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There is a space between
Time, we are of one
Mind, complete measure
One of voice so
Complete as a blowing
Whisper, sleepless
Ear, your reverent
Heart, loving
Grace of
Space, your arms
Embracing, flesh encasing
Bone, united
Warmth
Fused, you and me
Enveloped, whole within our
Soul ,completly tantalized swept
Retreat, pangs of heart once
Spoke, away into clear you found
Dear emulsion, of one
Encountered, sun where clouds had
Laced, heart so rung, so far
Past, left only our sacred place, always
Near, devout my gratitude
Bleeds, through my soul of your
Timeless deeds
Love and measure, soft and bold
All-inclusive my heart you hold in
Spirit and kind loving me
Bind, will not be a testimony of
Thee.
You shined a light in my quiet
Glow, with your heart a magnificent
Flow , adrenaline pulsing within my
Soul , furry delightd by your inspiring
Soul, united we will always
Be, connected reverence
Unconditionally.
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so here you are now! Good to see you writing again. We missed you here, and our lady kept the flame going for you. Great to read your work again. Definitely missed.
Poet ~ Thank you so very much for all you are, and showing so much caring always... I am so vey grateful! ps. Changed the song... This one is much better! :)
AIDY ~ Yeah, I am here... some big things needing sorted offline, yet I had to get something out!! :) I so appreciate you and the poet, is a beautiful friend!
Hello Invictus glad to have you back and better than ever. Great poem. God Bless
Thanks so much, Keira7!
This is not my style of poetry, yet I am hoping to grasp many, so all critics welcome ! :)
Good stuff and in style. Missed ya babe and thanks for visiting my, you know. This is sweet! hugs CC
I was having a bit of Invictus withdrawals... feel much better now. Love the use of emulsion.
Awesome poem
Beautiful. Missed you! Glad that you're back. BTW, did I tell you that this is beautiful? :)
it is always a great moment of emotion, reading your poems.
ralwus ~ :) I missed all of you as well. *sigh* Thanks for the lovly comment. hugs back.
Randy ~ My it has been ages since I have seen you! I must come by and see what you've been up to. Great to see you! :)
ek ellis ~ Thanks for the praise, I had to get something out and I am grateful it had a voice. :)
Beth100 ~ Hi, thanks soo much for the lovely words. I am in an experimental place, so it is great to here it has benn received well. :)
zampano ~ Great to see you. I am very grateful to hear how you feel about my work. Thank you! :)
thankyou for this beautiful hub, wrote one myself today......
the change of song meant so much
It's very unique and creative Invictus! It is like a one line poem divided into smaller lines... very complicated yet simple to understand. Thanks.
Miss Take ~ Great to see you again. Long time no see! :) I appreciate your kind comments, always. When are you going to publish your new stuff???
Poet ~ Hi, yes I sooo agree. The first song was just not 'it'! :) This one is much more suiting for me, too!
Shamel ~ Thank you for sharing your perspective, greatly appreciated. I am aiming to evolve to different forms. This approach is foreign to me, yet I am feeling is a surreal-foreign place. :)
wow! amazing : ) x
That poem is so beautiful. I read it three times and I'm going back to read it again. I love your way with words, your imagery that conveys a precise feeling, without a precise meaning for me...You are a gifted poet, one of the best I've ever read.
hi just published my poem, thought i published it yesterday, but i must have pressed one button too less.....
CC_18 ~ Thanks so much! :) x
Paradise7~ Thank you for such beautuful and inspiring words. Very grateful to hear! :)
Miss take ~ Hi, thank you. I really enjoyed both your poems! :)
Awesome poem. I loved it!
Thanks so much, Musique! :)
Nice passion, nicely tucked in rhymes here. Nice tactile imagery. Hmmm. Maybe I'll just go for a shower. Very enjoyable, thank you, Invictus :)
I wanted to ask, though - isn't all love surreal?
Thank you, Jess! Shower? Hmmm... what a great compliment!
I would agree that all love is surreal, though - I also believe each holds it's own uniquness which is a reflection from the frequency the parties are radiating. Personally, as I have dug deeper into consciousness, I have connected with source that has re-defined surreal. :)
sounds good so can you share what this re difined surreal is
My best way of describing it as this point is through poetry! :)
lookink forward to it, just seen you are busy, speak later maybe,don't work too hard
Sounds good...I like the idea of remaining synonomous with such a vibe! :)
looked syn. up i am learning so many new words,. Off to work then away to The North back Monday night, sincerely hope there is some good work from you when i get back, I worked really hard yesterday, inspired by your seemingly black mood, i mean what else can i do....... glad you liked the friends one, back monday eve.
You are soooo Lovely, Poet! :) All the best on your holiday! I think you will not be disappointed! :D lol
Thank you!
not going til morning so just a quick 5 minutes to say hello., can't wait to see your work when i get back
I have '2' up already! :D
Have fun! ;)
o.k. going to find the second one,
woo hoo!
btw ~ your adopted brother has a new one out as well! :)
got to go out now, i have nearly 200 fans yipee.... getting slowly back up to where i was, do you think my work is improving, be honest
Oh yipee! I bet you'll be back to 400+ in no time. :) Your work is beautiful and, full-bodied, as in a great broard spectrum! Good on you! See you later.
hope so.... put a message for ya somewhere at the bottom of one of my hubs, you asked a question, maybe it is the new one from today.... anyway must dash... thanks it has to keep improving though, not anywhere near where i want to be yet. don't miss me too much enjoy the peace.,
hi where are you hidin
right here... :)
how's things right now
Right Now...this great moment!!!=) Beautiful!!!
How are you? :)
hi in work at 2 what is going on anything exciting.... just listening to this vid
Hi, hope you are having a great day! Had a lovely day with my son. Waliking through the Pembroke coastline around cliffs and the sea! The sea is raging with ripping waves and a beautiful white wash! :)
that was nice, just got in from work, having my food any time now, how is your son. There was a lovely white wash on the sea here, gently coming in was the tide.... made me wish i could paint...
Wow, sounds like a great sea vibe with you as well. We are just a bend away though the sea! Son is great, yet he had a moment, cause he was racing with the tides and the waves caught him...he got a wee bit wet! :) I think now he will choose to wear his Wellie's. :))
I hear you, the ocean is very inspiring for painting...
How are you feeling?
fine just been looking at loads of vids saying missing you, to do a poem of the same name....
great, csn't wait to read it! :)
didn't find one tho..... hello and goodbye....
Oh, thought you had... Hmmm, let me think?!? :) ciao..til the next stop! lol
i did not back in the morning.....found a few but did not quite fit the bill.... anyway the person i was missing kinda showed up so i will choose a different vid now
G'night! :) sounds good...
the complexity of a writers life phew....
This was a very nice poem Invictus.
Thanks very much, brandonfan! :)
Only stating the truth! : )
Thanks. The truth is the bestest! :D
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LOL yodle oldel odel odlel la ee hooo! =D
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poetlorraine says:
6 weeks ago
you are back you are definately back, now stay do you hear, stop disapearing...... going to listen to vid now