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A Bacteria Hero Named Tinchu

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By roastedpinebark

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Tinchu Episode 1

Once upon a time, in a very very close place lived a little bacteria named Tinchu. Now Tinchu wasn't just little, he was a microorganism - just like the rest of his little brothers and sisters. Tinchu's full name, Tinchuganifus Plaque, came from a large family of plaque bacteria.

Tinchu and his family loved to live in the mouth of homosapians, a name that bacteria enjoyed calling people. Normally, plaque were an enemy to homosapians, causing many problems with teeth and gums. Tinchu, however, was just a curious member of the plaque family who enjoyed peeking out of homosapian's mouths and looking at the gigantic world below.

One day, Tinchu discovered that he was different then the rest of his plaque brothers and sisters, Tinchu could actually understand what homosapians were saying and he even learned how to read! Tinchu would watch the homosapians day after day, listening to their conversations and studying their way of life.

Every morning, Tinchu would wake up earlier then his family and actually explore outside his homosapians mouth! Tinchu was always careful to return before the homosapian woke up, however, otherwise Tinchu might never be able to return home to his family and friends.

The plaque family were mostly a daring, brave group of microorganisms, with only one source of fear - toothpaste. For homosapians to have healthy mouths, the Plaque families couldn't overpopulate in a mouth or damage would be done. Homosapians would brush their teeth with toothpaste usually twice a day to keep their mouths undamaged.

As Tinchu and his family would hide in the crevices and caves of their homosapians mouth to avoid toothpaste, Tinchu discovered that something wasn't going normal with the mouth cleaning process of his homosapian! The toothpaste was actually slowly hurting the homosapian's mouth! Tinchu knew he had to do something about it, or microorganismic life as he knew it could be done forever!

After the tooth brushing was almost done, Tinchu bravely ran out of his warm cave, into the dangerous, toothpaste filled mouth! Jumping over clumps and pools of toothpaste, Tinchu lept aboard a safe spot on the toothbrush, as it was pulled out of the homosapians mouth.

Tinchu, toothbrush, and water collided as the homosapian rinsed his toothbrush, Tinchu barely hanging on as the water swept over him. The homosapian finally put the toothbrush down by the sink, Tinchu still on board.

Now was the hard part! Tinchu had to leave a message to his homosapian that the toothpaste was bad, but how? Scanning the area, Tinchu found a teeny weeny piece of a pencil tip and a small scrap of paper. Using every micro-ounce of strength he had, Tinchu left a message on the toothpaste tube with the scrap of paper saying: Poison!

Now all Tinchu could do was wait for his homosapian to come and read the note and brush his teeth again with a different toothpaste, so Tinchu could return home.

The next morning finally came, Tinchu not getting a micro-wink of sleep that night. The homosapian walked over to the sink to start brushing his teeth when he spotted the tiny note positioned on the toothpaste tube! Also reading the incredients, the homosapian let out a gasp because what he had been brushing his teeth with hadn't been toothpaste at all, but a tube of orange astronaught food, containing unhealthy levels of acid to leave on gums and teeth!

Tinchu had saved the day, or atleast helped his homosapian to have a healthier mouth! Climing on the toothbrush, it was time for Tinchu to return home. Tinchu, a one in a trillion microorganism, finally could live happily ever after.

The End

 

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roastedpinebark profile image

roastedpinebark  says:
11 months ago

You're welcome yxhuang, thanks for taking the time to read it!

Rik Ravado profile image

Rik Ravado  says:
11 months ago

Brilliant imagination - you certainly gave diva what she aked for - well done! I'll post a link on my superhero self-improvement hub to this hub.

roastedpinebark profile image

roastedpinebark  says:
11 months ago

Thanks Rik, yeah I had some free time on my hands and figured writing it was worth a shot. Thanks for checking it out and putting up a link!

mistyhorizon2003 profile image

mistyhorizon2003  says:
11 months ago

LOL, great story, I am almost reluctant to brush my teeth now in case I hurt a little "Tinchu" :)

roastedpinebark profile image

roastedpinebark  says:
11 months ago

Lol, thanks mistyhorizon2003. I knew I had to be careful about that, actually, because it might discourage kids from brushing their teeth!

goldentoad profile image

goldentoad  says:
11 months ago

That's some really good stuff, keep it up. Very creative.

roastedpinebark profile image

roastedpinebark  says:
11 months ago

Thanks goldentoad, I'll keep trying lol

juggalo 4 eva profile image

juggalo 4 eva  says:
11 months ago

nice story man!

Christoph Reilly profile image

Christoph Reilly  says:
11 months ago

Good job and a very cute story. Thanks!

roastedpinebark profile image

roastedpinebark  says:
11 months ago

Thanks juggalo 4 eva and Christoph Reilly. Thanks for reading it!

ripplemaker profile image

ripplemaker  says:
11 months ago

Congratulations! This hub is part of this week's hubnuggets! Join the fun and vote now. Invite as many people as you like to vote too! Find out more...click on the link below.http://hubpages.com/hub/hubnuggets-jan23-2009

roastedpinebark profile image

roastedpinebark  says:
11 months ago

Sweet, thanks for informing me ripplemaker!

ripplemaker profile image

ripplemaker  says:
11 months ago

You are most welcome.  :D Dentists like me appreciate stories like this too! LOL

C. C. Riter  says:
11 months ago

Great inspirational and creative story for my grandkids. Good job. And congratulations on being a nominee.

roastedpinebark profile image

roastedpinebark  says:
11 months ago

ah, I see ripplemaker. Everythings falling into place now that I know you're a dentist, lol! I just hope that the story didn't make kids fear hurting Tinchu by brushing their teeth.

C. C. Riter, thank you for your kind words. I'm very glad that my story can be used constructively! Thanks for spending the time to read it also!

ripplemaker profile image

ripplemaker  says:
11 months ago

I am sure it won't :D But kids love stories. So...

roastedpinebark profile image

roastedpinebark  says:
11 months ago

Thats good to here. So...?

marisuewrites profile image

marisuewrites  says:
10 months ago

What a neat way to educate us!! Good job!! =))

roastedpinebark profile image

roastedpinebark  says:
10 months ago

Thank you marisuwrites : )

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