Poetry Tutorial - The Triolet, a step by step guide
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A Triolet Tutorial
Triolet [tree-uh-ley or trahy-uh-lit]
of French origin, meaning little trio.
Usually written in iambic tetrameter, the triolet is an eight lined poem with a fixed rhyme scheme of ABaAabAB, where A and B are repeated lines.
Originally the poetic form was split into three, AB, aA, abAB, hence the name ‘little trio’, but it is now often presented as a single stanza of eight lines.
At first glance, it may seem like a very restrictive form of poetry, but the repeated lines and rhyme sounds can create, and enhance, some very powerful imagery.
Below is an example of a one stanza triolet, written by myself.
WildFire
Through charcoal trees the wind does cry,
as acrid clouds eclipse the sun.
From tongue of licking flame, ghosts fly
through charcoal trees. The wind does cry.
"A heedless light, of passers-by,
brings hell to burn God's earth undone,"
through charcoal trees, the wind does cry,
as acrid clouds eclipse the sun.
© Sharon Tideswell 2009
The Meter of the Triolet
Iambic Tetrameter refers to the meter (beat) of the poem. Iambic means that the poem is made up of metrical feet called iambs – 2 syllables where the stress or emphasis is on the second syllable – da DUM
Let’s look at the word ‘tonight’ –
if we put the stress on the first syllable – TOnight – it would sound unnatural. The stress falls naturally on the second syllable – toNIGHT (da DUM).‘Tonight’ is an iamb.
An iamb doesn’t have to be contained within a single 2 syllable word. The sentence ‘The boy came home for lunch’, can be split into 3 iambs:
the BOY/ came HOME/ for LUNCH.
The stresses fall naturally on every second syllable. Try saying the sentence out loud; it flows naturally and sounds unforced. Now try saying it with the emphasis on the other syllables –
THE boy/ CAME home/ FOR lunch
hear how stilted and unnatural it sounds.
The sentence ‘The boy came home for lunch’ is iambic.
An iamb can also be made up of part words, for example – the last syllable of one word and the first syllable of the next, and vice versa.
The well known tongue twister, ‘Around the rugged rocks the ragged rascal ran,’ is iambic, but let’s see where the iambs fall –
aROUND/ the RU/ gged ROCKS/ the RA/ gged RA/ scal RAN.
Again you can try reading it out loud, switching the emphasis and comparing the sound.
In the phrase ‘Iambic Tetrameter’ we now know what iambic means. The word ‘Tetrameter’ tells us how many of those metrical feet (iambs) form the meter. Tetra comes from the Greek word for four.
So, four iambs form the meter of the poem. Each line is composed of four iambs (8 syllables with the stress on every second syllable)
da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM
From Line 1 of the example poem:-
Through CHAR/ coal TREES/ the WIND/ does CRY
In summary
- Iambic Tetra meter
(da DUM) x 4 = meter
We now have the syllable count and the meter for each line, but the triolet also has the strict requirements of a set rhyme scheme, and repetition.
The Rhyme Scheme
Rhyme schemes are denoted by letters of the alphabet. For example if a poem is said to have an ‘abab’ rhyme scheme, it simply means that line 1 (a) rhymes with line 3 (a) and that line 2 (b) rhymes with line 4 (b).
Capital letters in a rhyme scheme can be used to denote a repeated line.
The rhyme scheme for the triolet looks complex ABaAabAB, so let’s break it down (using the meter we have already learned and the end words from the sample poem).
We have a rhyme scheme notation for each of the 8 lines of the triolet.
Line 1(A). da DUM da DUM da DUM da (CRY)
Line 2(B). da DUM da DUM da DUM da (SUN)
Line 3(a).
da DUM da DUM da DUM da (FLY) - rhymes with line 1
Line 4(A).
da DUM da DUM da DUM da (CRY) - a repeat of line 1
Line 5(a).
da DUM da DUM da DUM da (BY) - rhymes with line 1
Line 6(b).
da DUM da DUM da DUM da (DONE) - rhymes with line 2
Line 7(A).
da DUM da DUM da DUM da (CRY) - a repeat of line 1
Line 8(B).
da DUM da DUM da DUM da (SUN) - a repeat of line 2
There are only two rhyme sounds throughout the poem A/a and B/b, so choose your end words carefully, as you’ll need to find more than one rhyming word.
Lines denoted by ‘a’ and ‘A’ have the same rhyme sound, but remember the capital A denotes a repeated line.
Lines denoted by ‘b’ and ‘B’ have the same rhyme sound, and ‘B’ denotes a repeated line.
You will see from the above, that lines 1, 4 and 7 will automatically rhyme, because they are the same line repeated. You need to find an additional two rhyming words, one for line 3 and one for line 5. Lines 1,3,4,5 and 7 rhyme.
Lines 2 and 8 will automatically rhyme because they are also the same line repeated. You will need to find an additional rhyming word for line 6.
Note also, due to the repetition, the poem starts and ends with the same couplet, so make sure it’s equally effective as an opening and ending to the poem.
Good luck and have fun.
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Comments
This is a very in-depth tutorial and you've made it an interesting read because of the examples you gave. Everything comes out clearly and I'm sure even one who isn't familiar with the terms will understand it easily.
A great hub, and the triolet you wrote is excellent :)
Thank you both for taking the time to read and comment on my hub. Glad you found it informative :)
I have learned a lot from reading your tutorial. Very informative and well written.
I am going to try and write a triolet , wish me luck!
Thanks Olaf. Enjoy writing your triolet :)
Excellent job. I'm going to write one tomorrow!
Great tutorial - and I love your poem. My personal favourite is the iambic pentametre but you've used the triolet to perfection :)
Thanks Tom, I just looked at your profile and I see that you're an accomplished poet so I'm sure your triolet will be fantastic. I'm looking forward to reading some of your hubs.
Thanks Shalini, I like iambic pentameter too. I just thought I'd try out a few different forms of poetry. Looking forward to reading some of your hubs, you have some interesting subjects :)
Thank you for the clarity of your writing, you are a wonderful communicator.
Thank you Canopygallery. That's very kind of you :)
very nie hub.... would love to learn more about writing poems
Thank you Brenda :)
Hi there!
Thanks for posting the info, excellant work Sharon!
Good work!
Wow nice
Thanks
Great work keep it up and a big thumbs up from me.
Thanks sumon6, Thanks Helen.
Nice work. It's good to read someone who's not scared of poetry's technicalities :)
Hi Paraglider, thanks for reading :)
I'm relatively new to writing and I admit to being phased initially by forms such as these. Understanding the different forms of poetry has also given me a greater appreciation of them. Of course I love free verse too. Thanks again.
Thanks for breaking it down in basic terms.I will be looking to learn more.
Thanks for stopping by Dream On :)




















nikko says:
3 months ago
This is a wonderful tutorial on not just the triolet but also some basic terms in poetry. Very well written and I look forward to learning more from you :)