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Poem: The Forest

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By barranca


The Forest

The loggers leave a path:

mud streaks, hewn branches, stumps,

scarred trees, boulders askew-

marks left as if a titan has been dragged

screaming through the forest.

The formerly peaceful walk

through the worshiping trees is now

a tormented vision as of a battlefield done,

the leavings of Grendel's feast

strewn about.

And next year they will be marked

again with circles of paint

like numbers tattooed on wrists

waiting for the train.

The conversation of the trees

is now stunted--

a stricken, amazed

silence echoes.

The caretakers count

their 30 pieces of silver.

The loggers count their

board-feet and drink another beer.

When I was a young reader, my three favorite books set in forests were: Green Mansions by William Henry Hudson; The Yearling by Marjorie Rawlings and The Swiss Family Robinson by Johann Wyss. Perhaps it is time to dust off the library shelf and give one of these to a young reader.

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Santiago  says:
2 years ago

Amazing

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barranca  says:
2 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it.

ashleigh  says:
11 months ago

this is great. the personification and imagery is fantastic. i also love how you contrast the image of a peacful forest with grendle. its extraordinary poetry

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barranca  says:
11 months ago

Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it. We hear a lot about animal rights.....I wonder if someday we might consider tree rights.

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Lgali  says:
10 months ago

nice peom

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Kulsum Mehmood  says:
10 months ago

Very nice poem.

krithika  says:
10 months ago

beautiful, amazing and much more. It is really very nice

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barranca  says:
10 months ago

I truly appreciate the kind comments.

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Cris A  says:
9 months ago

i love the juxtaposition of the flowing imagery and the harsh reality in the end. great poem, as usual :D

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barranca  says:
9 months ago

Thanks Chris. I do think this poem at least conveys its point....perhaps too bluntly.

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Cris A  says:
9 months ago

yes it does, and succintly so.

What is too blunt when the issue is of that magnitude? So I say no, it's not too blunt because bluntness does not apply :D

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barranca  says:
9 months ago

You certainly don't mince words or imagery in your poem rape of the red, either. I like the irony of 7 turned to L.

nancy  says:
5 months ago

nice !!!

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