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The Illusionist

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By Janetta

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He draws them in easily.

 

Too easily.

 

They stare in awe,

following quick tricks of the hand.

 

The audience is mesmerized

as he moves without pause.

 

Even if he skipped a step they would not notice.

He has them in a trance.

They are his.

 

Where slight of hand exists,

they see only fluid magic.

A hand sweeping in elegant patterns

as he manipulates the talisman and the crowd.

Behind the back,

up a sleeve,

it's all smoke and mirrors.

 

They are sure he is the man he pretends to be.

They are sure his illusions are their reality.

He is a master of subtlety and bravado,

even making them one in the same.

They see only what he wants them to see,

even as he becomes lost within his own movements,

becoming, himself, the illusion.

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Randy Behavior profile image

Randy Behavior  says:
3 months ago

Spookey! :)

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Hi Randy! Thanks for coming by!! :D

Candie V profile image

Candie V  says:
3 months ago

Nice! You are in "Janetta Mode" once again! Welcome back!

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tony0724  says:
3 months ago

Very Interesting Janetta . It reads like a poem and a super short story at the same time.

Pacal Votan  says:
3 months ago

Love your plainly stated lines.

Thanks for the new Janetta poem. :)

one2get2no profile image

one2get2no  says:
3 months ago

I love this. Thank you.

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frogdropping  says:
3 months ago

Hey Miss Pretty ... you're back :) I love magic and illusion, I find it ever fascinating. I even like to discover how they do such things. I never leaves me feeling hollow, only educated. I marvel at the simplicity with which they fool us. Wonderful Janetta, as always :):)

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Hi CV!! yup, back in J mode once again lol

Thanks Tony!! Good to see u hun :D

Hi Pacal--glad you stopped by!

Thanks One2get2no!! Glad you liked it :D

My frog!! How are you deary?? I'm so glad you stopped by. And glad you liked it ;)

Triplet Mom profile image

Triplet Mom  says:
3 months ago

Janetta - That sent chills up my spine. I just love your writing.

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lyricsingray  says:
3 months ago

This was fabulous not to mention a great topic - so glad I came by - thanks,kimberly

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Thanks Tripletmom!! Nice to see you--hope life's going good for ya :D

Thanks Kimberly!! :D

Jess Killmenow profile image

Jess Killmenow  says:
3 months ago

This works so well. You really set the mood. Thank you

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Thanks Jess! Glad you liked it!! :D

Meehoo  says:
3 months ago

Janetta,

That was talismatic! You are such a gifted poetess. MH loves it! :D

BadCo  says:
3 months ago

Sorry it took me so long to read this, another great poem my friend, really loved it !

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Well thank you MH ;)

Bout time Bad lol Glad you liked it :D

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
3 months ago

Fabulous poem...hmmm, my mind seems to align with this illusionist! :)

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Thanks Invictus :D glad you liked it!

Shalini Kagal profile image

Shalini Kagal  says:
3 months ago

The illusionist or the illusion? Very clever and a great read - thank you, Janetta!

Dark Heart profile image

Dark Heart  says:
3 months ago

Very nice.

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Thanks Shalini and Dark Heart!! Glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by!! :D

HealthTip profile image

HealthTip  says:
3 months ago

frogdropping profile image

frogdropping  says:
3 months ago

Not here for reading. Just saying hi again Miss Pretty :) Staring at your picture and feeling warm and fuzzy. That kind of thing.

You should interview me again you know. 100 hubs an all. Obviously I am now making a ton of money. And smoke hand-rolled fat cuban cigars. Now I'm really green hehe ...

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Pachuca213  says:
3 months ago

I really liked this one! Great Poem chica!

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Health Tip--I think u left your comment in invisible ink again...

Froggy--HAHAHA I am loving that idea! We could see how ornery you've gotten now that your a thousandaire!! :D

JJ! Hey girlie :D How are ya?

frogdropping profile image

frogdropping  says:
3 months ago

I'm more ornery than ever. Maybe I will become mean and green. That's what happens when you get to being as rich as Midas right? You get all ornery.

*wanders off, intending to google 'ornery'*

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

HAHA!! you will find a picture of a little green frog next to the description ;)

frogdropping profile image

frogdropping  says:
3 months ago

*eyes janetta*

Will I now ...

Pachuca213 profile image

Pachuca213  says:
3 months ago

I am good...how are you?

