Will the rose bloom again?
64Water From A Source Denied
So Sad
The rose took pride of place,
Her heart leapt when it arrived,
Not noticing it's thorns,
Only the bud,
Showing so much potential,
With just a little hard work,
Dedication......
Time stolen from other activities.....
The petal of the beautiful rose,
Began to open,
Though now it lies wilting....
Discouragment
Lack of understanding,
The rose for now droops
Will it have the strength
To remain alone,
Lacking water friom the source,
It would like........
Water from other sources,
May lift up the bud a little...
Encourage further growth,
Or maybe the will within the rose.
crushed whilst so young,
Has somehow died also......
And will not be revived,.
Time alone will tell
The rose, in some water now,
Smiling out at the world,
With a tinge of sadness.
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and thank you for your speedy comment.... my friend x
Love it! :D so so so beaut! :) This, is lovely to speak to many...I'm sure!
ah but will it revive,,,, hi I*n*v*c*t*u*s think it just got some water.
Nice poem. Roses are like humans too - they need support to keep them alive.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful hub.
thanks beth811
Very beautiful poem, with a real depth of feeling....likes it a lot.
I am a big fan. Lovely hub as always. Thanks my dear Poetlorraine.:)God Bless.
:)can I put in some water as well?
Do you think it will make the rose
brighter & with joy it will swell?
alekhouse..... Hi thanks for your lovely positive comments.
keira7 thankyou so much, you are so kind.....
Words cocktail oh yes please, a little of your bubbly ness too and i think the rose will perk up in no time at all
here is a little more water just for your rose, nice poem
thank you seasoning you are so kind thanks for stopping by
I was touched by this beautiful poem. Thanks.
Hi Raven King glad it touched you, it was heartfelt, i wish family members liked my work, but they don't even read them sob...
keira thanks for the water and the champaigne
some water for your rose. Enjoyed this poem may the vase never run dry
thanks seasoning always a pleasure to see you around here
Perhaps you will cherish the memory of this rose
and it will live again in the scent of another flower.
that would be perfect wouldn't it Dark Heart
dohn121 says:
5 weeks ago
A beautiful and melancholic poem, Poet. Thank you for the symbolism.