Remember Me, My Love
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Remember Me
When the sun rises and the rays stream through the window
Remember me, right next to you
As the birds begin singing their early morning song
Remember me, across from you
Cup of coffee, fresh orange and paper in hand
Remember me, lips kissing you
Door closing gently, in the window I wave good bye
Remember me, watching you go
Tenderly I walk away, beginning my own day
Remember me, close to your heart
When the sun settles and the moon appears with the stars
Remember me, I welcome you
Our day apart ends, alas we are together
Remember me, my hand in yours
Serenity washes over, peace beckons my soul
Remember me, head on your chest
Begin the night, no ill has come, again we are safe
Remember me, unconscious tugs
Tonight sweet dreams begin to play, pulling us apart
Remember me, you dream away
Dark skies splattered in streaks of early light, stars wink off
Remember me, your eyes open
Fingers of light lifting veils of darkness, inch by inch
Remember me, a new day dawns
Soft, tingling caresses, unspoken words of love
Remember me
Written by:
Beth100
July 31, 2009
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This is absolutely beautiful!! Well done... ;-)
Once again, thank you John for coming by and visiting. Yes, I believe we all want to be remembered. So many daily tasks that keep us busy, but at the end of the day, we want love and to love.
Mimi -- Thank you for taking the time to come and reading.
Very expressive, Beth...Love is what holds it all together; memories, passions, longings...Thank you for this...Larry
Larry - It's definitely love that helps the world go round and round! Thank you!
Thoughts that warm the heart and words that whisper to the soul, thank you for sharing
Deepthought - Gotta love that warm and fuzzy feeling! Thank you!
Beautifully expressed!
Invictus -- Love your avatar and name!!! Thanks for dropping by!
I Love this part- Remember me, a new day dawns
Lgali - Thank you for your visit!
Great poem, Beth! I like your imagery.
Thank you Dohn121!
brilliant poem well done
Thank you for your kind words Brenda! :)
nice poem. thanks for share.
Thank you Prasetio30!
Wow...Oh, Wow...Such great lines centered around..."Remember me"...I'm sorry, Beth 100...but I wish I would've thought of this statement theme...and how you presented it...FIRST! "Remember Me" is a great poetry read!
To receive such praise from you MPM, is a great honor. Thank you!
Well I for one shall not forget your words that pull me in like clean fresh laundry through my window with the smell of fresh Spring air. Wonderful stuff here. I long to hold your hand like that now and feel you flow through my aged hand. "Fingers of light lifting darkness..." wonderful. And I love that stone at the bottom.
Ralwus -- Why, thank you for your generous comments! My hand is always here -- just reach out! I love that stone too!
wow, thats a very deep and thought provoking poem. i wish i could write something that beautiful. i loved reading your poem.
Stevennix2001 -- Okay, I'm just gonna call you Steven from now on, k? My fingers get all tangled up with xxxs and numbers lol I'm really glad that you enjoyed my poem.
your welcome. its okay you can call me steven. besides thats my real name anyway, so i don't mind.
Steven -- Ah, my tangled fingers thank you! (but they never tangle otherwise!) lol
lol. sorry to get your fingers tangled earlier. are you okay? would you like me to kiss them to make them feel better? lol j/k
lol Please, and could you untie them as you kiss them? :)
sure, anything for a lady. ;)
*blushing* lol ;)
why are you blushing my dear? ;)
I never kiss and tell. *blushing again* ;)
i'll bet your really cute when you blush ;)
lol :)
whats so funny? :)
Can't say. They'll probably shut my hub down.... lol
oh i see. lol. i guess that means you must really like me, huh? ;)
How could I not? ;)
awww thanks. i like you a lot too. ;)
*grin* :)
another great one, should I expect any less? I think not :D
Misty -- Thank you a wonderful compliment. *blush* I am glad that you enjoyed this one too.
John Chancellor says:
4 months ago
Beautiful.
I think your sentiments express what we all want - to be remembered. And the best way to be remembered is to remember - in all the little things and little ways and surely we will be remembered.