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By Not Telling


A beautiful sailboat out on the bay

Sailing, sailing on a sunny day

So beautiful as it sails away

On deck I stood once as first mate

I helped her sail true and straight

But this morning she sailed and I was late

Will she tack against the wind and turn

And to this lonely port return

And retrieve her sailor with his lessons to learn?

Or will she sail on obliviously

As I watch from shore blissfully

Admiring her beauty wistfully?

No telling what might be her mind

I'll not sit and wait here blind

But instead find work of some other kind

Yet will cherish the memory alway

Of the sailboat that carried my heart away

And left me here on shore today

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Randy Behavior profile image

Randy Behavior  says:
6 months ago

This is beautiful NT. But so sad. Surely she would come back for her sailor.

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
6 months ago

I'm hopeful. She was built to sail, so if she wants to sail, I have to let her sail. If she returns I'll gladly sign for another voyage. ;)

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 months ago

This is lovely, for sure! I hopes she comes back.

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
6 months ago

Thank you, Invictus

Miss Take profile image

Miss Take  says:
6 months ago

I have been reading your poems...... I wish you could love me the way you love this lady that has got on a ship and sailed away. If she does not return, and you like my writing syle could you write a little poem for me and if she comes I will understand. You are the loveliest person here, but too secretive???? what time is it where you live, and do you like Cat Stevens, i do and it is 9 o'clock here.

Hawkesdream profile image

Hawkesdream  says:
6 months ago

True love, Not Telling, True love!

Gypsy Willow profile image

Gypsy Willow  says:
6 months ago

Your life is a romantic dream, do you have a job or are you Not Telling!

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
6 months ago

Thank you, Miss Take. It is only a poem and I am only a poet. These poems are written for my love. I hope they allow readers to share some of the joy I am so privileged to receive.

That's right, Hawkesdream.

Clearly, Gypsy, my job is to write these poems. :)

\Brenda Scully  says:
6 months ago

good morning busy day catch up later....... love the poem as usual

manlypoetryman profile image

manlypoetryman  says:
6 months ago

I like the way you describe the sailboat in this poem. There is obviously a connection to it in love and admiration...yet it is still free to be itself. A true lesson in love. Great Poem, Not Telling...May you and your sailboat remain free to go where the wind takes you...

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
6 months ago

Good to see you, Brenda!

Thanks for your high praise, Manly Poet.

Miss Take profile image

Miss Take  says:
6 months ago

the wind takes you ah ah what wind... this poem is good is the boat built to sail or the person on it.... is she very fat or something

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
6 months ago

It's a metaphor, Miss. :)

maven101 profile image

maven101  says:
6 months ago

Sometimes we just have to up anchor and move on...nicely written...I do hope she tacks to your leeward...

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
6 months ago

Thanks, Maven. She trimmed sail and coasted into port in a short time, lucky for me.

Am I dead, yet? profile image

Am I dead, yet?  says:
6 months ago

Nice one. Another one of love and abandonment, these are my favorite type of poems. I enjoyed this one as well.

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
6 months ago

I think you will like my work, Am I Dead. :)

laceyjo profile image

laceyjo  says:
6 months ago

very romantic. i love it.

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
6 months ago

Very glad, Laceyjo.

poetlorraine profile image

poetlorraine  says:
3 months ago

aw this is so sad, did she come back

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
3 months ago

Something better occurred, PL :)

poetlorraine profile image

poetlorraine  says:
2 months ago

was just going to say tell me about it, then i remembered your name, and how you always live up to it

Not Telling profile image

Not Telling  says:
2 months ago

I have since realized that simply to swim in the same ocean in which she sails is enough. :)

poetlorraine profile image

poetlorraine  says:
2 months ago

.....aw that is too cute

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