Your Majesty (A Poem)
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I humbly come before you,
Your Majesty, Your Grace.
With an honest heart and honest words,
And to look upon your face.
I come before you your Majesty,
To share something so great.
Tis' what fairytales are made of,
what I wish to be for my fate.
I may not be your Queen,
But I am of the purest blood.
The feelings I have,
When my eyes meet yours,
Are as the heavens above.
The other ladies of the court,
For whom seduce you with lies.
They are after your riches and your fame,
To which I truly despise.
It is your heart of gold,
Tis’ hidden inside so deep.
The one that I am eager to touch,
The one whom I seek.
You carry on your kingdom,
Masking yourself as a GOD,
But in reality you are just a man,
With responsibilities that are unheard of.
How much it must be a burden to carry,
Being betrothed to someone whom you never wished to marry.
You hide behind your armor and your shields.
Or you extravagant robes and jewels,
But I see what is underneath it all,
And those whom do not are just fools.
Upon the ground your members of the court bow,
As everyone yields to your every command.
All others do not hesitate to curtsy,
But for you I cannot help but stand.
Please do not take this as disrespect,
For I respect you oh so dear.
But I see the man underneath the crown,
The one who yearns to hold someone near.
You may have your many concubines,
That fill your animalistic lusts.
But that is all they are good for,
I can fill your trusts.
I can be your everything,
You can be mine too.
And we could share eternity,
By letting me show you,
The King is human too!
PACHUCA213 (copyright) 2009
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Thank you Writing Menace....I was in the mood for a Medieval Poem!
I like the mood and the innocent voice. Very nice.
Is this about your Spanish King on a past life dear Queen? It sounds like it, 'cause only a queen would know. Very nice dear, hugs CC
Jess- thank you....the innocence...I wish I could be that innocent again! =)
Ralwus- Well the whole idea came to me from a movie and I could see from the perspective of Queen Catherine of Aragon (spanish) wife of Henry (the eighth) and how she watched the other women bewitch him while she could see who he really was inside.....something I guess like you said, Only a Queen would know! =)
I knew it had to be Spanish. LOL cool How are ya dear? Love th avatar
It's a beautiful poem. Thank you .
Ralwus- I am okay...been real sick, the kids too! I am trying to get better. Made homemade Chicken Soup today....
Agusfanani- thank you!
hope you are feeling better, lovely hub....
Very MAJESTIC Pachuca :) Thanks.
Thanks Shamel! Its funny because I used to model for a car club called the Majestics! lol
Poetlorraine-thanks I feel much better today!
I know that and I saw the pics too :) You're the glamorous!
Thank you! =) I try~
The JJ has deff not lost her touch in the poetry, my fav girl with words !
thank you very much! When will you be posting your poetry?
I will have the Cabin Girl return tomorrow and I will post my 1st poem about you, twil be my pleasure ; )
I am honored to be the subject of your poetic release...how lovely! I will be looking forward to it! =)
That was beautifully written. Magnificently...This poem makes me think of male celebrities, living the fast life, females come and go...but they're empty without a true companion that will love the fame side of them, and also the simple side of them. It's hard to distinguish who's loving u for u or loving u for ur money. And that's why I remind my boyfriend everyday lol that I first fell in love with a broke man before he became that man that he is now.
Thanks Thanglynn07- what you said is so true, and keep reminding him girl, its good they hear it from time to time. Better to be reminded that we are the good ones who stuck it out thru the broke ass days rather than them ending up getting with some gold digger later who really doesn't care who they are or how they feel...=)
You are an amazing poet - your words were heartrending yet equally beautiful. It was an absolute pleasure reading such a fantastic literature, continue your inspiring work.
Thank you so very much! I am happy that you enjoyed it and hope that you come back for more!
hi, I like your poem..it reminds me of how Jesus Christ
was God incarnate and also man. Though he was a king,
he wasn't a king with concubines etc. but he did walk on this earth and he was tempted, and tried, and he did suffer.
And it is him, in heaven who is there for us to trust.
Your words say a lot. They are beautiful.
Cindyleedavis- Well I guess I can see how someone may take it that way, but no this was a love poem about romantic love, Not godly love. And I agree that Christ was tempted and persecuted but Jesus is GOD's son, the bible plainly states that Jesus would not allow anyone to fall down and perform an act of worship to him because he told everyone that everything must go to his "Father"....so logically Jesus is GOD's son. But thank you for the comment!
I did not think it possible but you just keep getting better
ahhh you are so sweet...glad to see a familiar name on the comment list. We miss you Sandman! thanks for visiting!
writing menace says:
2 months ago
how sweet