that will drown out divisions and strife the world over. Thanks for reading - and for being a wonderful ambassador of peace with everyone you meet!

Lisa HW profile image

Lisa HW  says:
7 months ago

Very nicely worded poem, Shalini.

shamelabboush profile image

shamelabboush  says:
7 months ago

Nice poem dear Shalini, thanks for it.

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Shalini Kagal  says:
7 months ago

Thank you Lisa and shamelabboush for reading!

Feline Prophet profile image

Feline Prophet  says:
7 months ago

Shal that was beautiful...let there be peace indeed. :)

Amanda Severn profile image

Amanda Severn  says:
7 months ago

Beautiful poem Shalini. We should all give peace a chance. If every one of us each spoke out, then our quiet murmurs would indeed become a clarion call.

Aya_Hajime profile image

Aya_Hajime  says:
7 months ago

"Can the voice of peace e’er dwell therein

When the raucous clamour drowns its soft reply?"

Would be great to post this in the Religion Forum :)

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Shalini Kagal  says:
7 months ago

Thank you FP - and good to see you back after the break - missed you :)

Hi Amanda - great to see you too - thanks so much for reading!

Aya - no comment :D - thanks for stopping by!

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TheMindlessBrute  says:
7 months ago

"More mighty than any army..."

Nothing soothes the brute more than poetry.I like the visuals this gave me of peace flowing along like a river,if that tide is large enough no army can resist it.Every drop counts and this droplet is beautiful,Shalini.Peace is in drought,let it rain.

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Shalini Kagal  says:
7 months ago

Thank you TMB - for that poetic comment :)

trooper22 profile image

trooper22  says:
7 months ago

Beautifully written. I am inspired. You are gifted Shalini.

Charia Samher profile image

Charia Samher  says:
7 months ago

If we have peace within it will just burst out and reflects us inside out. Thank you for sharing your poem...your thoughts...your feelings=)

Shalini Kagal profile image

Shalini Kagal  says:
7 months ago

trooper22 - thanks for the kind words - much appreciated :)

Charia - thank you for coming by and reading!

Christoph Reilly profile image

Christoph Reilly  says:
7 months ago

Lovely poem, Shalini, and a lovely sentiment.  i don't believe I have ever read a poem by you before. There seems to be no limit to your writing skill, and this doesn't disappoint.  Beautifully written.  Thank you.

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Shalini Kagal  says:
7 months ago

Thank you so much Christoph for reading and for the kind comments. Always appreciate you coming by!

Dolores Monet profile image

Dolores Monet  says:
7 months ago

Lovely, Shalini, you are so right and said it so well.

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Shalini Kagal  says:
7 months ago

Thank you Dolores for stopping by to read!

Kim Garcia  says:
2 months ago

Lovely!! Peace has to flow from within, if our hearts deceive, it's not real peace.

Beautiful poem.

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Shalini Kagal  says:
2 months ago

Thanks so much Kim - appreciate it!

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