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74Australian Shore
A Message In A Bottle
Half buried into the sand dunes
near my beach house
green, corked wine bottle
I had to smash it
to get the letter out.
Who was the mysterious
message-bottler?
the odd fantasy
of a tall, dark and handsome
billionaire,
bored on his luxury cruiser,
crossed my mind.
' Please help us
and save our lives,'
its author,
a nine-year-old girl,
Brindah was her name.
Sri Lankan asylum seeker
thwarted from reaching Australia's shore,
her dreamland, her only aim.
Leaning over the rail
of a small rickety cargo boat
among three hundred desperate people
who called a hunger strike.
Brindah put the message
in a bottle
and threw it overboard.
I know,
you would prefer
a romantic billionaire,
but the Ethnic Tamil child,
lost and scared
is the only one I have found.
I found a treasure,
a message in a bottle,
now I have to find
that child.
Asked about Brindah's plea,
Australian Immigration Minister
said,
she was just one millions of refugees
seeking a better life,
she is now in Merak,
Indonesian detention centre,
for another ten or twenty
years
of her life.
' Please, think of us, please,'
I finish reading her message in a bottle:
'we have lived in a forest for one month,
please sir, take us to your country,
there must be somewhere a place for us...'
Brindah will get old and wrinkly,
locked behind the Indonesian wall,
dreaming about our Australian shore.
I am sorry, my dear Brindah,
I am just a writer,
I keep your bottle and write a poem...
about YOU
about YOUR PEOPLE
what would happen
if you managed
to reach our shore.
BOAT PEOPLE
Boat people are coming
struggling to reach a shore
of ' Promised land'
like others
before them
for a hundred years
following the Dream Times people
and British settlement.
Another day is starting
with Kookaburra laughing
the newcomers are sitting
in the shadow of Eucalyptus tree
to study English grammar
and how to feel free
under the barbed fence
Another yea is ending
on the summer midnight time
listening Aussie Dinkum
they look at Southern sky
sewing their lips together
they think about their roots
and the children for which
they sacrifice...
And their children
are running
happily on the sand
leaving their footprints
hopefully
forever on red land.
I just wish Brindah's footprints would be one of them.
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Wonderful, touching, sad. I can tell you are quite a nice person. I wish more Americans' attitudes toward immigrants were as kind as yours.
Thank you Immartin for believing in me, I just feel that the best way I can use my modest skills is 'to shout' for those
who can not do it my themselves. Thank you my dear hub friend for your encouragement.
My dear Ralph, I can feel for immigrants because I am /I was/ one of them. There are many people here in Australia and on your American shores who are afraid of immigrants, of their different culture, looks...afraid that immigrants take their place, their jobs...but I believe there is too many desperate people and there is enough space and wealth to share around in Western countries...I know we are now in deep economical crisis but it is still 'great life' if you compare it with the rest of the world. Thank you for your nice compliment.
how sad is that, will read it again when i am not so tired, appreciate your comments on my hubs thanks a lot, looking forward to reading more of yours also
Thank you so much for visiting my hub. I hope you come back.
The naughty man here. I read this the other day but was not signed in and did want to tell you how much I enjoyed this. It is heart breaking to think this story play out so frequently. Thanks again. CC
Dear ralwus, better later than never. Thanks so much for taking time to come back. I feel very lucky that so many great
people on hub from all around the world visit me and spent time to leave a comment...it makes me feel very special.
Wow Beata! So very moving and touching. Your words are powerful and eye opening as always!
Thank you so much for your friendly and warm response.
It is great to have 'hub friends' just like you who I can connect with through my writing.
All the best Bayarea...visiting you soon. Beata
There are footprints in the sanctuary of my mind...Brindah's and yours. Thanks for the words.












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lmmartin says:
2 months ago
Beata, this brought tears to my eyes. You are such a good writer (though I know you don't believe it) and your messages are always on the side of the angels. I will add Brindah to the list of children I pray will one day find sanctuary and a good life. And among those children are the 100,000 or so that will have been trafficked this year.
Thank you for this moving story.