Desert Island Dreamer
57Long ago in a dream at dawn
there stood two figures on a beach
the early birds sang their morning song
clouds covered the sun streaming through
far beyond their reach
these two souls were left behind
on their own private island paradise
far away from pressure, stress, and strain
they were left to explore one another
as their lips met softly day and night
Recently I had a dream
that we were those two lovers
we whiled away the hours dancing
slowly across the sand
days turned into nighttime
learning every inch of your body with my hand
Then a rude awakening, the alarm clock loudly ringing
we rolled over on a bed of sand
holding on while our spines are tingling
and forever our hearts are singing
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Comments
yes, thank you, and a lovely dream it was!
You have to have a dream if you want to make a dream come true (:
Lovely, is the word! Thank you !
So calm ! dreamlike and soothing. I liked it very much! Cheers!
Sounds dreamy, Erin,. something about love making at a private hideaway makes it all the more sensual.....great images!!
Thank you all so much for your comments, they are most appreciated.
I’ve had more naps than a cat, and I have had my share of these too. I also have put some into poems. I like this one, so fun and tingly. thanks
really nice poem. I read it twice.
















Pete Maida says:
4 months ago
A lovely dream. To wander along a beach with a special someone is the definition of paradise.