Touch Point
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Giggling together, talking with this deep knowing, a new intimacy like a dance in space, joy in mutual influence, heavenly bodies not touching yet so involved, heavenly
On a point of concentration our energies converge and one of us emerges transformed like some cliche butterfly new and beautiful
Something in our mix, like nitrogen and glycerin, energy there in synergy, power
Precious beyond anything this nameless relationship, wrapt, wrapped in you, warmed to the soul
You and I could change the world I swear, laughing like children with a toy
Someday soon we will sit and gaze into each others' eyes and know
Exactly who is there
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>>>>>>>>>>>Ahhhhh...think stand over here! :)
What is it that caused you to write this poem?
If fills me up, thinking about the joy of love and intimacy with God.
I was mentoring another poet and felt a deep affinity. Thank you for asking, Cindy. :)
What do they say? Whenever two or more of you are gathered... ?
There i will be also, i think
NT it sounds as if you are creating a meeting place for you and your desire to enjoy those precious moment in person--nice poem, NT as always.
Not a 'place' exactly, Am I dead, yet. :) Thank you
The drive to capture the essence of that experience is an ache and a torment. This one comes closer than many others. I felt it--especially the last two lines.
lets change the world
the last two lines, the last two lines, will they ever be the first two lines of a new poem
poetlorraine says:
2 months ago
mmmmmmmmmmm hopefully