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

LOL Frog..maybe :)

I'm pretty good, JJ-thanks ;)

HealthTip profile image

HealthTip  says:
3 months ago

I was speechless just looking at you lol, enjoy yer weekend Illinois ; )

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

haha thanks House--you too hun ;)

HealthTip profile image

HealthTip  says:
3 months ago

Wowwwwwwwwwwww smokin xxxx

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
3 months ago

He aaaain't trickin me. We need to hubjack you.

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

AHA...the boobies bring the comments!

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
3 months ago

The boobies weren't here when I first came in. I do adore them.

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

They're certainly here now! lol they've taken over my whole page!!

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
3 months ago

They have at that, and I'm such an old fool for leavin ya' like I did. Ach well...

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

its in the past :) welcome back

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thanglynn07  says:
3 months ago

Oh I love this poem! I think we have all met an illusionist in our lifetime right? Talk about being blinded by love, and the refusal to see the flaws...Overlook it all...denial.Very meaningful poem!

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Why thank you thanglynn! :D

Buckudo  says:
3 months ago

This flows, puts one in a sort of trance, very relaxed...kind of sleepy...the hand movement...the eyes...I think I'm under some sort of spell...

isn't that the point?

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

it is, Buck ;)

AEvans profile image

AEvans  says:
3 months ago

Now those are very deep thoughts wonderfully written and I went back to read it twice. " They see what he only wants them to see", mystifying ! :)

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Why thank you Julianna :) Nice to see you

shibashake profile image

shibashake  says:
3 months ago

Hey J! I am so late to the party - who drank all the vodka?! Savages!

Love the poem. Can't wait for your book!

Have you seen the Illusionist with Ed Norton? I am a bit biased because I really like Ed but it is a very entertaining movie. I also really liked The Prestige (Hugh Jackman and Christian Bale).

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Sorry Shiba, doll--you'll have to settle for Amaretto round' here ;)

Yeah, I've seen it and I loved it! Of course, I was a little more partial to the prestige b/c Hugh is my Hollywood husband and all. And of course C Bale isn't too hard on the eyes ,either. Of course neither is Ed Norton!! HAHA ok, enough of my boy craziness...lol Did u ever see the Painted Veil? It is my all time fave Ed Norton movie--I LOVE it!!

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shibashake  says:
3 months ago

I have never seen Painted Veil - but just checked it out on IMDB. It looks really good so I must definitely order it! Thanks!

You should do a hub on Hollywood husbands! That would be fun. I don't know whom to pick - so many handsome boys to choose from :) I want at least 10 of them.

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

Shiba!! You have to let me know if you like it or not! I bet you will ;)

Do you know I've been contemplating doing a hollywood husbands hub?? lol My only concern is that it will be too long hahaha

shibashake profile image

shibashake  says:
3 months ago

You could have it be like an ongoing series where you highlight for each dude the qualities that make them into a good Hollywood hubby. Maybe pair them up with a favorite dessert to eat while reading about them - lol.

That would be fun and YUMMY! :D

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

haha fun aaand yummy lol Although I don't think we'd need dessert to make it yummy!! :o

shibashake profile image

shibashake  says:
3 months ago

Hugh Jackman always makes me think of chocolate brownies - solid, filling, and delicious! :)

Ed Norton makes me think of a banana split - can be vulnerable and sweet, but can also be tough and nasty!

Johnny Depp makes me think of Skittles - always playing a very different role.

:P All definitely yummy!!

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

OMG Shiba!! you crack me up!!! :D "solid filling and delicious"!! I love it--i may have to use that one LOL

1st hotties hub is on its way!!!

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bloodnlatex  says:
3 months ago

Outstanding! I know a few people that work on the side show circuit, and you pretty much described them to a tee. great job!

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
3 months ago

why thank you, blood. Can I call u blood? :)

Lissa Lynn profile image

Lissa Lynn  says:
2 months ago

Great hub! Have you seen the movie, The Prestige, you've described the main characters to perfection!!

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
2 months ago

thanks Lissa--yes I have seen it--great movie!!! :D

BeccaHubbardWoods profile image

BeccaHubbardWoods  says:
4 weeks ago

I think I know that guy...lol! :)

Janetta profile image

Janetta  says:
4 weeks ago

yeah, Becca...I think he gets around LOL

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