Writing Beast
60
Extracting a few words
like opening a packet of yeast
adding warm water
a little sugar.
Primordial bubbles in the mind
growing and aching to be released
Play with my little beast.
Add flour
grows firm,
rises.
Rewriting goes like this
spank the dough
gets deflated
cover with a blanket
rises again.
Play with the little beast
pinch , poke
roll it.
Show the doughboy who's boss.
Work it.
Need a stronger leash
for the beast
needs to be released.
Godzilla eats cactus and gets prickly
GRrr
Spirits can't wait for Halloween
Happy Halloween!
Cars have costumes: porque no?
PrintShare it! — Rate it: up down flag this hub
Comments
I like the spanking part. :)
That's great Ralwus, yea I did post it somewhere else on a sandy beach or on a tree? :)
Jess Killmenow, are you volunteering to get spanked? ;)
I am the dough G-ma risen and fallen..awww what a joy to be eaten with such vigor...:O) cute my dear, yummmm..:O) Hugs G-Ma
Hey soon to be Birthday Girl! Yummy dough girl! Many (((Hugs))). :)
Working a story...cool way to describe it! Loved the pics too! Thanks! :)
Thanks, Tom. Glad you liked the pics! :)
You are a very naughty girl. "Show the doughboy who's boss", eh? Gotta work on remembering to keep that respectable distance between us. How much is that again?
aw that was a really interesting piece of work, well done.
Hello Niteriter! Good question. Smiling...;)
Hi Poetlorraine. Thanks Rapunzel! :)
Wow! Great!
Thanks, Festersporling1! Remember to be kind to the little beast.
Another great poem and I simply love the pictures and the metaphors painted with your words. Great Job, Raven!
Grrrrr....thanks Money Glitch....so have you released the beast? ;)
ralwus says:
3 months ago
I think I read this once before somewhere. ;) Love it still