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By Beata Stasak


Australian Shore

For some, reaching the safety of the Australian shore is impossible. Why?
The bushes near the water where I have found the Brindah's message in a bottle.
The bushes near the water where I have found the Brindah's message in a bottle.
For Brindah and her fellow travellers the Australian shore looks hostile and unwelcoming.
For Brindah and her fellow travellers the Australian shore looks hostile and unwelcoming.
For another, more lucky little refugee the Australian shore looks much more friendlier.
For another, more lucky little refugee the Australian shore looks much more friendlier.
He takes his time to explore the new environment.
He takes his time to explore the new environment.
He learns a new language and he founds his first friends.
He learns a new language and he founds his first friends.
He wanders further and further and his footprints stay in the sand.
He wanders further and further and his footprints stay in the sand.
He learns to be an Australian.
He learns to be an Australian.
He grows into a young man.
He grows into a young man.
He knows that his Father came on a boat from a foreign land but he knows nothing else.
He knows that his Father came on a boat from a foreign land but he knows nothing else.
Few lucky refugees are welcome to reach the Perth
Few lucky refugees are welcome to reach the Perth
Most of them never reach it or they are pulled away.
Most of them never reach it or they are pulled away.
A glimpse of sparkling water give them hope.
A glimpse of sparkling water give them hope.
Then they reach the rocky coastline again.
Then they reach the rocky coastline again.

A Message In A Bottle


Half buried into the sand dunes

near my beach house

green, corked wine bottle

I had to smash it

to get the letter out.


Who was the mysterious

message-bottler?

the odd fantasy

of a tall, dark and handsome

billionaire,

bored on his luxury cruiser,

crossed my mind.


' Please help us

and save our lives,'

its author,

a nine-year-old girl,

Brindah was her name.

Sri Lankan asylum seeker

thwarted from reaching Australia's shore,

her dreamland, her only aim.


Leaning over the rail

of a small rickety cargo boat

among three hundred desperate people

who called a hunger strike.

Brindah put the message

in a bottle

and threw it overboard.

I know,

you would prefer

a romantic billionaire,

but the Ethnic Tamil child,

lost and scared

is the only one I have found.


I found a treasure,

a message in a bottle,

now I have to find

that child.


Asked about Brindah's plea,

Australian Immigration Minister

said,

she was just one millions of refugees

seeking a better life,

she is now in Merak,

Indonesian detention centre,

for another ten or twenty

years

of her life.


' Please, think of us, please,'

I finish reading her message in a bottle:

'we have lived in a forest for one month,

please sir, take us to your country,

there must be somewhere a place for us...'


Brindah will get old and wrinkly,

locked behind the Indonesian wall,

dreaming about our Australian shore.


I am sorry, my dear Brindah,

I am just a writer,

I keep your bottle and write a poem...

about YOU

about YOUR PEOPLE

what would happen

if you managed

to reach our shore.


BOAT PEOPLE

Boat people are coming

struggling to reach a shore

of ' Promised land'

like others

before them

for a hundred years

following the Dream Times people

and British settlement.


Another day is starting

with Kookaburra laughing

the newcomers are sitting

in the shadow of Eucalyptus tree

to study English grammar

and how to feel free

under the barbed fence


Another yea is ending

on the summer midnight time

listening Aussie Dinkum

they look at Southern sky

sewing their lips together

they think about their roots

and the children for which

they sacrifice...


And their children

are running

happily on the sand

leaving their footprints

hopefully

forever on red land.


I just wish Brindah's footprints would be one of them.


IF YOU HAVE BEEN MOVED BY THIS TRUE STORY; PLEASE ANSWER MY QUESTION

ABOUT THIS ISSUE ON MY BLOG: http://bittersweetbeata.blogspot.com

I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW YOUR OPINION; PLEASE SHARE IT WITH ME. THANK YOU.






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lmmartin profile image

lmmartin  says:
2 months ago

Beata, this brought tears to my eyes. You are such a good writer (though I know you don't believe it) and your messages are always on the side of the angels. I will add Brindah to the list of children I pray will one day find sanctuary and a good life. And among those children are the 100,000 or so that will have been trafficked this year.

Thank you for this moving story.

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Ralph Deeds  says:
2 months ago

Wonderful, touching, sad. I can tell you are quite a nice person. I wish more Americans' attitudes toward immigrants were as kind as yours.

Beata Stasak  says:
2 months ago

Thank you Immartin for believing in me, I just feel that the best way I can use my modest skills is 'to shout' for those

who can not do it my themselves. Thank you my dear hub friend for your encouragement.

My dear Ralph, I can feel for immigrants because I am /I was/ one of them. There are many people here in Australia and on your American shores who are afraid of immigrants, of their different culture, looks...afraid that immigrants take their place, their jobs...but I believe there is too many desperate people and there is enough space and wealth to share around in Western countries...I know we are now in deep economical crisis but it is still 'great life' if you compare it with the rest of the world. Thank you for your nice compliment.

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poetlorraine  says:
2 months ago

how sad is that, will read it again when i am not so tired, appreciate your comments on my hubs thanks a lot, looking forward to reading more of yours also

Beata Stasak  says:
2 months ago

Thank you so much for visiting my hub. I hope you come back.

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ralwus  says:
2 months ago

The naughty man here. I read this the other day but was not signed in and did want to tell you how much I enjoyed this. It is heart breaking to think this story play out so frequently. Thanks again. CC

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Beata Stasak  says:
2 months ago

Dear ralwus, better later than never. Thanks so much for taking time to come back. I feel very lucky that so many great

people on hub from all around the world visit me and spent time to leave a comment...it makes me feel very special.

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bayareagreatthing  says:
2 months ago

Wow Beata! So very moving and touching. Your words are powerful and eye opening as always!

Beata Stasak  says:
2 months ago

Thank you so much for your friendly and warm response.

It is great to have 'hub friends' just like you who I can connect with through my writing.

All the best Bayarea...visiting you soon. Beata

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Winsome  says:
2 weeks ago

There are footprints in the sanctuary of my mind...Brindah's and yours. Thanks for the words.

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