THe burning Candle
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Your body shakes with the winds as it drives it fangs through your skin
Through the imperfection of your life, one marked with death and sin
The flames lick your body top to bottom making you melt
The life fades from your eyes as pain you have felt
The inferno of what lurks inside makes you shed tears around your heart
They leak all around the scars caused by life right from the start
You hoped you can live a normal life, yet a shortened version you’ve got
You have been drafted into combustion; your desire is just like an inkblot
Yellow and fragile your eyes have turned, grappling with the world up on top
Yelping and thawing with time, losing the grip but the soreness you can’t stop
Fading as moments feed on your flesh like a cadaver
Lost in the ember of the past, a slave forever
Numbness in your solid acidified blood veins
Makes the throbbing plunge upon your skin like rain
A soulless creature lost between the dead and the living
A victim of the treacherous time barely growing, nor existing
Flesh combust to flames as the past haunts
As the little droplet of wax as time proceeds rots
Drafted to live under life’s boot of disgrace
Falling sulking in the dark as the light fades for this race
Choking by the glorious moments of a luminous past
Yet losing hope in good and sanity so fast
Drifting downwards towards the land of doom
As the little biological clock tick-tocks boom
Sounds echoe in the ear making it hard to believe
The calamity that approaches death, hard to perceive
Unable to stop the precipitating of the pain, lost to the nothingness
September promised a new flame of life, yet as you believed in forgiveness
The wind of redemption walked away
and let your hope astray
The pale complexion makes you on of the undead
Constrained by time and frozen by the cold
With nothing to hold one to and your soul outsold
Shadows keep falling and demons keep on descending
Say goodbye, walk to the other side broken for no one is listening
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Tantrum thanks for being the first to comment :D :D
I think just like tantrum, as she is me ,and I am tantrum! . cheers !
Yeh i still can't get used to the fact that you are Xtais and Xtasis is you LOL :D Thanks for the comment "should i say both of you or just you LOL) regards to all
hi uriel. i dont know how to message because your messaging system is blocked i think so ill just send it to you here. ive recently thought of a great idea that noones probably thinking right now. i was gonna write about this topic but im gonna let you write about it so you can benefit from my idea. why dont you write about youre thinking Muramasa as Kenpachi's zanpakto. i think everyone is gonna like it. it makes sense right because kenpachi was gone for a while and the possible reason for that is he was dealing with muramasa.
Well Ultramagnus, i have to say that we all would wish if Muramasa was Zaraki's zan but we all know that the episodes we are watching now are fillers and not originally part of the plot writter by Tite so simply it can't be. I would say that i was a huge fan of the idea of muramasa being Zaraki's zan but i had to cross this hope out after muramasa said he KILLED HIS master!"
I totally have to say i love kenpatchi even without knowing his zan's name. THe beauty in his character is his huge power regardless to his zan's. He is able to achieve captain level with out even tackling his real power. The QUESTION that many of us await to be answered is :"WHAT happens to zaraki's power if he achieves or becomes able to listen to his zan and use its power. The result would be total brutality and KICK @SS. I hope it is revealed in the coming stories.
Well Ultramagnus, i have to say that we all would wish if Muramasa was Zaraki's zan but we all know that the episodes we are watching now are fillers and not originally part of the plot writter by Tite so simply it can't be. I would say that i was a huge fan of the idea of muramasa being Zaraki's zan but i had to cross this hope out after muramasa said he KILLED HIS master!"
I totally have to say i love kenpatchi even without knowing his zan's name. THe beauty in his character is his huge power regardless to his zan's. He is able to achieve captain level with out even tackling his real power. The QUESTION that many of us await to be answered is :"WHAT happens to zaraki's power if he achieves or becomes able to listen to his zan and use its power. The result would be total brutality and KICK @SS. I hope it is revealed in the coming stories.
Ha! what allure resides in undeath! Lends whispering to the burning rot of Grixis. well put.
I missed reading your dark, goth poetry. And I see you have a little anime discussion going on. Glad to know you're doing good my friend :D
:D Stolas, thanks for the comment :d well appreciated :D
Cris, it is great to be back and to feel my footing on the ground:D Always glad to have you stop by :D i see i missed lots of your writings :D regards












tantrum says:
6 weeks ago
Silence and loneliness ,is what I feel through this poem. Dark ! As always. I like it ! Cheers !