Tension

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By Janetta


Oh, the tension.

It's building.

Ever growing and increasing.

Hurting,

frustrating.

Muscles tightening,

jaw clenching,

back aching,

neck straining,

body pounding all over.

Everything so coiled,

it needs to be released.

Ease the ache inside.

Some way to stop this hunger for the need to be relaxed.

Every moment that continues without release is agony,

ever building on the need,

ever adding to the fire.

Cries for an answer.

Where to find the one thing that will ease this tension?

Want to find it, need to find it, have to find it.

Now.

So tight, so hard, so tense.

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Laughing Mom profile image

Laughing Mom  says:
6 months ago

And I thought it was hot over on your other one! Whewwww..........

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
6 months ago

thought you might like it LM ;)

ajm5050 profile image

ajm5050  says:
6 months ago

Tension huh? Well mission accomplished Janetta, that was one intense read.

Mighty Mom profile image

Mighty Mom  says:
6 months ago

Uh, would a muscle relaxant help:-)?

shibashake profile image

shibashake  says:
6 months ago

Now you've got me all tense. I think I will go watch Daniel Craig to relax ;)

Candie V profile image

Candie V  says:
6 months ago

I'm a professional, I'm trained to handle these stresses!! 1. Have a margarita, 2. call Loopie and we'll have a margarita with you 3. Get over to the tree and we'll all chat!! loves ya!

Feline Prophet profile image

Feline Prophet  says:
6 months ago

Ooooh...makes me feel all knotted up too! Relax Janetta...nothing is worth feeling like that! And Candie's advice is good...go for it! :)

frogdropping profile image

frogdropping  says:
6 months ago

Janetta - *jaw dropped* are you being filthy? Too much dresser hauling made you all hot n sticky? Lordy me ...

CabinGirl  says:
6 months ago

I think I know someone who will get rid of your tension ; )

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
6 months ago

Why thank you AJM!!

MM--I'm thinking more like deep tissue massage ;)

Ahhh Shiba--you're on the right track ;) DC=YUM-O!! maybe we should have a DC marathon one of these days :)

Love ya too Candie!!! Chats and margaritas always make me smile ;)

hi FP!!!! how r u, hun?? I agree- CV's advice is good!!

hehe Froggy--see, you 'get' poetry...

CG--I think I do too...now where's my row boat...

\Brenda Scully  says:
6 months ago

I enjoyed that, it was indeed well written........ another nice hub

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
6 months ago

thank you Brenda!

fortunerep profile image

fortunerep  says:
6 months ago

very nice.......love your poems!

dori

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
6 months ago

thanks Dori!! :D

Randy Behavior profile image

Randy Behavior  says:
6 months ago

Another nice one Janetta. Bet you knew I'd like it though. ;)

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
6 months ago

Thanks Randy--thought it might be your sttyle ;)

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
6 months ago

I think I can unwind those knot s fer ya. tickle tickle

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
6 months ago

I had a feeling you might offer C!! :D

Paper Moon profile image

Paper Moon  says:
6 months ago

ralwus :O For shame young man!

Janetta- WOW. if I were not so recently relaxed, I would be wound tighter than a .....well, lets just say all wound up after that read. Nice writing. Hope you find a way to "ease" the tension.

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
6 months ago

Paper--well at least someone's all relaxed... let's just say I plan on easing it very soon ;)

agvulpes profile image

agvulpes  says:
6 months ago

Janetta,

"MM--I'm thinking more like deep tissue massage ;)"

OK just let me rummage here in my medicine chest I just might have something for that deep tissue problem of yours.

Ah yes here it is ! ;-)

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
6 months ago

Ag--if its a removable shower head, I've already got one

blondepoet profile image

blondepoet  says:
6 months ago

Oh I need my tension released...........xo

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
6 months ago

hehe don't we all, BP? ;)

agvulpes profile image

agvulpes  says:
6 months ago

Well Janetta as luck would have it , I have my tension wrench in my tool box. Perhaps I could just slip around and tension up your shower head, I'm sure it could do with some sort of adjustment with the amount of use it gets. I dont like to boast but I do have a reputation for getting the pressure just right. In fact my motto is "not too soft, not to hard just right". ;-) .

Here is my card just stick it on the side of the shower wall. The number is 555......... My Rates are very reasonable. Specials are available on application. 

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
6 months ago

LMAO Pete!! At first I thought you were gonna say you could slip it around my neck, but what you did say was so much better!!! I will be calling soon for an appointment. Poor shower head is almost worn out...

SkirvvyDawg profile image

SkirvvyDawg  says:
5 months ago

are we still talking poetry here?

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
5 months ago

why? What do you think we're talking about, Skirrvvy?? :D

CabinGirl  says:
5 months ago

I came back, both of us because of you. Thank you x

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
5 months ago

I can't imagine this place without you, both of you ;) Glad you're here and your welcome

Hack Retis  says:
5 months ago

LaughingMom just made me think of it...maybe I can hear Sharon Stone reciting this.

But I doubt she could write it better.

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
5 months ago

Hi there Hack--I'm afraid to ask what Laughing Mom made you think of LOL

Glad you stopped by ;)

SkirvvyDawg profile image

SkirvvyDawg  says:
4 months ago

Arrrrggg....even for a pirate with a peg leg, this is better than a boat ride in a hammock with a bottle of whiskey :-P! How's you Janetta?

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
4 months ago

Thanks Dawg ;) I'm pretty good. And yourself?

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