The Real Truth- Away We Go Edition

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By TheRealTruth

Away (A Bad One)

Over the edge. Yeah we've all been there. Some are worse than others. Some take it on the chin, some make it a big production. What's one more? Welcome to the fold I say. It's in the way that you realize. It took a good number of years for me. I stood idly by, this one passed, that one waved, yet another made use of my bathroom. What is it that drives this car? It's not me. I see my hands, the steering wheel...I feel it, I turn with it.....but that's not me. Some are worse than others. Who the hell is that? You in or out? No time to think. Just answer. Yeah some are worse than others...but it's all in how you take it.


Where?

So I just wanted to share where the inspiration came from. Goldentoad has written a terrific Hub that you can read here. I read it and began immediately formulating. Hate to thieve on ya Toadie, but thanks. Any feedback would be appreciated either in the comments or come taunt me in real time here. Thanks so much for reading and remember....you can always FIND the Real Truth or you can come here and I'll tell it to you.

Minutes Away

  • Just because you don't hear it ticking doesn't mean it's not.
  • Are you sure about that?
  • Oh frick. I knew it. This is what I get for getting excited. Just give me the bad news. Forget the good news.
  • And so it begins....a story like no other
  • BUT BUT BUT BUT
  • Well jeez, it's already 7 past...this seems ridiculous doesn't it?
  • And here is the sequel
  • Caught myself looking at the clock. I really hate when I do that.

  • up next: Nah, you're wrong. So SO wrong.
  • tick tick tick tick tick tick tick
  • No freakin way. I'm super duper cereal you guys. That's just weird.
  • And let's complete the trilogy.
  • OH NO HE DIDN'T!
  • Oh yes he did.
  • The clock is still there! I can't shake it!
  • Lookin at this this this and this. Does that make any sense?
  • SHUT YOUR FACE!
  • Nah......for real....I'm dead f'ing serious. This clock is freakin me out.
  • TICK TICK TICK TICK TICK TICK TICK
  • You'll shine my shoes if I want you to.

  • Oh boy oh boy. You're pissin people off by now.
  • Ok I get it and apologize.
  • TICK TICK TICK TICK TICK TICK...............

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goldentoad profile image

goldentoad  says:
7 months ago

that clock needs to be smashed, incinerated, thrown out with my beer cans, can't stand that it mocks me, controls me, plays me like a hooker, I'm cheap, and worthless to it, it will go on even if I don't hear it, is right. Somehow I will break its paradigm and find my own tickity tock.

thanks for the link too.

Jewels profile image

Jewels  says:
7 months ago

What is it that drives the car?

TheRealTruth profile image

TheRealTruth  says:
7 months ago

GT:sure thing.

they say there's a clock inside all of us. and thats the one that pisses me off more sometimes. i just want some sleep.

Jewels: The car drives itself. So much so that sometimes I don't even get in it.

Pam Roberson profile image

Pam Roberson  says:
7 months ago

Heavy. (Good heavy)

My theory is this: it's the mechanical 'outside' clocks that create a mess in controlling us which then mess up our internal clocks. You know who makes these clocks right? "THEY" do. Yep. It's those wise guys we all talk about when we say, "THEY say..." and THEY say lots of things to screw with us and make us think so we can't sleep. :D

lovezan profile image

lovezan  says:
7 months ago

The Real Truth Away We Go Edition

what a wonderful hub! I'd not heard of them before, fascinating.

TheRealTruth profile image

TheRealTruth  says:
7 months ago

Pam: thank you so much.

Yes THEY can apparently do whatever THEY want. THEY can screw up sleep patterns. THEY can drug us. hy don't THEY ever want to do something nice?

Lovezan: Thank you for coming in and the kind words. I appreciate it.

Am I dead, yet? profile image

Am I dead, yet?  says:
7 months ago

'it the ticking of the hideous clock!' freakin' insanity! I loved it!

TheRealTruth profile image

TheRealTruth  says:
7 months ago

tick tick tick my friend. as does the pulse in your temple.

Cris A profile image

Cris A  says:
7 months ago

Or you can choose to take the ticking as a reminder that you actually have YOUR time in YOUR hands. If you can't turn it off, look at it from the other side. This was some scary. Surreal-scary! :D

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TheRealTruth  says:
7 months ago

It's in the dark where I formulate and scheme. It's in the dark where the clocks ticks boom like thunder. I COULD turn the light on.....and one day I will....I'll leave my darkened corner, take control of the tick,tick,tick and enjoy some sun.

Eaglekiwi profile image

Eaglekiwi  says:
7 months ago

I'd check the water!!

Good hub,thankyou

TheRealTruth profile image

TheRealTruth  says:
7 months ago

Thank you for coming in! I appreciate the kind words.

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