"When Death Comes"
59"When Death Comes"
A single mother of three children was about to celebrate the birthday of her only son, by taking them to a concert. The mother is named Mia at age 45, and her children are 20 year old son named John, 19 year old daughter named Beth, and an 18 year old daughter named Lisa. They were waiting for two other teenagers to accompany them. After waiting for an hour, Mia decided it was getting too late so they left without the other two.
While riding in her car, the girls stated they had to use the restroom. Mia started searching for a place with facilities, so her girls can use the restroom. They came across an eerie place where a re-pass was in session. Mia decided, this would be as good a place as any. They entered the building and everyone was clearing out. Beth and Lisa proceeded to go to the restroom, while John ventured off exploring the building.
Mia waited in the lobby, reading the obituary of the deceased. When Mia walked over to the water fountain to get a drink, she saw a man dressed in a plain, dark suit, standing by the fountain. By the time she approached the fountain, the man disappeared without a trace.
Mia looked around and saw no sign of the man. In fact, she did not hear foot steps walking away or doors opening and closing as he exited the room. Mia contributing this incident to being tired, therefore overlooking it, so she drank from the fountain. When she noticed her children had been gone for quite some time, she looked into the bathroom where they were and saw nothing, but a reflection of the same man in a dark suit. Again, Mia gave this no thought, however, she kept searching for her children.
Mia heard the sound of a drill and screaming, so she investigated the sounds. When she entered the room from where the sounds were coming, the sounds stopped. Mia knew there was someone there, so she spoke out. She said, “I hope this isn’t my children playing games or we will not be going to the concert!” No response, so she spoke again. If there is someone holding my children, you are going to be in big trouble!” Still no response.
Mia noticed there were three doors in the room. She slowly, started
opening all the doors one by one. When she got to the final door, she
hesitated. She regained her composure and proceeded to open the final
door.
She saw her daughter, Beth tied tightly to an embalming
table with her mouth taped, but still alive. She pushed the door back
as far as it could go and realized there was someone behind the door.
Mia reached behind the door and grabbed her daughter Lisa. While
pulling Lisa from behind the door, there was an albino woman about four
feet tall holding on to Lisa with a scalpel to her throat.
Both
girls were weeping, as they were frightened. Mia asked, “where is my
son?!“ The woman did not answer. Mia asked again. Still no response.
Mia looked around the room and saw signs of a struggle. She yelled,
“I’m only going to ask you one more time, where is my son?!” Still, no
answer.
Mia started beating the woman furiously. Lisa untied Beth and they grabbed their mother to leave the hideous place.
In
the car, they hysterically explained to Mia that there was a man in a
dark suit who talked to them, but his lips were not moving. He
influenced the girls to go into that room to watch their brother, John
be tortured. The girls never saw their brother, however, they knew
something happened to him. Beth was restrained because she attempted to
run. Lisa had a scalpel to her throat to keep her quiet. He told the
girls they will not be harmed, but, he will make them part of his clan.
Mia
then, knew there was something grim to the man in a dark suit. She felt
as though, he was watching her while they tormented her children. She
even felt that he was a dark angel, which is said to be an angel of
death.
Mia frantically rushed to the police station to tell them
what happened. Before the police arrived at the building, the place had
changed its form, as it was then a medieval times home. The police
investigated and found nothing but what they call, “antiques.”
Mia
went to her mother’s home and called her pastor, Reverend Tate.
Reverend Tate felt that there is something in the family’s past that
they thought was over, that has come back. As the holy spirit informed
the Reverend, he continued by saying, this past issue has potential to
kill. God has already given your family what is needed to be
victorious, which is courage and strength. God has fought that battle
for you in the first round and won. He will fight this round, too. All
you have to do is show up and let God do the work.
That night,
Mia and her family went home. As they were worried about John, they lit
religious candles, fast, and prayed the entire evening well into the
next evening. This man in a black suit was at Mia’s home, in her
basement. His influence over her daughters had taken effect, as he
attempts to persuade them to come into the basement. They could not see
this man, they could only hear his voice and feel his presence.
Beth
was summoned by the dark angel to come into the basement. Beth went to
Mia and informed her of the occurrence. Mia became vexed and decided to
go into the basement to investigate. When she stepped outside the door
leading to the basement, all she saw was total darkness. It was so dark
that it was highly uncomfortable, therefore, Mia decided to wait until
the morning. However, this entity in the dark basement became violently
persistent.
After securing all the windows and doors, Mia
witnessed her daughter, Beth being dragged towards the basement door,
but could not see the culprit dragging her. Mia grabbed Beth hands and
pulled her daughter away from the entity’s grip. Then Mia saw Beth
acting as though she was in a trance. As she watched Beth, she saw Beth
go to the basement door, unlock it, and open it. Mia yelled, “No! Beth
No!” Then there was a sudden stream of air entering the home. Mia and
Beth did not see anything, however, they felt a strong, uneasy presence
in their home. Mia yelled to Beth, “go wake your sister, while I get
the car keys. We’re leaving!”
