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The Greatest Love Story Ever Told

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By my-success-guru



Gather around the camp fire

Picture this: It's a cool crisp summer night with a soft gentle breeze and the aroma of hickory smoke swirling- filling the air as the luminous stars light up the sky. shh listen- can you hear the crickets chirping with a rhythmic soothing flow and see the crackling orange hues dancing in the breeze of the fire?Grab your favorite drink and relax as this mysterious tale is about to unfold. Come closer- sit back- Gather around the camp fire and pay attention because you will never hear another story like this again.

 

Life was simple and pure

Legend has it that a long time ago times were different. People cared about the simple things in life like just enjoying nature, baking an apple pie- helping their neighbor. People loved you for who you were much more than things you had. People were more innocent kind of like on the show Little House On The Prairie. Sure they had their problems but they didn't have all the fast pace stresses like we do today. Life was simple and pure. People were more connected to nature and each other. So you can imagine how awe struck the man in the story was when in his darkest moment- out of total despair- a miracle happened! He found a love in today's world that was unheard of. It was like he traveled back in a time machine to those days of a long time ago.

 

The mysterious dream

First let me tell you this is no ordinary love story. This is greater than the Titanic, Romeo and Juliet and Top Gun all rolled up into one. This story begins in one beautiful woman's dreams. You see, in her own despair and loneliness came her greatest revelation as if some cosmic force pulled them together. A special date in her dreams was revealed as a beautiful Goddess came to her and offered her a broken ring. At first she didn't know what this meant. Why was the ring broken? The beautiful woman said "this isn't mine" and tried to give it back because she thought it didn't belong to her but the beautiful Goddess just smiled as if to say you will know in time. Then something magical happened! When the beautiful woman placed the broken ring on her wedding ring finger it transformed right before her very eyes. It became the most beautiful brilliant sparkling pink ring the woman ever witnessed in her entire life! When the beautiful woman woke from her dream she was startled and in a daze. Her dream was so mysterious so vivid- felt so real and touched her heart so deeply that she knew it must be a sign. she knew from that moment on something magical was about to come into her life but she didn't know what.

 

Forces of the universe were pulling them together

Then it happened- on the special date revealed to her in her mysterious dream a mysterious man wrote to her. Somehow even though it was just a simple friendly correspondence as if the forces of the universe were pulling them together the magical bond was already forming. Somehow they both felt a strong love for each other but how could this be with one simple letter? Soon after they talked on the phone and it was as if they were both blessed with a miracle. The woman's voice was so soft- so sweet- so soothing with a spirit so full of life and intense longing for the man that he couldn't believe this was really happening. It felt like a dream. It was as if somehow they had know each other for ages-like they were a part of each other- maybe in a past life before. It was as if they were soul mates. As weeks passed somehow each day their love grew stronger and stronger until they were both overflowing with love- until it seemed there was no room for their love to grow and that's when somehow it grew even stronger. Their love grew so strong in fact that it was as if they were always together even though it they lived nearly oceans apart.Yet knowing they weren't physically together in each others arms was often tearing them apart inside when ever they whispered in the night how much they cared for each other. Often it was too much to bear. It felt like living without the very air that they breath.

 

They embraced like two stars colliding

Finally as if two cosmic stars collided call it fate- call it destiny- the man and beautiful woman finally met. They embraced each other with a love and passion that only they could share- clinging like the most powerful magnets that no one on Earth could ever tear apart. He kissed her softly on the cheek as he gently slid his hand down the sides of her body sending..... pulses of pure Ecstasy through her entire body which made her tremble and go limp yet thirsting for all of his wild desires. They were together at last.

To be continued!

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AEvans profile image

AEvans  says:
6 months ago

I love the story , just relax a little more and bring out your inhibitions without passing the gray line.

He kissed her softly on the cheek as he gently slid his hand down the sides of her body sending.....

Great read!!

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my-success-guru  says:
6 months ago

Hi AE,

Thanks for great tip! Thanks for stopping by!

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anjalichugh  says:
6 months ago

I'm speechless. So beautifully carved out! Although it's hard to find true love in this world, yet the picture you painted seems so real that I want to believe that it actually happened with someone. These days it's so rare to experience celestial intervention in bringing soul mates together. Seems to be a God-blessed couple. I can hardly wait to hear the rest. Simply amazing!

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my-success-guru  says:
6 months ago

Hey Anjali!

You render me speechless as well with all of your kind and beautifully expressed words that warm my heart. Thanks for stopping by.

fortunerep profile image

fortunerep  says:
6 months ago

Beautiful!!! Why do you have your comments listed first?

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my-success-guru  says:
6 months ago

Thanks fortunerep- I'm lad you enjoyed it. My comments somehow got out of order. I fixed the matter.

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swathin2  says:
4 months ago

Nice story an dthe way you presented it is really awesome. made me to read it to the end and i liked it very much.

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