SHORT STORY: The Longest winter. (Episode 2)

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By Maniac-Mark

intro. Before reading

You will not understand whats going on in this story you have to read episode 1

The link below is a lnk that leads to episode one. 

http://hubpages.com/hub/SHORT-STORY-The-Longest-winter


1. Another cut

Its been 3 days since the incident that is permanently etched into Omar's mind. Police stopped questioning him as much but they still believe him to be a suspect in the murder of his boss. Omar decided to go to the barber shop just to chill with his friends. Aye Trey whats up he said. Not much, Trey sad sounding disappointed.I haven't had a customer all day Trey said. How am i supposed to work on my masterpieces without a head, What is art with out a canvas man. Omar thought for a second. nothing i guess. Trey looked at him with a smile, So you are thinkin what im thinkin then huh. I dont even know what you're thinkin, Omar replied. Trey said, Oh well ill tell you what im thinkin, Im thinkin im gonna give you a hair cut. Omar looked at him. My hair is already cut omar said. Im just gonna line you up Trey said. Alright hook me up then Omar said. And Trey proceeded to line Omar's head.

2. Outside

 Leaving the barber shop Omar noticed out the corner of his eye something shiny on the ground. He ran over too the object. It was a compass with a note on it.

The note read:

To Omar.

 I knew you would find this message. Follow the compass north untill you see a street called plainview and then turn when you see crosshaven.

Omar put the compass and the note in his pocket.then walked north. He kept walking north until he realised there was no such thing as plainview street or crosshaven

3. Google

Omar got back home. He was wondering how the person who wrote the letter knew who he was and what the letter was for. Was this guy some one that Omar knew. He decided to go to google and look up plainview and crosshaven. When he looked online he discovered the streets do exist they were just renamed many years before he was born. He looked further down the page and realised crosshaven the street the guy wanted him to go too was the same street he lives on. He thought to himself again, Whoever wrote this knows where i live.

4. introctions

Omar decided to go outside and look around maybe someone was waiting for him. He looked up and down the street and after looking for an hour and a half he decided to start heading back home. While walking he saw some guys. These guys were wearing a Black suit and His face was covered up. Omar remembered the man that was at the corner of the street his house was on. these three guys were in the same crew or group or gang or whatever they called themselves. Omar turned around and ran. One of them yelled out HEY WAIT. As omar continued to run he looked back. The three guys were catching up with him and they eventually grabbed him and knocked him out. They said we are the klomarens and were taking you in Then they shot him with a tranquilizer dart.

5. klomarens base

Omar woke up. There was a distinct smell of must resonating in the room. It smelled like some one tried to cover up the bad smell with cheap cologne.In front of Omar was a large desk with two large stacks of paper on them. One stack was about two inches taller than the other. Omar tried to move but realized he was chained up and completely immobilized. A group of six guys in the goofy black outfits came into the room. One of them was bringing in another person chained up. The man in the goofy black suite then dropped the man to the same spot as Omar.

Omar yelled at the top of his lungs, Who are you, What do you want from me, why am i here. He said it again in his mind, Why am i hear why am I here. Then he thought some more. What is here anyways. He looked at the man that was laid out beside him. The man just woke up and Omar realized that this was Rodney king.

6. Help

Rodney that you, Omar said. Yeah its me, Rodney said. What is this place Rodney asked. I don't have a clue, Omar replied. I do know one thing though. We gotta get out of here, Rodney said. Yeah and how do we do that. Rodney looked down then twisted something metal in his hand. He put the metal in a whole in the chain and pushed a button on the top of it. The small metal thing began spinning then suddenly it stopped. The chains began to rust and become weak enough for Rodney to break. Then Rodney began to do the same to Omars chain.

They were both free now and Rodney had one for the door too. They shouldnt have made these out of metal, Rodney said. Then they were free. Who were those guys, Omar said.

Rodney replied by saying, I don't know who they are but i know they were following me and other law firm workers for a while now. I don't know WHO they are or what they want with me or you but whatever it is they want its serious.

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POPEofDOPE  says:
2 months ago

Cool story. waiting for episode 3.

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