Beth returned crying out, “Mom, I
cannot find Lisa! She isn’t in the house!” Mia and Beth searched high
and low for Lisa, but could not find her. Mia asked, “where was she
taking a nap?” Beth replied, “in your room!” They searched again, but
still could not find Lisa.
They left and went to a nearby hotel
for the night. Mia was not at ease. She contacted her children’s
father, Jim. Jim came in a matter of minutes only to see Beth in a
state of shock and Mia weeping.
After Mia explained the ordeal,
Jim was in total disbelief. He stated he would go back to the house to
search for answers. Beth, returning from shock, pleaded with Jim not to
go. Jim promised he will return with John and Lisa, then he left.
As
Jim approached the house, he saw lights flickering and a loud unearthly
sound was present. He became nervous, but continued on, as he wanted to
find his children.
When Jim entered the house, there was a low
pitched, duo voice told him to leave. It said, “Get out or die!” Jim
replied, “I come for my children. You can have the house, but you
cannot have my children!” Just then, the door slammed behind Jim and
there were sounds of calamity in the house. Jim yelled out, “No! No!”
Next, an uneasy silence fell upon the house.”
The following
morning, Mia tried numerous times to call Jim, but did not get an
answer. She frantically contacted Reverend Tate, who rushed to her aid.
He, too was in disbelief. Since people were disappearing, he decided to
check it out. He requested that Beth stay put, while Mia accompany him.
When they arrived at the house, it had changed its form. The
house transformed into a medieval times bar. There were strange people
laughing, drinking, eating, and fighting. The bartender had John’s
face, the proprietor had Jim’s face, and a woman drinking had Lisa’s
face. Neither of them seemed familiar with Mia or the Reverend. Mia
screamed, then fainted. Reverend Tate, picked up Mia and carried her
out.
As they were walking away, Reverend Tate looked back and
saw the house transformed back into Mia’s home. The Reverend was to the
height of being frightened, so he went back to the church to do some
research.
Reverend Tate discovered that in medieval times, there
was an evil presence that took over a family who resembles Mia’s
family. He knew this evil was attempting to consume Mia’s family just
as it did in medieval times and that faith is its destroyer.
The
Reverend went back to the hotel to explain to Beth what had happened.
He told Beth, “You are your family’s only hope. During medieval times
an unsurpassed evil possessed a family and now its after your family.
It will not stop until it has all of you. Do you have faith, my child?“
Beth hysterically replied, “I don’t know! I cannot have faith in
anything after all that has happened!“
The Reverend explained
to Beth how important faith is and informed her, without it, she will
never see her family again. The Reverend sat her down and told her the
stories from the bible about Abraham and Job who had a substantial
amount of faith and what God did for them. The Reverend explained that
in medieval times, Beth was the one who freed her family and now she
has to fight that same fight. Only this time, all she has to do is to
be present and let God do the rest.
Beth was too afraid. She
kept playing the stories from the bible of Abraham and Job in her mind
until it was embedded. She prayed and asked God for the strength to
take a stand. Suddenly, she had faith that God can and will handle this
matter.
Beth grabbed her sword and informed the Reverend, she
was ready for battle. Beth went into that house like a true warrior of
God, to fight the evil that tried to destroy her faith and her family.
When
they entered the home, the entity attempted to intimidate Beth by
sending violent winds through her home. Still, Beth stood strong and
tall. Finally she spoke and said, “I am not afraid! I am a child of God
and he has already given me the victory! I am a soldier in God’s army
and I have my sword as a weapon, which is the word of God! In the name
of Jesus, I rebuke thee! You are not welcomed in my home neither are
you welcomed to me or any member of my family! I will stand until I
cannot stand anymore against you, then God, Almighty will take over!”
There
was laughter in the form of loud thunder and balls of fire was thrown
at Beth to discourage her. Still, she stood tall and strong. It did not
matter what the enemy threw at Beth, she still stood tall and strong.
Beth
stood until she passed out. While she was out, the Reverend saw lights
clashing with the darkness, as though there was a battle between angels
and demons. The Reverend, with a look of terror, started reciting
scriptures from the bible. All of a sudden, the storm was over.
Beth
awoke with streaks of gray hair, as the incidence caused her to gray
prematurely. Her family was standing over her, aiding her, as to them,
she fell and hit her head. Everything was as it was before the ordeal.
Only Beth and the Reverend can account for what happened. Mia, Lisa,
Jim, and John have no recollection of the incidents.
Beth’s
purpose was to become a leader and a true warrior of God. The entity’s
purpose was to prevent Beth from becoming what God had planned for her
to be. With God’s help and the faith of Beth, the enemy was
unsuccessful and rendered “powerless”.
The End!
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OH, Thank you Zabbella!
Nice hub and well written. A way to go...
Nice hub and well written. A way to go...











Zabbella says:
6 months ago
Great writing! At first, I thought it was a new article...it seemed so real. By the third paragraph I realized it was a story.