Remembering My Lover
60A passionate lover isn't always easy to forget! This is a poem remembering a sensual relationship.
For "Just a taste"
I breathed in your breath.
Don't you remember
How we connect, as lovers?
Touching, moving together...
And then withdraw
(As if guilty, but really?)
I have to wonder
Thinking one way, and back the other
Worthlessly, without a word.
(This world) I can't figure out
But I know feelings
- Even those of lust
Remain when unspoken
Come naturally - and regardless of everything
Are not forgotten.
And I should know their power.
I can still taste your breath
On my lips.
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G'day Health Tip, thankyou for letting me know! Fixed!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Best wishes.
really nice poem. it touching my heart.
Thanks prasetio30, nice to hear from you.
Lovely poem about a lost lover and memories who stays with us.. Thank you for your honest answer to my question on the hub. I realized that my question is too hard to answer and too personal as well therefore I am very grateful to you, that you took your time and effort to answer it, honestly...
All the best from Beata
Hi Beata Stasak, thankyou for your message, that was lovely of you. All the best to you too.
Hi Beata Stasak, thankyou for your message, that was lovely of you. All the best to you too.
I love the sense of memory and retention of the senses of love. They always remain with us. Wonderful and moving. You write nice poetry!
Thankyou Cheeky Girl! Great to hear from you.
Wow, nice poem....
I think we all remember great things in life and this is a nice way to describe things. so sensual.
Thanks Martin V, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
HealthTip says:
6 weeks ago
I really enjoyed that, I hate to point out a grammar mistake but 4th line from the end you have spelt " forgotten " wrong but you can edit it, enjoy your weekend !