The Mean Bird .... Written by A 5 Year Old and grandma
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This is Erin's Story She Is Five Years Old..... she lives in Ireland, and can speak a little Irish.
Once upon a time there was a female bird, she was very mean to all her friends. Also she was unkind to her mum and dad..... she was mean to her brother and sister, and even everybody.
When she went in the shop one day, she ordered the man in the shop to give her bird food. She did not pay, she was very rude to the man in the shop. Her friends came in the shop, to by some bread, and some milk. If you think these friends were birds, you are wrong, how could birds buy bread and milk
The nasty bird Kylie, told her friends they were awful and dumb, and threw them out of the shop. She went home ate all the bread, and saved none for the family..... how mean is that.
if you like Erin's story, please tell us...
Erin is my grand daughter here is a poem about her.....
Erin is a beautiful princess,
She sleeps in a bed with a pink net over her
Love hearts and butterflies on the wall....
Erin makes beautiful things,
creative things........
cards for mummy...
love hearts for Emily her only girl cousin,
She lives far away in England.
Erin has a brother called Reuben
Sometimes he is mean.
Like the nasty bird in the story,
But sometimes he is kind....
He supports Liverpool football club,
But she support Everton.
Like grandad......
Grandad is a good friend
Her favourite toy is
princess game on the wee .....
Erin's friends are really nice,
They are kind, and play with her,
Erin helped me with this and typed some too......
When i grow up i want to be a teacher,
I am going to write a book for the kids,
For the kids in my class to read.
They can write their names in the book.
Erin likes to create......
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It would seem that children are the most cruel to those who are the most precious. I know that she is very thankful to have a loving and caring grandparent such as yourself. Brilliant story, your grandchild done a great job helping you.
Seems to me that Tiara belongs to the proper little girl. So cute and talented too. I think she may be a famous Irish writer someday. Emily is a little doll too, can't leave her out and that gramps is a good lookin' feller. Thanks for sharing. CC
Erin means Eire, so i suppose it is a lovely irish name. Some irish names are so beautiful.... i had never heard them til i came to live here.....
Ralwus, you are right, she is a very girly girl, and giggled all the way through writing that last night. I think she will be a writer, as it was so important for her, that i wrote exactly the words she wanted, i will encourage her as much as possible
She supports Liverpool, I think Grandad pollutes her mind when she comes to your house he he! Xx
I thought she did, but she insists it is Everton, we will get her an Everton kit will we?????
Wonderful story! I am impressed! I hope Erin will keep sharing her stories and I thank you for sharing this one with me. Excellent... :-)
Cailín maith Erin.Good girl Erin.This is a beautiful hub,I love the drawings and the story.
That is so sweet! :)
Most people would over look such wonderful things that kids say and do.You take appreciation for them as they should be appreciated and celebrated for the love of life they have and give to everyone they meet.She is so lucky to have you as a role model and a great influence.
and i in turn, Dream On am so happy to have her, she is a treasure indeed....
I have to go to sleep don't forget to get some shut eye.All work no play makes poetloraine a cranky girl.
it is only 11 o'clock in the morning here, what time are you at
710 A.M. I have been up since 3 A.M. you inspired me to talk.
wow, so what now for you work or bed or what
wow, so what now for you work or bed or what
Bed where I can dream on!
good idea
lancalonie thanks for your comments
I like a story where the mean bird can be mean. It was very cute.
How cute. Unbelievable that a five year old can write so well. Keep her going, she has a future in this. Very good, you too granny.
Now I will have to keep looking for nice hubs from your grand daughter.I know where she gets her talent from.
flightkeeper, it was so real in her mind when she wrote it too...
Fstfreta cute indeed i believe she will have a future in writing, i intend to encourage her
dream on i like to think she gets some of her talents from me. She loves to swim like me also
This is excellent! Miss Erin is quite a talent. Much be the genes. :) Her artwork is lovely as well. Thanks for sharing this..
hi I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s I tell her every time so one makes a comment about her poem, she smiles with delight
hi I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s I tell her every time so one makes a comment about her poem, she smiles with delight
Writing that is something that will out live time.I feel for those cave men who got the jump on me.I have it easy they spent hours in the dark.Wow what a difference time makes.I am so glad I live now.I am truely blessed.
hi dream on, yeah glad we were not living in caves it is cold enough here, even with the heating, just imagine how cold it would have been in the caves
I think your grand daugther has a gift, she is going to be a very big writer one day. I say to her and you, "Great Hub, good work and thank you". :) God Bless.
hi poetlorraine. Thought I'd return your visit. What do I like about this hub? Its authenticity. You've created a little window into your world. Thanks for that, I enjoyed pressing my nose up against it.
Erin has just been reading her fan mail and she would like to thank you all for the kind comments.... She is working on some more poems and stories, in fact she has just published a story about 4 little girls
Very cute story! It is always great to hear kids make-up stories. Their inhibitions out the window; it's so easy for them since their imagination goes wild when they are young.
The Sablirab..... Erin is with me, she is loving all the fans, thankyou so much for the encouragement
The story and the poem are very cute! I hope she continues with all the stories! I would hate to not read more!
dohn121 says:
2 months ago
It's funny how kids can just conjure up stories, isn't it Poet? I love the name Erin, as it's perhaps the perfect Irish girl name.