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"The Essence of women"

God formed and created women, from the rib of Adam.
God formed and created women, from the rib of Adam.

"The Essence of Women"

The Essence of Women"

God formed and created women, all on his own.

From Adams ribs and precious bones.

Women to man, is a precious and a priceless stone.

In man's eye sight she can never do wrong.

Women is the air that man breathe

And all the unreachable goals he achieves.

Women is the constant beating of man's heart.

A new beginning and a brand new start.

Women the essence of man's thoughts, that he holds so dear.

And the closeness of a women' s body heat ,that man also hold so near.

Women is the irresistible fantasy that occupies man's mind

She's the essence of love and kindness that's hard to find.

Women is man's life time best friend

To stick by man and work with him to the end.

The essence of women is childish, oftentimes demanding and and incomplete.

But the love,and car of her man makes her complete.

What women want from her man is ever so simple and plain

She competes for his ardent affections forever and again.

women is the essence of me and of you

a long time wish and beautiful dream come true.

Benny Faye Douglass



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Hello, hello,  says:
2 months ago

A lovely hub, thank you.

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Veronica Allen  says:
2 months ago

This beautiful, you've done it again Creativeone59!

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creativeone59  says:
2 months ago

Thank you Hello hello for your comment and feedback. creativeone59

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poetlorraine  says:
2 months ago

enjoed that

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creativeone59  says:
2 months ago

Thank you for your comment, feedback and support. Godspeed. creativeone59

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creativeone59  says:
2 months ago

Thank you poetlorraine, for your comment and feedback. Godspeed. creatived

ek ellis profile image

ek ellis  says:
2 months ago

Where would man be without his woman, love your poem :)

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creativeone59  says:
2 months ago

Thank you so much ek ellis, I appreciate your comment and feedback. Godspeed. creativeone59

Sarra Garrett  says:
2 months ago

Very lovely

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creativeone59  says:
2 months ago

Thank you Sarra Garrett, thank you for your comment and your feedback. creativeone59

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esllr  says:
2 months ago

Won-der-ful! I really enjoyed this. God Bless!

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maven101  says:
2 months ago

" Women is the air that man breathe "...Indeed..!

Touching poetry beautifully constructed..Thank you, Larry

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creativeone59  says:
2 months ago

Thanks again esllr, for your very appreciated comment and feedback. blessings to you. creativeone59

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creativeone59  says:
2 months ago

Thank you Larry for such a way with words. thanks for your comment and feedback. I appreciate you. Godspeed. creativeone59

ivori profile image

ivori  says:
2 months ago

Wonderful! A woman is a special gift to men.

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creativeone59  says:
2 months ago

They are the best gift to man, if they will only appreciate them. Thank you for your comment and feedback. blessing to you my dear. creativeone59

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love my yorkies  says:
2 months ago

Great poem. "She's the essence of love and kindness that's hard to find". So true, my dear.

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creativeone59  says:
2 months ago

Thank you love my yokies, for your comment and support. Blessings to you. creativeone59

Edwyne Rouchelle  says:
5 weeks ago

Hi! Loved this piece. You do have the talent for writing poetry. Hope you'll enjoy your Thanksgiving holiday and travels. ttyl

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